11/06/04
http://overactive-imagination.net/untoldstory/
Hey guys! I'm an old time member... and ex-KGB, to boot (aka an ex-PI beta... sorry I had to quit, but it was taking too much time out of my life! That period of my life was pleasant, but it is definitively in my past...). I've been out of the fandom for a few years, but recently I've been working over a large story written an alternative ending to DH as the springboard. SCROLL DOWN AND READ "THE DUNNEST SMOKE OF HELL" at the bottom of the page. Please read, review, and check out my website! Thanks.
[Report This]
Patronous Light by Amalynne
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: What if Harry really didn't conjure the patronous in the POA, what if it was really his father. In his 6th yr James gets a hold of a time turner. Mishap leads to madness as Prongs tries to alter tha past and save his son's life.
Date: 11/07/04 Title: Chapter 1: McGonagall's Doubts
Interesting concept, and a good start. Please continue! One thing: McGonagall seems to speak a bit too casually at times; I think of her as a bit more formal...
Author's Response: I'll try to up McGonagall's vocabulary, tis a hard thing to enhance for one of such... je ne sais pas... hmm. Oh well. Hope you like my next chappie.
Date: 11/08/04 Title: None
that is a great start, what you have. good POV for ron, and a great opening... makes me want to come back for more. i have one thing: your stories need just a bit of editing. maybe you need a beta?
Faith [In the Hands of a Child] by Seren
Rated: Professors •Summary: "Regardless of what God, or Gods, they worship, or even if they don't," whispered Luna dreamily, "everyone prays." Ginny Weasley lies broken and bleeding by her own hand. But her friends and family love her, and they will lead her home. Not a death fic. Rated for graphic self-mutilation... but for a very good cause.
Date: 11/28/04 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot
that was very powerful. i espcecially felt the part where she cut herself for each person she wasn't good enough for... a strong metaphor. excellent work, seren.
Because You're You by polka spots
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Incredibly fluffy, incredibly romantic. A series of one shots about that certain moment when our favourite genius and red head finally share their feelings.... *Completed as soon as part 4 is posted*
Date: 11/24/04 Title: Chapter 1: Thoughts
that was lovely! the thoughts are perfectly arranged... please continue.
Author's Response: I sure will! I only wish my thoughts could be perfectly arranged.... I'm so frazzled! Thanks for your nice review!
Padfoot Prohibited by Liveley
Rated: •
Summary: Giving high school essays a Marauder twist, this fiction is centered around the idea that some seniors in high school are require to write a letter to incoming freshman before they graduate. At Hogwarts, Seventh Years are given an assignment to write such a letter for the new First Years. Sirius decides to actually take an assignment, well seriously...sort of. He decides to look back on his entire Hogwarts years and write down his list of things not to do at Hogwarts.
Date: 01/11/05 Title: Chapter 4: Slytherin Skirmish
very entertaining. one thing: why isn't james the seeker like in the books?
Author's Response: Tell me where in the books it says James is a seeker and I'll answer that question for you. It says he is seeker in the 1st movie, but I only go by what I hear from JKR's mouth (which was "James was chaser." in one of her interviews).
Date: 01/11/05 Title: Chapter 7: Quidditch, Marauder Style
this was way too fun to read. please update. i especially like raven; she sort of challenges sirius.
Author's Response: Really? Good, I'm glad you like her. I figured most people would immediately label her a Mary Sue, but I'm trying hard not to make her so. Sirius has to have someone turn him down, ya know?
Date: 01/30/05 Title: Chapter 9: Dumbledore Dare
HAHA! dating services. this is hilarious!
Author's Response: Thanks very much!
Date: 03/07/05 Title: Chapter 12: Purple Hazing
i bet the common room looks great now. i didn't really get the part with sirius and twyla, but i loved how remus told raven and refuses to reveal his reasoning. great work.
Author's Response: I'm sorry, what part about Sirius and Twyla? I just had to have someone come along, because I figured it would be too obvious for the dungeons to be completely deserted. Sorry I confused you. Let me know what part and I'll try to explain I guess??
Date: 01/17/05 Title: Chapter 8: Diarrhea of the Mouth
james! naughty! that was great.
Author's Response: Teehee... He is naughty isn't he? I like it.
Date: 02/24/05 Title: Chapter 11: Ooh, Barracuda
i agree that the barracuda part wasn't your best, but the sirius/raven part was good.
Swapping with Snape by Loz
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Thanks to an ingenious plan of Dumbledore's, Severus Snape and Harry Potter swap bodies. They're doing this to fight Voldemort.
Dumbledore says it's the only way Harry can survive. But can Snape get over the trials and tribulations of being a teenager again, and can Harry battle unruly Potions students and greasy black hair?
In short - will either of them survive?
The latest chapter is shown from Snape's point of view.
Date: 02/03/05 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-One
oOo cho is suspicious! good.
Date: 02/24/05 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Three
the captain pookers thing seemed a bit forced. try something less ridiculous next time. other than than, harry was perfect, planning to investigate.
Date: 02/14/05 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty Two
it's good to see harry finally adapting to severus-like behavior.
Date: 01/29/05 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty
just read many chapters... the anger is perfect. and snape acting like a teen is spot on, as well!
To Sever the Lining from a Cloud by Textualsphinx
Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Summary: This tale of the teacher whom everyone loathes,
Accounts for his anger and elegant clothes.
It dripped through my mind when, too scantily cloaked,
I got caught in a rainstorm and throughly soaked.
WARNING: Despite the glints of humour, you will need a handkerchief.
Date: 01/18/05 Title: Chapter 1: One shot
ubelievable. there are no words that give you enough credit for your accomplishments. beautiful job.
The Secret thoughts of Hermione Granger by Hermiones_Revenge
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Hermione describes her Ron troubles in this series of hilarious journal entries, notes passed in class, and lists. And...Mrs Norris is a duck?
NOTE: This was written quite some time ago, in my younger years. It was my first story...which should explain a lot.
Date: 11/20/04 Title: Chapter 2: I have no luck
ahh! this is too fun to read. i know how it is w/ homework, but please, please, write!
Date: 11/28/04 Title: Chapter 4: Detention isn't always bad
the end! nooo!!! lol please right another one that was most enjoyable.
Author's Response: *twitch*twitch* w-r-i-t-e.
I shall! Thanks!
Date: 11/24/04 Title: Chapter 3: Not my day
yay! i love reading this. write more. again.
Author's Response: oh, i shall (laughs maniacally, then gets weird looks from family and stops abruptly)
Time for Regrets or Retribution? by ElspethBates
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: ABANDONED * Harry's home after the terrible ordeal in the Department of Mysteries. It's time for him to sort himself out and decide if it's... Time for Regrets or Retribution.
Date: 12/06/04 Title: Chapter 3: Getting out of the house
wonderful as usual. still love the magic idea. so yes... i have no qualms since you've already read them :)
Date: 11/20/04 Title: Chapter 2: First Day Home
it's me! lovely job. when you have more, you know where to find me...