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The Long Road Home by Ashwinder
Rated: •Summary: Sequel to Ginny's Gift. Read that story first. Harry must deal with the aftermath of Voldemort's defeat. Written pre-OOP.
Date: 03/03/05 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I'm surprised there are very few reviews here! Your story is quite interesting, rich in details, and overall very well written. A few chapters back you mentioned what happened to Molly and Arthur when they were just starting out. That was very well done! In this chapter, as well as the others, Harry's emotions are powerful and you've really done justice to the story line. I wonder where Ginny is heading at the end of this chapter? Hmmmm....I'll read on to find out! I've added your two stories to my favorites.
Author's Response: The reason why this story doesn't have many reviews here on MNFF is because I wrote it before OOP came out. It's up on other sites, and has reviews there. From what I've seen, an author tends to get more reviews while they're still writing. Readers don't want to be left hanging so they review to encourage the author to keep going. They don't have to do that here. They can see the story is finished, and they just need to keep reading to find out what happens. Thanks for all the great reviews you've left me, though! It's always nice to hear someone likes my stories!
Date: 03/03/05 Title: Chapter 25: Outtake: Victor's Story
How bittersweet! A really moving chapter.
Date: 03/04/05 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue
Thank you for writing a beautiful romance saga with action and humor for us all to enjoy! It was spell binding! There were many unique and creative sidestories, such as the Molly/Arthur backstory. The whole concept of Harry losing his magical abilities to defeat Voldemort (from Ginny's Gift) was very creative. Congrats on a love story well written!
Author's Response: Thanks for all your kind reviews. I'm going to miss them.
Date: 03/03/05 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Yes, I've noticed that also. I prefer to read a story that is complete/almost complete because I like to get lost in the story. Again, you truly have talent and some of your sidelines, such as the Molly/Arthur one, were creative and plausible. :)
Date: 03/03/05 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
That horrible Skeeter woman! Ugh! Incredible!
Date: 03/03/05 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Outstanding! Purely creative! Love the Goddess!!! That Ginny is a strong woman! I hope Krum has no ulterior motives......
Date: 03/03/05 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26
It's about time Sirius and Remus gave him some info he can use! I'm fully convinced that Harry and Ginny love each other.
Date: 03/03/05 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
Yea! Harry & Ginny are married! Things ....are bound to get better......
Date: 03/02/05 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I remembered from your story "Ginny's Gift" that Harry had ripped out the page with the spell and threw it in the fire! I hope nothing else important was on that page...... I'm enjoying your wonderful story! Well done!
Date: 03/01/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Poor Harry! He saves the world, but looses a lot. At least he has his Weasleys! Well done
Date: 03/03/05 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Leave it to Ron to spoil the evening! It's just as well Harry and Ginny wait - it seems the Weasley/Prewit women are very fertile! This sequel is wonderfully written!
Spattergroit by Rudhampaiel
Rated: •Summary: Takes place after the visit to St. Mungo’s. Hermione’s dwelling on a certain something one of the wizards said.
Date: 02/26/05 Title: Chapter 1: Bugger
Quite funny and cute! Loved it!
Padfoot Prohibited by Liveley
Rated: •
Summary: Giving high school essays a Marauder twist, this fiction is centered around the idea that some seniors in high school are require to write a letter to incoming freshman before they graduate. At Hogwarts, Seventh Years are given an assignment to write such a letter for the new First Years. Sirius decides to actually take an assignment, well seriously...sort of. He decides to look back on his entire Hogwarts years and write down his list of things not to do at Hogwarts.
Date: 01/24/05 Title: Chapter 4: Slytherin Skirmish
I like your story - very entertaining! One thought - isn't Mundungus Fletcher a lot older?
Author's Response: *shrugs* Never says anything about his age, so I thought, why not put him in there?
I'll Hate You Forever (I Think) by kris250
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter agreed on only one thing since they first met: they'll always hate each other. But after five years, James begins to see things, to see her, differently, and wants another chance. But Lily is one stubborn girl. Can he convince her that his feelings are real? Meanwhile, the pair is thrust into many different dangerous and humorous situations with their friends. Will it take a disaster to help Lily believe in true love? Or will a tragedy just push her farther away? How many times does James have to try before he stops messing up? Follows with the information provided by JKR, with some fun along the way.
Date: 03/21/05 Title: Chapter 29: In the Hospital Wing
Wow! Great Chapter! I'd love to see Snape and Potter go at it. Lily should have hexed Bellatrix and Snape on sight. Hopefully somebody will be able to protect Lily from the Crutacious Curse! Ahh......
Date: 03/21/05 Title: Chapter 30: Redemption
I hope Lily will report Bellatrix and Snape to Dumbledore asap! It seems James is back in her good graces. Sirius saved the day! Quite fun!
Harry's Sixth Year by GringottsVault711
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry's sixth year; the burden of the prophecy, the grief over the loss of Sirius, the wizarding war, blossoming romances, the new Quidditch Captain, Weasley family drama - and that's just part of it.
Date: 01/23/05 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60: The Portrait
I'm really enjoying your story! The portrait was a great idea and I liked the way Harry didn't accept it at first. Nicely done.
Date: 01/30/05 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63: Captive
Yikes!!!! Harry must save Ron from Cedric's fate! He must! Where's the DA when you need them. (Great story - on to the next chapter!)
Date: 01/30/05 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64: The Dark Mark
Hermione to the rescue! Great chapter....what's next?
Date: 01/27/05 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61: Renewed Friendships
Harry's dream was one I'm sure all of us have had - trying to get to someone, but they're just out of reach. Nice story - looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 02/09/05 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69: Battle for Survival
Well done! What's next?