Nice!I really like ur ideea,but Hermione getting drunk like that,it's ...i duuno,not like Hermione!
Author's Response: Thanx. haha I know, but Hermione is pressured by other things (comes in later chapters ).... and haha. come on she's older, she changed (a bit)
Ok,the plot is nice,great love story,but i'm not exactly 17,and i really am a hp fan,and I'm sure JK didn't want 2 include sex in her story!(u could have at least put all of the details in only 1 chapter).Oh,and Draco's eyes are GREY,i dunno y a whole lot of ppl say they are blue.Anyway.nice story,on the whole,and sorry if my review disturbed you!
Nice story!And i'm glad there's no porn stuff in it,coz i'm just sick of that kind of Hp fics.Good luck with ur next story!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Nice.Make sure to update soon.As for the baby,there should be twins or triplets.Girls,obviously.Or you could make it tragical,and Hermione may lose the baby(s),Lucius drives them away,they have a fight etc. etc.But just don't mind me,i really like ur ideeas,no matter what they are!
It's nice,the idea with the marriage was funny enough,but the sex thingy is not quite JKs style.Oh,and why does Hermione have to be a Slytherin now?I mean,she could continue being a Gryffindor.But,on the whole,it's a comic story
Yes,now that i've gotten over the first shock,it's a hilarious story.Only,if u want 2 become a writer,make sure ppl like my little brother don't read ur books!;)
Hermione pregnant?!Not fair!I like ur story,on the whole,but I'm starting 2 forget the main character is Hermione,the Hermione JK invented!Or that this is Harry Potter fanfic.Anyway,how old are u,after all?
It's nice,the idea with the marriage was funny enough,but the sex thingy is not quite JKs style.Oh,and why does Hermione have to be a Slytherin now?I mean,she could continue being a Gryffindor.But,on the whole,it's a comic story
Author's Response: Thankyou~ The perspective I'm writing from isn't "what would JKR have her/him do?" its "what would make this funnier?", or "what could add more choas to the situation?" This story isn't meant to be realistic--if it was, there wouldnt be a Draco/Hermione relationship at all! :) Thanks for your review, and please keep reading! :)