I am 23 years old and I still love Harry Potter and I cherish the fact that so many brilliant writers continue to bless me with their fanfiction by submitting their ideas each and every day.
Excellent and original idea...but im dying to know about the archway...hehe
Author's Response: Thanks for keeping up with my story!! I've just posted chapter 5, just have to wait for validation.
"Oh, I say, that must have been quite a sneeze!" Milius shook his head a bit, trying to clear his ghostly thoughts. HA HA Im really happy milius is back together :) That song at the end always brings tears to my eyes...*sniff* Very touching chapter if I do say so myself. AND THERES MORE!!! WOOT I thought the story was coming to an end chapters ago but Im glad your still writing! WHEEE MORE UPDATES!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed, and liked the song at the end. Lots of people are saying they are happy for Milius' recovery, and that really makes me happy! I'm glad my readers enjoy him so much! Chapter 14 is in queue!
K I just read the other reviews...I do that..is that weird?...anyway 15 chapters sounds nice means two more chapters to wrap things up...n then I can cry coz its over..but Ill get over it..maybe :P...O AND ALSO hmm lets see Hermione and Ron play a part in bringing back Ginny....im thinking THE WANDS!! O YEA!! not sure on specifics but meh..that would ruin surprises if I was right. O and im hanging out for Bella's punishment from the Dark Lord...and I will smile evilly when it comes. MWAHAHA ok im done now...
Author's Response: YAYYYY! You reviewed twice! As far as your guess about Ginny's cure.....I'll never tell ;) Only one more chapter to go, cause chapter 14 has been submitted! YAYYYYY again!
That is just evil. Hehe wouldnt it be funny if Filch came across Bella in the closet...mwahahaha...o anyway as always wonderful update and the pieces will slowly come together..I hope..yay caves next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!! I thought about your suggestion for Filch to find Bella, and used it to a certain extent in chapter 10. So when chapter 10 is verified and you read the bit about Bella.....you'll know I took your idea in mind when writing it. I will be submitting chapter 10 tomorrow morning, so hopefully it will be up by tomorrow night (if Chelsea gets to it and doesn't find anything major wrong). Thanks, as always, for your super review!!
Darnit...hehe I must have a dirty mind because when you first wrote the verses I thought the same thing as Ron....heheheh... *realisation sets in* POOR MILIUS!! *runs n cries in the corner for awhile* ...ok now Ive gained composure... Im glad Ginny will be alright but this way we know Harry is real mad!! HAHAHA BELLATRIX WILL DIE!...(or get badly injured) either way hahahahaha
Author's Response: I kind of figured that THAT was what you thought when I read your review on the chapter with the verses. That's kind of why I thought it would be funny to have Ron think the same thing at first ;) See, all of you reviewers inspire me!! And you haven't seen the last of Milius, how could I ever kill him off?? Harry will be doing some *badly injuring* of Bellatrix, but her final punishment will come from Voldy.
No I didnt forget to review.. :) OK my thoughts. I think bella was portrayed to perfection anyone who reads Harry Potter knows Bella is one for dribbling on and on and on before she gets down to business....and you definately hit that trait on the head. (youd think she would learn) What else.... OH YEA I had to smile when i read this...'Now you've hurt Ron and Ginny. Sweet Ginny who gave me a reason to be happy and live again!'...in all the darkness and anger of that moment you still managed to remind me just how much Ginny means to Harry...was excellent... :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your compliments on how accurately you think I portrayed Bella. I also wanted to let my readers know that no matter what extent of negative emotion Harry's feeling, he still thinks about Ginny, his love. I've begun working on chapter 13 and will try to get it on in a few days. I'm really trying to be careful and make sure I keep everyone in character, and also keep things interesting. A few people thought I made Hermione and Ginny a bit 'weak' in the last chapter, so I tried to give Hermione a chance to shine in this one (obviously I couldn't do the same for Ginny as she is now in a 'deep sleep'. Thanks again for being such a faithful reviewer!! You've been here since the beginning and reviewed each and every single chapter, and to that I say.........YOU'RE AWESOME :)
aww..well i was going to say i liked 'sexy little bookworm' too. As for Ron and Hermione...well im thinking theyll be the cleanest couple ever after all their cold showers. I loved it! The last chapter was all it was meant to be...and I cant wait to read whatever you come up with next :) I loved the last line it fit soo well...I realised it...when you were sleeping. AWESOME! Ok well I had better go or else ill dribble on forever and Im sure youll have tons more reviews to read :)
Author's Response: OH! Your review was so nice :) I'm glad you liked how it all came out. As for what I'm writing next, I've definitely had more requests for a sequel, so I'm already planning it! I hope to have a first chapter maybe by the end of the week, so look for it!
Awesome.. :) ... I love that Harry told Ginny how he felt by himself in the end..that way it wasn't just the quill talking....YAY! ..well least the mystery of whats behind the arch must be coming..cant wait! yay
Author's Response: Yeah.....I thought it would be better for Harry to finish up on his own.....he just needed a little *nudge* in the right direction ;) They will FINALLY explore past the arch in chapter 8, which I'll post over the weekend!!
