Ha! That's all I have to say. Very cute ending. (Yay! Things are finally getting spicy... Like mexican cheese)

And ha!

Author's Response: ooooo... I like Mexican food! ~woomama

You have a very unique writing style which I thoroughly enjoy reading. Obviously so do more than 800 other people, from the amount of reviews that this story has received, but I always find as a writer that each review is special and so I thought I would throw my two cents in for you anyway.
Your writing flows beautifully and has a touch of sarcasm buried underneath which I love to pick up on and smirk at. I hope the rest of your chapters have just as much effort and enthusiasm poured into them, and I look forward to seeing where you take us with this.

~Beauty Fades

Author's Response: This was such a lovely review, thank you so much :D And it really heartens me to hear that you enjoy my writing style, because that's what makes me ME as a writer. Each review certainly is special, and thank you for your two cents :D

Gah! Hermione?! That's bloody brilliant! Surry I haven't reviewed about anything earlier but there wasn't really anything to drone on and on about.

But Hermione? I still can't get over it. Bloody brilliant. Lol.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Love the first chapter. The way you describe things is amazing. You've got a real talent.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I\'m so glad you enjoyed it!

Very cute. I'm not easily amused when it comes to the humor section so don't be offended when I tell you that I didn't exactly laugh out loud. I did smile a lot though.

Yay! Kudos for you! Anyway' cute story. There is my review.

Pretty cool one shot. Makes me laugh to read all the reviews saying they can't wait for you to update.

Hm.... *quick glance at summery* Says one shot. Underneath it says complete.

Why do I get the feeling there won't be another chapter? ;)

Hmm... I want to keep reading to see if this improves at all, like some stories do, but right now your writing and descriptions seem rushed and therefore very elementary since they also lack original dialouge and descriptions.

Hopefully, it was just the "Chapter One Illness" that most new or fairly new writers suffer from and it will pass in these later chapters. I'm off to check it! :)

*Beauty Fades

Good start. Hannah sounds positively 'dorable and I can tell that she'll probably be brought up again since you seemed to put so much epmhasis on her.

Also, I was viewing your profile and I noticed under your description of yourself that you mentioned you were a Christian, and I just wanted to say 1. how encouraging it is to see you openly proud of that fact and displaying it, and 2. that I am a Christian as well.

Anyhoo... -cough- Back.. on.... topic.. (O.o) good start!

:D

*Beauty Fades

Author's Response: Charm Is Deceitful... Dear BF, Thanks for taking the time to review. Yes, Hannah will be back, although the publication of DH has contradicted my portrayal of her. Interestingly enough, I have never had a Harry Potter fan write me any kind of prejudiced or disparaging comment because I\'m a Christian (which is obvious from my user-name anyway). But messages from fellow-Christians who are glad I\'ve gone public are a regular event. Obviously Harry Potter is a fandom that attracts the right kind of people! Regards, GhV

Wow. That was extremely long but still very good. I was mad at myself after I reviewed to it last time and totally forgot to remember the title. -headbang-

Once again, your millions of paragraphs are all filled with amazing discriptions and worthy of the extremly... longness... (o.0 Yes I do write stories, why do you ask? hehe...) of each one.

I am indeed anxious of what will happen when Sirius and -checks strange name- Erika meet. Be sure not to rush it though! Keep us and the millions of fan that just haven't shown up yet waiting! Sometimes that's an author's biggest mistake: rushing things. >_>

Anyhoo... LOVED the second chapter and shall be waiting for more. As for the negative things (because we can't live without those) I didn't like how you portrayed Dumbledore in that last scene. You expressed Erika being surprised and irritated by his understanding but isn't that his usual personality? And it kind of freaked me out when he hugged her. Dunno if that sounds stupid or not but for me, that was just a little too forward, even for Dumby. He just usual keeps his space with people and studies them over those stupid half-moon glasses.

All in all, I give you an 8/10 for this chapter. ;) Hope you get more reviews because from the longness of this chapter, you've earned them. -pokes-

Author's Response: I totally understand what you mean about Dumbledore. I know he seemed a little out of character, but I guess I kind of did that on purpose. I pictured the members of the old Order to be very close and I thought Dumbledore would be more friendly and familiar with them. I can definitely see where your coming from though. Thanks for the great review! I really appreciate the criticism, it was definitely helpful. I\'m so glad you like it so far. Hopefully I can get the next one up soon.

Aw. It was very refreshing to finally get a look at some cannon characters and also from their POV. You portrayed Sirius very well, and everything seemed to flow together very smoothly. It's nice to wonder how he will react when she shows up, since you have clarified that he thinks she's dead.

I sent you an email asking you a few questions, but besides that rather random note I enjoyed this chapter probably more than the other two. Probably because Sirius is cannon and Erika isn't, I was more comfortable with him.

Hmm... I don't think I have any negative comments other than that Harry seemed slightly immature but nothing big or TOO horrible. Lol.

Hope you get lots more reviews. You deserve them, dear.

Beauty Fades XD

Author's Response: I agree with you about Harry. I\'ve tried to make him as true-to-character as I could, but he\'s been much harder to write than I expected. I thought he would be the easiest because we all know him so well, but I guess that\'s what\'s made it harder. You sent me an e-mail? I never got anything. If you want, you can try re-sending it. I\'d love to hear what you have to say. Thanks again for the review!