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09/27/06

Reviews by Rob Potter

Our Founding Fathers by hfan2002

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: "Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs...Noble men, working tirelessly to help a new generation of lawbreakers." -- The first instalment of the "Complete User Guide to Marauding." Sets down the general beginnings of what was to be an unbreakable friendship among four boys. The marauders in their first year, ah, is as expected to be filled with pranks, detention, full moons, and incidents with a new foe, Snape, as they grow as friends, and come to accept certain differences between them. As said before, all in a days work for the marauders. Please R&R

Reviewer: Rob Potter Signed
Date: 09/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: Of Trains and Pranks

A great story. I have seen alot of stories here, but This is, by far, the best. You must have done your research, or have a great imagination. You should consider sending this to Rowling and ask for her oppinion. GOOD JOB.
-Mr. Potter
Reviewer

St.Lace's, Lemonhouse by Bartzina

Rated: Professors •
Summary: The gang goes to a magical mystery Christmas party in London, and somewhere along the line, Rita and Hermione have themselves a truly enchanting little encounter.

Reviewer: Rob Potter Signed
Date: 09/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: 1/1

1 word: BEAUTIFUL this was excellent

How Could You Betray Us? by midnight_me

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is a poem about how the Marauders feel when Peter betrays them.

Reviewer: Rob Potter Signed
Date: 09/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: How Could You Betray Us?

OH MY. This is the most heart driven poem I have ever heard. Bravo!
-Mr. Potter
Reviewer

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. =)

No Turning Back by aliweasley

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: After the last battle, can the survivors deal with the pain of losing their most beloved friend?

Not fully a romance, but with just enough fluff thrown in it can qualify. It is definetly a bittersweet story with moslty Ron/Hermione but with a teensy bit of Harry/Ginny. Bring a tissue! One-shot. Fully revised, finally! R&R

Reviewer: Rob Potter Signed
Date: 10/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: No Turning Back

i have a little issuse with this. ok, now, according, to your story harry died when, after shoving voldemort throught the veil, voldemort pulls him in with him. N,ow if harry is throught the veil, how can they bury him in godrics hollow. there is no body. please explain, I am confused.

Mr. Potter
Reviewer

Author's Response: You\'re right, there was no body. It was a memorial service of sorts, with, well, a memorial there next to his parents graves. However, there are several places in the story where I seem to have mentioned Harry lying next to his parents, so I will get right on fixing that. Thanks for catching it! Hey, no one\'s perfect!! :) I really do appreciate constructive critism people. This is a wonderful example. Let me know if you find something wrong, or if you just don\'t like it.

Reviewer: Rob Potter Signed
Date: 10/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: No Turning Back

other than my comment in my 1st review, it was a very beautiful story. thank you for writing it.

Mr. Potter
Reviewer

Author's Response: Thank you very much, and I really did appreciate the comment in your 1st review. But I suppose I don\'t mind compliments!!

What Have We Become? by midnight_me

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: After learning what has happened to his friends, Remus wonders what the Marauders have become.

Reviewer: Rob Potter Signed
Date: 10/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: What Have We Become?

Wow! This was a great poem. Bravo. I'm looking forward to seing more poems in the future.

Mr. Potter
Reviewer

P.S. I encourage all authors and poets alike
to say what you think of my reviews.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Their Sacrifice by h3art0f1nk

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A poem of the death and sacrifice of Lily and James...

Reviewer: Rob Potter Signed
Date: 10/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: Their Sacrifice

Awesome poem.

Mr. Potter
Reviewer

P.S. please let me know what you think of my review of your work.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I\'m not really sure what you meant in your P.S. But... thanks anyway!