Guess I'm the first reviewer. Lol, I'm honored. You're off to a good start, just keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'ll try and keep it up ; )
goodness, what are they doing? THeir idea of a good prank isn't usually Lily's, I think that is the big problem. Or at least one of the many, lol. SOrry it took so long to review. Well anyway, my favorite line would be...
the 'yeah, hatred' part.
what Remus said about how much Lily can make him happy and
Lily overflowing juice.
Well, I hope there will be an update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you. Definitely one of the many, MANY, problems with our heroine and hero. Thanks for your favourite moments! (You\'re the only one who\'s reviewed this chapter with them!) I\'ll update as soon as I can!!! Thanks so much for reviewing!
You put in the favorite moments. Yay! I was wondering how long you will take them through. To the end of 7th year?
Author's Response: That\'s the plan! I was toying with the idea of doing a new story for seventh year, but then decided to go back to my original idea. I do think there will be a sequel though . . . I\'ll let you speculate as to why! ;)
Wow, this is really great! You write well and thats funny! Remeber me? The girl who wrote The Epic Tale of the Hogwarts Food-fight? Well, I loved your reviews on my story so I checked out yours. This is really good, I'm definitely hooked.
Author's Response: Of COURSE I remember you! I recognized your pen name right away! Thank you for reading my story! I know I love reviews, so I only think it\'s fair that I give them, too. And look how it came around! I\'m so exceited that you like the story! Chapter five is ready as soon as the queue opens up. And I know I\'ll be looking out for chapter three of your story!!!
Yes, I did like it. Especially Peter hearing the lunch trolley. That was hysterical! Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! That\'s one of my favourite parts, too. Thanks for reviewing!
I adored that ending! And Lily's outburst was great too. Love where this is going.
Author's Response: Well, thank you very much. I\'m glad you like where it\'s going. I really liked the ending as well. I was wondering how I should end the chapter, and when I wrote that line, I just knew. Thanks for reviewing!
Okay, my favorite part is Lily and James glaring because of the plate of food. That was just great. I can see them now, arguing over something so stupid! Great job!
Author's Response: lol. I can too. Beans, of all things. Lucky for them (and the rest of the school, really) Alice was on top of it. Thanks for reviewing!
Okay, my favorite part is Lily and James glaring because of the plate of food. That was just great. I can see them now, arguing over something so stupid! Great job!
Author's Response: whoops! Repeat review! ;)
p.s. defintiely more stupid arguements to come!
Ohh...it's not validated. Ah well, I hope it's up soon. And I'm glad you liked and reviewed my story because then I chedked out yours!
Author's Response: I know. Grrr. Hurry up and validate already, stupid chapter!!! lol. I\'m SO glad I reviewed your story (mainly because it\'s downright BRILLIANT) since I gained another reader! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing all my chapters! You\'re amazing!!! And I\'m so glad you like my story. As for yours, I\'m eagerly anticipating the next chapter! :)
*gasps* Oh my goodness! You're back! *hugs*
My favorite part is the 'whatever turned out to be...' part...lol, funny. I'm glad you're back to updating! I'd almost started forgetting this story...
Mia
Author's Response: I know! YAY!
I\'m so glad your back! (Reviewing, that is).
I missed you!!!
I\'m glad I reminded you.
Chapter 8 is in the queue.
THanks so much for the review. :)
Ohh...I would have killed them! Lol, but I still love them. Can't wait to see James 'volunteering'...he had it coming. Great job and now for fav. moments, got to have them...
That last sentence was hysterical! And Dumbledore smiling as hail falls on his head...I loved that!
Author's Response: lol. Yes, who Lily has in mind is a tad obvious, but HE DESERVES IT!!! I\'m so glad you liked this chapter! I love favourite moments! (I was so sad when the mod told me I can\'t use them anymore!) (Maybe I\'ll sneak them in by editing the story after it\'s been validated! Would that be wrong . . . ?) I love those parts, too. Thanks for reviewing!!! =D
no, that would not be wrong! It is like...traditional, have no idea why it got deleted! And don't worry...*whispers* I wont tell anyone
Author's Response: I know!!! It IS a traditon . . . my tradition! Thanks for keeping it a secret! I think I\'ll go add those favourite moments now . . . shhhhhhhh
OH.....that was so sweet! It was realistic, and romantic at the same time. For James/Lily, that's sort of rare. I love your writing, and I love this story...
Author's Response: Hi Gin Drinka! Thanks so much for reading this story, it was my first James/Lily story and I really enjoyed writing it. I even have a plot bunny for another, so we\'ll see if I get to write them again. I\'m so glad it was realistic and not over the top mushy. ;) Thanks again for the compliments and lovely review!! ~Gina :)
Oh...really really sweet! Adorable. James/Lily is my favorite too!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Aw...sad, but vengeful. Lol, good job on your first poem. I just posted my first story too. Good luck to us both.
Author's Response: THANK YOU and yes, good luck to us both!
I like the way you showed the relationship with the sisters as 'before and after', good job on that. But there is room for editing. Well, I don't mean to be harsh, I just submitted my very first chapter too, a James/Lily just like you, so I know what it's like. Good job and keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I need some pointers, if you\'ve got some. That\'s cool about your story. I hope you do well.
Well, nice job on your first poem! I just posted my first story too. Hope you post many more!
Aww...are you going to write a sequel in which James humiliates himself in apology plenty times and Lily finally forgives him? Lol, that'd be nice. Well, great job, and hey! I'd love it if you could read my first fanfic (Lily/James) and tell me whaty you think. It'd mean a lot. Well, great story!
Author's Response: I\'m thinking of writing a sequal, but I don\'t know if I\'ll be able to, with my school work and what not. Sure! I\'ll check it out!
That was really sad! Poor Ginny. But good job on your first poem! Hope you'll post many more on here. I just posted my first story too...
Author's Response: Thanks a lot and I\'m glad you like it! I\'m so happy that it turned out the way it did!
Glad it's up. Had you submitted it before? mine had some troubles too. ah well, all better. Lol, I cant wait to find out what theyll do to Vernon
Author's Response: I can\'t wait to write about Sirius\'s and Vernon\'s relationship! It\'s all planned out, and I\'m so excited! It should be fun.