Fantastic story - I loved The Secret Thoughts of Hermione Granger" as well. I'm adding my review to this chapter 'cause it was my favourite. The flamingos were brilliant! And I totally love the Llama Song.
BTW - The Llama Song is set to the tune of "I am the Very Model of a Modern Major-General" from "Pirates of Penzance" ;-)
Author's Response: aAah, I see. Thanks - look for an update soon, as I am pretty much snowed in right now and have nothing else to do!
Wow - the story has progressed nicely. I feel sorry for Remus, but I can understand why he acted as he did - its part of the reason I'm attracted to him. Oh well, at least he is available for me now ;-) I'm looking forward to, and dreading, when Remus finds out about Lucretia and Sirius...
A great start Lou. Enough mystery to get me hooked straight up! And a lot of Remus to keep me happy. *Sigh* Yum, yum, yum!