09/22/06
The name's Juliet.
Yes, Juliet as in Romeo and Juliet.
No relation.
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Take My Heart Away by Hatusu
Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Hermione goes back in time with one mission: to kill Tom Riddle before he ever comes to power. A difficult task, correct? An impossible one, she realizes, as a love between them grows stronger than anything she has ever known. Now Hermione has a choice to make. Will she condemn the Wizarding world to almost certain destruction, or will she take the life of the one boy she has ever loved?
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 5: Late Night Suspicions
Ooh... She doesn't trust him much, does she?
~Juli
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 6: Sunset Tears
Oh! I thought she was going to tell him for a minute there. That wouldn't have been good now, would it?
~Juli
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 7: Enemies Closer
Ooh... Ouch. Great chapter - nice suspense. The plot thickens... If I may dare to use such a cliched term.
~Juli
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 8: Best For Them
Yes, Harry did seem to notice that, didn't he? Told Dumbledore something about that, I seem to recall. Voldemort reminds me a bit - a bit of me. Or something like that.
~Juli
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 9: Empty Space
Oh, wow.
That was spectacular. Beautiful moment, and so... So right.
Tom reminds me too much of me.
Scary thoughts there.
~Juli
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 10: Sillver Slippers and Peacock... Hats
Oh... So true.
Excellent. Love this chapter... Hermione/Helen so worried, Tom so dangerous - and this Minerva / Dumbledore situation! It adds a nice spark to an empty spot in the story
~Juli
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 11: Moonlight Masquerade
Oh! How could she do that to Tom? How could she?
*gasp* I'm taking the side of Tom Riddle. *shudder*
How could YOU leave me hanging like that? Must keep reading, don't have time for any more review...
~Juli
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 12: Moonlight Masquerade, Part II
Oh... That was wonderful.
I SOOO want to be Hermione.
~Juli
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 13: Of Puzzles and Riddles
Now there's the Dumbledore we know - sharp. Too sharp, perhaps.
Wonderful chapter.
~Juli
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 14: Price of Immortality
Woah.
That was wonderful. This is an awesome story... I can't wait for the next chapter. You are doing wonderfully, don't worry.
~Juli
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 15: Pieces of Agony
Oh! *tear* This is definently going on my favorites list. Wonderful... Absolutely great. I love the "thousand pieces of agony" part.
~Juli
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 15: Pieces of Agony
Wait... It stops?!? I so didn't realize this was the last chapter so far!
You're going to drive me mad, you are. Write quickly! This is absolutely magnificent.
~Juli
Date: 11/20/06 Title: Chapter 17: Worst Nightmare
Awww, how sweet!
Loved this chapter, too... It brings up a lot of questions, but you've moved your characters along spectacularly... I love how grown up Hermione seems, how elegant Tom is becoming, and how Malfoys are... Always Malfoys. xD Great one, again!
~Juli
Date: 11/04/06 Title: Chapter 16: See You Cry
Wow.... This was awesome. Perfection to the utmost. You did excellently with the Quicksilver Quills, and you deserved every bit of it - This has become my favorite story EVER.
The development of emotion in this chapter was incredible - the soft side of Tom Riddle that we never imagined could appear, the side we all knew would come out, but at the same time never suspected... Wow. I loved it. When he said her name - well, that was like magic or something. Spectacular.
I also loved this part -
“Stop blubbering, you utter moron, and let me get a word in. What I did last night was a huge mistake, but I know that the House of Slytherin will follow me whether I care for the girl or not. Who are you, to question my authority? Don’t kid yourself, Malfoy.You will follow me to the gates of Hell if I ask it of you and you will do it without question. Is that not true?”
That was incredible, and so fully in the character of Tom Marvolo Riddle that I was blown away. Amazing job with the utter scintillation of that dialog...
The whole piece literally glows. Jo would be proud, I think.
Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter! You might kill some of us.
~Juliet
Author's Response: Wow what a wonderful review! Thanks so much for all of your support; you have no idea how much it helps me. :) Ah yes, Tommie does have a soft side, doesn\'t he? I love that Tom Riddle kid... he\'s an amazing creature, no?
Ah the little passage you quoted above-- though less than syntactically aesthetic (now that I look at it), I really tried hard to convey a little bit of \'Lord Voldemort\' in Tom\'s character there... glad that you think I pulled it off. :D
Ah, I\'m kind of glad Jo doesn\'t know this story exists... I cringe to think of her reaction to a Voldemort/Hermione story...
:P
Thanks again!
Date: 12/17/06 Title: Chapter 18: Black Rose
Wow.
*breaths* That was utterly amazing. You kept me guessing until the last minute... I loved it.
Wish I could say more, but I seem to have become speechless with amazement.
Wow.
~Juli
Date: 10/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Dementor's Kiss
Ooh... This is wonderful. I love it - The swallowing part goes so well... Beautiful. Bravissima!
~Juli
Date: 10/18/06 Title: None
Ah! Interrupted... xD Very entertaining story you've got going here. Good work!
~Juliet
Date: 10/18/06 Title: None
Ooh... Getting scandalous, now, aren't they? Can't wait to read on!
~Juli
Date: 10/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: 1
Very good - I liked the subtle hinting about the future. Very strong.
Date: 10/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Veil
Ooh... I like the sailing part a lot, made me thing of a ship's sail, and with a veil... Well, in short, this is amazingly beautiful. Wonderful poem!
~Juli