About me: Um, nothing much to say, I'm your typical 16-year old brunette from the States. My name is Marie...I like to write, vaguely depressed... There's really not much to say about that. Though if you would be kind enough to review my stories I would appreciate it greatly. I am also a proud member of both Gryffindor and SPEW on the beta forums. Oh and I do some beta-ing too. If you want to contact me, just click the handy little link thing that says Contact and I'll get it, eventually...
Oh! And I do post my stories on other sites. I have the same name on fanfiction.net, but that account has been rather abandoned because I don't get any reviews. And on HPFF I have the account under the name Avada Kedavra.
Story Updates
A Muggle in Hogwarts:Chapter 11 submitted (finally!) it's quite short, a little over 1,000 words. Sorry, but adding more scenes to that chapter felt wrong. I'm 1,000 words into Chapter 12 (The Aftermath) and that will be submitted after Chapter 11.
Les Malefices D'esprit: Chapter 5 got accepted, working out the basics on Chapter 6...
I'm truly sorry to the readers of my chapter fics. I finally did do an update, but was it in one of those? No, it was some one-shot about Umbridge. *Headdesk* I'm sort of in a writer's block and I greatly apologize, plus I'm under some minor stress to find a job (me and my excuses) AND I have summer biology to take (so I can take AP Bio next year), not to mention practising for my driver's liscense (ah, to be 16) so I am somewhat weighed down. I hope you can bear with me, and the fact that these fics may not be updated for another month...
"Does it rhyme? Do I WANT it to rhyme?" For some reason that one made me laugh really hard. Keep up the good work! With a little bit of luck I'll be able to skip college and become an evil villain full time. hmm...Are there any evil villain schools?
Author's Response: Well DO you want it to rhyme? Hmm...evil villain schools...don't think so, unless someone wants to open one!
You're on a roll today, 3 chapters for 3 different stories submitted at the same time, and they're all good!
Author's Response: I submitted them all at different times actually, but they all got accepted all at once! Glad you think they're all good!
I just had to re-log in to submit this review so you better read it! GRRR, JK, i'm not frustrated at you. I loved "Number sixteen is not a question-how do you feel about that?" I merely felt amused so I guess I wouldn't be a very good evil villain, unless I was the JOKER! Okay that was a bad joke....bleah.
Author's Response: Don't worry, I have to re-log in every few reviews (*clicks 'submit'*=please log in!) Haha...yeah.
It's good, though kind of short. Nothing really happened to move anything along, though I guess that's supposed to come later. :-)
Really good start! Keep up with it! I like the description and the imagination! :-)
Oh, yay! I get a special thanks! LOL, though I didn't see that many changes in the story. For instance, I think the cookies shaped like Mr. Weasly would have been a hit. JK JK JK, great job!
Author's Response: Well, you deserve a special thanks. You really helped me and I enjoyed your betaing. I'm glad you liked my story. Thanks for helping me and for reviewing.
haha, isnt' White Castle only in America? Oh well, it will be interesting to see the PG rated version. Keep it up! Ron and Harry in jail, I bet they have even worse food.
It's alright, though I get the feeling that it has ended before it even began. Harry's feelings for Ginny seem almost abrupt and awkwardly forced into his head. And why isn't Harry dealing with the aftermath of his battle with Voldemort? I find it a little bit unbelievable that he would go back and start trying new Quidditch moves and admiring his Chaser. Still the grammar and everything was pretty good. I'll give it a 6/10.
DUDLEY HAS TO WEAR A COTTON CANDY COSTUME! or...THE OOTP HAS TO WORK AT GRUNNINGS! or maybe just Ron and Hermione...but still...
I LOVED this chapter! (it's most fun, but you probably already knew that) "Do you think I look like cotton candy?" HHAHAHHHAAHAHA!
Author's Response: Dudley wears a cotton candy outfit? My, you might be onto something...
YAY! You used the cotton candy outfit idea! "Well of course they threw stones at you," OMG, that was great. Another perfect 10!
Author's Response: I loved the cotton candy outfit idea and thank you for coming up with it!
This may be too late to submit ideas, but how about an actual game of whatever that sport was? With the frisbee? I can see Harry and Ron "accidentally" using the frisbee to break some drill machines...
Odd, yes, but I appreciate it. I also like how Harry cries out "Screw Diggory I want Sirius back!" ...or something like that.
"but that's how dogs do it!" Hahahahahahahhaha, that was great! a 10!
Author's Response: Thank you! I have rarely written anything funny, (and I am normally not a funny person in general,) so...
Limey, there aren't any paragraph things. LOL. oh, and to the author, awesome chapter! Anyone wouldn't be able to take their eyes off Lupin. "As long as there a pool down there." LOLOLOL! It was great!
"Your son is now accepted for a role in 'I'm a baby whale' on Broadway"! Mwahahaha, I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!
Well, I'm the second reviewer and I think you did an awesome job on it! I like how both Harry and Ron are able to relate about the dream situation. I can't wait to find out how Ron and his "rat" are connected!
Author's Response: You're so kind! Thank you! The connection between Ron and his "rat" won't come into play until much later, I'm afraid. I've submitted the second chapter, so please come back to read! If there's anything you don't like, don't hesitate to tell me, the more mean you are...the better! ;P
Since there's no place to review on the author page, i'll do it here. Your banner is awesome! Good job!
First reviewer, yay! I love this chapter a lot! Though I did notice a few grammatical errors (Professor is capitalized and past, not passed) but it's otherwise good. You have a great writing style! I look eagerly for more. But did Harry accept Malfoy's duel? Or do we have to wait until the next chapter to find that out?
Author's Response: Yay! First reviewer is my fav writer! So honored! Thank you for the help (my pet beta told me the same too, but I sort of forgot...sorry!) And about Harry...muahahaha! You'll just have to wait and see!
Ooh, I like this a lot. Especially the part with Bellatrix's initiation. I like seeing things from a new point of view. I also like how she outlined the plans of the Death Eaters.
Author's Response: Thanks, I was trying to show her rationalisation of things.
Yes! Second Review *Goes into mad dance of delight.
Yes! That scene was really necessary, it was great that you added it. Wow, GringottsVault711 wrote a lot. BTW, if you go [color=red][/color] and then copy it, everytime you need to add something you just go paste and then go to the middle of it. I also like how you added the bit about only Lily knowing about Remus's "condition". How did she find out, though?
Author's Response: *cackles evilly* HA! Even my beta cannot know! Even though she'll know ahead of everyone else... hmm... well, it's coming up!