10/16/06
I'm working on a Ginny/Harry fic, kind of a songfic to the song "Hallelujah" by Lenny Cohen. Looking for a beta at the moment actually. Otherwise I'm just an ordinary HP-freak of a girl, wondering daily about the mysteries of Book 7.
SHIPS: HG/DM, HG/RW, HP/GW, JP/LE
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~The Truth Uncovered~ by psychofreak
Rated: •Summary: This is Ronald Weasley's last year at Hogwarts and has recieved everything he once saw in the Mirror of Erised. He's become Head Boy, holds the Quidditch Cup, and actually looks good. But there's someone missing in the Mirror.
Date: 11/06/06 Title: Chapter 8: Taking it Too Slow
You have to be careful about these words:
Their - there
We'll - well
it's - its
We're - were - where
Date: 11/06/06 Title: Chapter 8: Taking it Too Slow
and intimate and intimidate is two completely different things!
You should get this beta'd
An Unlikely Pair by Kyte
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Draco Malfoy finds something out about Hermione Granger and Harry Potter, that other people must not find out about! But in return for not telling anyone Draco is asking for something...
Date: 10/27/06 Title: Chapter 4: Understanding
You should either get a beta to read through your stories and chapters or change your beta. And chapter 3 is only 400 and something words. But great idea, though. I like the story
Date: 10/27/06 Title: Chapter 14: Escaping
"She through her arms around his neck and kissed him softly."
She through her arms around his neck? Huh? If you're not english or american I can understand that you have a few misspellings, but this one was just... wrong. I'm sorry I'm harsh, but I always get frustrated by misspellings and wrong grammar. =) Just send your full story to a beta and resubmit it, and everyone will be happy.
A Push in the Right Direction by Weasley Mom
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: It's the summer between Harry's 5th and 6th year and he is not dealing with the loss of Sirius. Perhaps all he needs is a little push from beyond the veil.
Date: 10/31/06 Title: Chapter 3: Ron's Reaction
LOL I'd like to hear abrit say "Omigosh". Hilarious and unrealistic at points.
Why Can't I by MissTomFelton
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Ron takes Hermione on the walk of her life (btw, please review)
Date: 10/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Song Fic to Liz Phair's Why Can't I
Woah. That's all I can say. Great POV, but you should have re-read it, and corrected your spelling/grammar mistakes.. There are some flaws here and there. But the story was great! I love how Ron is really self-secure!
Date: 10/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: Song Fic to Liz Phair's Why Can't I
That's such a good story! This should be a part of HBP. Like a missing moment or something that everyone could make their own of.
Date: 10/28/06 Title: None
The dialogues seem a little wrong, I mean, would you talk like that when you are around people?
“Ok Draco. I’m glad you like it. I’ll put on the necklace while I’m waiting for you to come down.”
I for sure don't talk like that. But anyways, great story.
No Mistletoe Required by muggle4ever
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Well the name sort of says it. Hermione leaves her diary open ron reads it. im not going to ruin the rest. SORRY i dont have time to type up the rest i have it writen but not typed. im really sorrry!!!
Date: 10/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: never leave your diary open
Aww that's such a sweet story!
It's a Small World, Isn't It? by powerofthelightningbolt
Rated: •Summary: Lily left James, but when he's on a date eight months later, guess who he meets, and that person has a very big surprise!
Date: 11/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Small World
Sirius was someone with a polyjuice potion=O
But who the heck died? "Sirius"? Which of the DE's would be stupid enough to killone of their own? Or maybe they thought it was the real Sirius.. Hmm
Draco's Transformation by Shena
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry and Ron are sick of Malfoy bullying people around and come up with a plan to stop him. What they don't realise is that spells can't change a person but only cause consequences. HGDM
Date: 01/27/07 Title: Chapter 15: Draco's Final Transformation
Nice story, a little wierd at the ending ( ‘Hermione, would you be my girlfriend?’ ‘Yes, of course!’), it doesn't seem right, that's all.
Also, you should get this beta'd. There are a lot of grammatical flaws through the story and also quite a lot of misspellings.
I don't mean to be rude or anything, really, I enjoyed the story! It's meant as constructive critique.
Krissa
Author's Response: Thankyou Krissa, I know you are right. I;ve had similar responses a lot so I definitely should get betas for my fics. And work on some of those scenes.
Thankyou and glad you enjoyed the plot!
Shena
Hagrid's Pink Umbrella by Elizabeth90
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Sometimes, life just becomes too much for Harry Potter. When he's lost in depression and huddled in the rain, can Ginny cheer him up? R&R, please. One-shot!
Date: 11/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot
Ginny is as In Character as she could ever be! Great job!
The Unseemly Proposal by sparx
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The reign of Voldermort comes to an end, and with it ends the prestige and power Lucius Malfoy once had in the Wizarding World. In order to regain the respect of his fellow wizards and to make them believe that he has turned over a new leaf (which he actually hasn't) and has graciously accepted muggles and Mudbloods, Lucius asks Hermione, a Mudblood, to marry his son, Draco, a pure-blood. Obviously, they both refuse, but Lucius isn't going to give up easily. After all, he wants his status back. He still has a few tricks up his sleeve and is determined to play match-maker. What happens next is a series of events that serve only to bring Hermione and Draco closer, both literally and figuratively speaking. Read to find out how this one unseemly proposal causes absolute chaos in their lives! THIS STORY IS NOT HBP and DH COMPATIBLE! Hey all! Check out my personal info for the expected date of the next update. =)
Date: 10/22/06 Title: The Unseemly Proposal
Well, I hope they validate it quickly, cus I can't wait!=D
This was the first fanfic I read, so the standard was set pretty high!
Please don't wait another 5 months before submitting the next chapter then! It's 5 months today actually=)
Peace on earth.
Author's Response: Wow Krissa, thanks for counting, and sorry having made you count...
Date: 10/17/06 Title: The Unseemly Proposal
Well, you better not wait another five months for the next chapter! I can't wait untill it's approved! This story is probably the best one in MNFF
Date: 10/22/06 Title: The Unseemly Proposal
Well the Poetry and Angst mods have already started updating. The ones here on Romance are probably reading them right now, I mean, the chapters are pretty long, so it will take a while for them to validate them all.
We'll just have to be patient!=)
Oh and sorry about whatever kept you away from writing! Making you stop writing should be a crime!
Date: 12/23/06 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34- Revelations
:D:D:D:D:D
Awesome! The best Christmas present so far, really, this is much better than getting the title of HP7(which I think is quite bad), so please PLEASE continue=D
Merry Christmas
Date: 12/17/06 Title: The Unseemly Proposal
Do the mods have this rule that says: use at least two weeks to accept TUP? They're so SLOW! I'm *this* close to applying for the mod-job just so that I can accept this chapter...!
Date: 11/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit
SO, I was wondering if next chapter comes inmid-november or mid-december ;)
Date: 11/19/06 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33- More Rumors
Oh and by the way! I LOVE this story:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Rock on!