I see Severus is starting to realize that Harry is not just like his father....and that Ron is really not dim at all....Nice job, well written!
I'll be interested to read the "after lunch clash" between Harry and Snape. It's funny that Snape wants to do well in Harry's classes because of his own desire for achievement. Oh, did you write "she" when referring to Professor Flitwick? I'm pretty sure he's a he.
The image of Snape flying around the grounds in his flimsy night apparel searching for his cat is hilarious! I'm glad Harry found a way to shower his borrowed body in a dignified manner! Lol! I'm ready for the next chapter.......
***After a ten minute ritual of logging on and off this system, I'm finally able to review! It's become a battle and I must win.....Is anyone else having this problem?*** Ginny is back in the limelight! Too bad she can't tell Hermione and Ron more about what's going on. It's always harder to be the one waiting and you've written her turmoil authentically. I'm glad Dumbledore is on the mend.....we need him! Great chapter....I'll read on and review if the system lets me!
Author's Response: ::raises hand:: I AM! Stupid system...grrr....Glad you kept trying, though, thanks for reviewing!
Great chapter! I was hoping that Harry would have more of an opportunity to talk to his parents, though. :( But great chapter anyway!!!
Author's Response: like i said, that part will come soon, look for it! (probably around chapter 25 or something :D )
Brilliant! Genius! Exciting! More, please.
Author's Response: ::snickers:: you people keep calling me a genuis and yet you haven't seen my latest test scores :P lol! Thanks for reviewing!
**Reviewing on the first "click" - much relief!** Another amazing chapter! It has it all: action and gut wrenching emotion....well done! I'll read on........
Author's Response: thanks!
Something is amiss here...I feel you may have a few tricks up your sleeve! Sorry not to have reviewed in a while, but I've read all the chapters - well done too, I might add! I will await the update...I haven't lost hope!
Author's Response: well, my sleeves are rather short now so I can't have too many, but maybe I do have a few left...you never know :D Thanks for sticking with me :)
Oh no! Two Snapes! Yikes! What's happening next??????
Author's Response: Yeah, you thought one was bad? watch this.... B)
*Still having trouble with the system...* You wrote Severus' dilemma well! Sirius' lost his love twice now, his angry tirade is realistic. I'll read on!
Author's Response: thanks for taking the time to review every chapter!
*First try!* Wow, that was an emotional chapter! There is so much going on, so many characters it's a wonder you can keep it all straight! I can't even begin to predict what will happen next!
Author's Response: Yeah, I can't even keep eeryone straight at times! I have to remember to go through what each character is going through all time time, and let me tell you, that's confusing!
Quite clever to portkey "Remus" and Emily, then have Sirius dive on top! I've read the reviews below, so I know Sirius will be ok......thanks! Your converstation between Dumbledore and Snape was very convincing. Well done!
(BTW - this story is on my "favorite stories" list and I've mentioned it on my author's page - I hope you don't mind.)
Author's Response: Finally! someone who didn't yell at me in their review! :p Thanks you for that! And thanks for the advertisement, I not only don't mind, I'm very flattered as well! Glad you enjoyed the chapter and did't flame me :D
The characters' reactions were well written and I could visualize the scene as it played out before me. Well done! Time travel is a bit tricky to get right since we haven't done it YET, but your interpretation of it is believable. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: yes, it is rather tricky, but the nice part is I can do it however I want since we really haven't done it yet :P thanks for reading!
You have quite an imagination! This story is extremely entertaining! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Do I really? Thanks :)
Powerful! I'm happy James and Sirius had a chance to talk! :)
Author's Response: yeah, I personally love them together and this chapter was begging to be written :D
I'd never flame you! :) Love your story!
Author's Response: oh good :D
How heart-wrenching! I actually have a tear in my eye! So it's all for naught? Oh, come on, just give us a wee tidbit of hope...........
Author's Response: I'll give you hope, I promise. Though I won't tell you what type of hope :) Remember...Happy ending!
Believable Voldemort scene. Peter Pettigrew, that little rat....I just hope Sirius, Remus, and James anticipated what he might say. I'd love to read a good long conversation between Harry and his parents in the car........Wonderful story!
Author's Response: oo....no conversation between Harry and Lily and james yet, but there is one in the story (eventually) I just have to get there first :p
It hadn’t worked.......Oh yes it did! But is it the right time? (Or at least that's my prediction!) Snape being Dumbledore's back-up plan took me by surprise! I hope Dumbledore's ok, too! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: lol, reviewers here are a lot more brigth than at fictionalley :P you guys all figured it out!
Whew! I think Harry should put a magical binding spell on Peter so he can't get away! Well done, very interesting!
Author's Response: well they will take some precautions cause you can never be to sure with a rat :D