Very well written, a lovely story indeed. Looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Thank-you!
This is very good writing! I like the way you let your story take it's time, not rushing into anything to fast. Keep up the good work.
That was a really good chapter and I'm definitly looking forward to the next one. It was very well written and didn't move to fast forward which is a problem with a lot of fictions. Well done!
Author's Response: LOL - it's hard to keep the brakes on - more chapters coming soon.