My favorite fan fiction of all time is 'Take My Heart Away' by Hatsu. It's Hermione/Tom Riddle, and it's incredible in character and refreshing. It's the only Dark/Angst fiction I've liked, and it made me cry. Go read it!
I love it! It's way cute!
A very catching start. I don't remember why I added this to my favorites list, so I'm reading it again. :)
Very good! I can see why I added this story to my favorites. It'll definatly stay there, if the story stays as well written as it has so far. RL/HG always WERE my favorites!
I liked the way you put it. A couple OOC parts, but otherwise, very well done.
YAY! This story has hooks in it! I'm caught!
I like how you add in the clips from the future. It makes it all more intense.
Awww! Sevvie is ADORABLE!
O_O Nice cliffhanger!
O_O I loved it! Very well written, and keeps me on my toes!
I luv it!!! I luv it I luv it I luv it!!!!!! *ish smiling throughout whole chapter* keep it coming!!!!!!!!!
I only feel a little guilty that she's away from ron and harry, because I am a passionate hermione/lupin shipper. In case you hadn't noticed :)
AHHHHHH THERE'S NO MORE CHAPTERS!!!! AHHH!!! *runs around in circles* MUST....READ....NEXT....CHAPTER!!!!!!!
hahahaha lol. yesh--these rock!!!!! and I personally think hermy would accept lupin no matter what. This story ROCKS!! Keep it up!!!
AHHHHHH THERE'S NO MORE CHAPTERS!!!! AHHH!!! *runs around in circles* MUST....READ....NEXT....CHAPTER!!!!!!!
hahahaha lol. yesh--these rock!!!!! and I personally think hermy would accept lupin no matter what. This story ROCKS!! Keep it up!!!
*cries* poor hermione!!! I hate him I hate him I hate him!!!!
James seems like a bit of a jerk in the beginning :) haha! whoot for lupin and intelligence!!!!! Rock on!!!
WHOOT FOR APOLOGIZING TO LUPIN!!!!!
whoot!!! I am a total hermione/lupin shipper so keep up the lupin/hermione!!! I really like your writing, it's good.
I absolutely loved it!!!!! But what did peter tell the maraders for them to be so angry at her at the beginning of the chapter?
That's unexpected, but I still can't wait for more!!!!!!
OH MY GOSH HOW FLIPPIN' UNEXPECTED!!!!!!! but I love sevy enough to not complain. :) keep it up!!!
OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoO!!!!!!! Voldo and Lucie are SO evil!!! AND I absolutely LOVE the remus and hermione 'action' KEEP IT COMING!!!
YES YES YES and....well, YES!!! FINALLY some lupin/hermy action!!! that is such a cute chapter!!! I can really feel the emotion in it, it's really good!! keep on writing!!
OH MY GOSH THAT IS SO FUNNY!!! I like your versions of the song. I'll be singing that all night!!!! haha. that rocks. night!!! and good luck and keep the chapters rolling.