Short but wonderful :) I could totally picture the look on Ron's face when Hermione kissed him HA! o and YAY we get to see milius again lol just gotta wait for the acceptance...hopefully comes soon :)
Author's Response: I will try to get chapter 6 on today......it is MUCH longer........but don't read it if you dislike mushiness!!! ;)
Aw..I loved it ..very sweet...and I'm glad we got Dumbledore's opinion on this escapade..because that way I have no doubts about the whole Harry being a teacher n Ginny a students thing...Also I read all the other reviews and a lot of people think Ginny will turn out to be pregnant....either way Im not fussed...the thought actually didnt cross my mind..but the point I was going to make is...how would she hide THAT from the family :) hehe Harry would be skinned alive..
Author's Response: to be honest it didnt cross my mind either when i wrote it.....yeah and dumbledore cant really say anything since he knows they have been together for years and were engaged before he even offered Harry the position and maybe Dumbledore knew that they missed each other and expected them to spend some 'quality time' together....after all the man does seem to know everything
Oooo and I forgot....I can't believe Ginny leaving the room didn't even cross my mind...I mean it makes sense....and yet didn't see it coming...ok im done now lol
Author's Response: yay im glad that what an author hopes to do.....
I'm still behind I read a chapter of this story almost every day so I will catch up eventually. But still everyone loves reviews so lately i like to leave one for every chapter no matter how long its been posted up. NOW...where was I .. ok I think it's nice to have these little fill in chapters so readers can play all the little things in their head. My favourite part was probably Harry's comment to Hermione correcting her by saying Mrs Weasley was head of the family rather than Mr Weasley...it's sooo true lol. Anyway after all the reviews I read I'm looking forward to reading Caught :) But first I have some writing of my own to do... 10*..as always
Author's Response: im glad your enjoying the story and i apperciate the reviews....yeah i liked that little exchange too....I almost cut it but ended up keeping it so im glad you enjoyed it.....
I want my honeymoon to be as great as that!!! Loved this chapter...seriously ..Its awesome to see the character interactions because then us readers can fully understand how they 'feel'. Well im off to the movies...will read the next chapter when i come home ha! Fantastic :P)
Author's Response: Me too....I love it to because i think it helps you connect with the characters and make them more real.....I hope your movie was good.....
Awesome :) I was actually going to ask why they couldnt just get married again when i reviewed this time..but then i read the chapter and they already decided to...so there you go.. Also you def did not ruin Moulin Rouge for me...i own it i love it soo much!! Anyway, I loved how when Hermione catches them she doesnt think about the situiation and just starts trying to solve the marriage problem rather than letting them get dressed LOL was great :) anyhoo I think ill go read the next chapter now
Author's Response: hehehe...yeah....
HA! I didnt see the DADA teacher being Harry until you wrote that Dumbledore announced it would still b running. Favourite line from this chapter was definately...'Ginny, the girlfriend/fiancée of Harry Potter the-man-who-did-a-lot-of-stuff.' hehehe Becoz he really has done-a-lot-of- stuff....
Anyway Ginny's reaction...egh..im bad at this.. OK so shes shocked and sick and not in the mood for funny...but hey its Harry....I think she'll forget everyone is watching, go to leap into his arms, and trip over a chair....how embarrassing that would be. *10*
Author's Response: well im glad you didnt guess to early....hehe good guess
They are DOOMED...excellent... absolutely fanterrific! This is the first fic Ive read where it shows exactly what Ginny's brothers would act like (well one would assume) when they find out Ginny is marri...ahem I mean engaged..so it rocked!
Author's Response: lol......yes they are, and its only going to get worse the longer they wait....heheheh
I've never been to Disneyland :( ..so the next chapter can be an insight for me :) OOO I just know youve got Harry planning the best Valentines ever!! I hope Hermione doesnt get too lonely though :( Well keep up the good work !
I agree with Sarebabe ..the bra comment... when Harry says... “I think it went that way,” he said pointing towards a corner as he jumped into his pants....i just had to laugh HAHA ...also the house Phwoar is it huge... and I could picture the elves in their new robes lol it seemed sweet in my head...anyhoo all up very awesome as always.
Author's Response: Yeah i love that part....and i also imagine that the robes that ginny gives them are really cute....Im glad this chapter amused you.....and thanks a million for reviewing.....
I loved it. Hanging off of every word, you write beautifully. *Is extremely envious right now* Seeing it was a Ron?Hermione and Harry/Ginny fic I wasnt sure which couple were getting married to start with...BUT...I think it was great the way you wrote it because I WANTED to read more and find out. So in conclusion excellent first chapter...now i'll go read the next one.
Author's Response: yay....thank you so much *digs toe into the sand*..... I hope you enjoy the rest as much you liked the begining.....
“And here ladies and gentlemen is a future protector of the wizarding world,” Harry teased.
HAHAHA.. that was great. You know I had a feeling the whale thing was a personal experience...it just seemed way to random to not have some kind of inspiration behind it. Whale..hehe cute. Loved the gifts from Harry.. especially the notes...what i would give for notes in my text books..(egh exams) anyway great chapter I'll read the next one soon.
Author's Response: i loved that line...hehehe.....and yes that incident trully did happen to me...thats just the kind of life i live....thanks so much for reviewing....