Our strong, arrogant lover is plagued with such vulnerabilities! Our dear heroine sated with her sweet potions, yet clueless to the dark forces that be.....Oh my! (Kilty Pleasures - love the name - could be a fanfic on it's own!)
Author's Response: Oh my, indeed! It sounds a bit sappy to hear you tell it! I will keep Kilty Pleasures in mind if I decide to write a sequel. Thanks for reviewing!
I'm enjoying your story. I think it's very clever the way you have woven your tale to included what we know to have happened at Hogwarts during this time. Also: I hope poor Eloise's acne clears up in time for her solo!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I think keeping to canon makes an OC more palatable to some readers. Eloise is my special pet. I can assure you that things will go well for her...eventually.
The mad woman will now sing her praises: La, la lampooning Snape, a Jarvey in a cape...oops! Well done! Bravo, my dear!
Author's Response: Thanks, Sea! I believe I know you well enough to call you by your first name. :-)
Quite amusing, really.....OK - it was wonderful! Beautifully written! I shall read on........
Author's Response: Glad you're still with me! Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!
Love your story, please update soon!
Wow - I could visualize what you had written about the thick strand of blackness and the golden ball of light. It seems like Harry severed the connection, with some help from his friends. Looking forward to your next chapter. (BTW - you are on "favorites" list.)
A very creative possible solution to a very pressing problem. Enjoying your story!
I'm enjoying this story as much as your last one. You really try to keep things "realistic" in the Potter universe and you always keep your characters true to JKR's original. Can't wait to read more!
I just love this story! Having Snape on Harry's side should be quite an advantage. Keep writing, please!
Most unpleasant turn of events! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Absolutely brilliant! The action in Volde's chambers was fabulously executed! I could visualize the entire scene! I loved it!!! I had to laugh when Harry told Uncle Vernon about "the werewolf" - I could just imagine the look on his beefy face! More please!!!
I'm enjoying the story - I like how Harry is developing. Can't wait to see what happens next in Dumbledore's office!
Your story is well written with much attention to detail and I look forward to reading your subsequent chapters. :) FYI - The sun does not set in the summer sky so early (5 pm). PS I'm a 'Nole too.
Author's Response: You're right. I'll take a look at that and see how I can fix it. Thank you! :)
Voldemort accessed Harry's thoughts of the Prophecy right away - yes, that does make sense. I'm glad Ron has some new clothes!
Author's Response: Well, if I was Voldemort, that's what I would have done. I think we all wanted the twins to share their success with the family, eh?
Absolutely comical! What fun! Love the persceptive from inside Harry's head!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review SeaIsle, I love to get feedback, good or bad, about my stuff. Chapter 4 is waiting for the Mods to approve it. Let me know what you think.
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A couple of "aw"'s, a couple of "oh"'s, and lots of fun!
.....Wow! Absolutely spot on! Perfectly executed! Whew......
Author's Response: Aww, THANK YOU! You're too kind...
Oh poor Hermione - she's on a rollercoaster! She's made the right decision - for now- , but love will always find a way. I look forward to your next installment!
Author's Response: Yeah, she really is on a rollercoaster. Nice observation! I agree she's made the right decision... choosing between loves is beyond difficult, but she's had her love for Harry (and Ron, for that matter) much longer. Thanks SO much for always reviewing, SeaIsle!!