Ok- about me. I'm 16 and live in Colorado. I love writing, and want to be an author someday. I also LOVE to read, and fanfiction is awesome. I've slipped into the realm of original work lately, however, and I will not be able to devote too much time to fanfiction anymore. Every story will finish, however. Please be patient with me.
Story status:
Predestined
Chapter 15 up, chapter 16 in the works. Yes, I know that it's been forever since I updated it, but I'm still only at a few hundred words for the next chapter, I've just been so busy! Go to my livejournal if you want to see a preview!
Too Late
Finished, a one-shot.
The Moment
Finished, a one-shot.
The Epic Tale of Bad Hair
Chapter 2 in queue. Yes, this is now going to be a chaptered fanfiction.
This is so cute! Draco's so awkward, and hott not to mention lol. Can't wait for the next chapter
You have a real talent writing! :D Keep up the good work! ~Paprika
Oh no, oh no, oh no, oh no! He was supposed to kill Hermione, wasn't he? This could either be a romantic turning point or a hate turning point... *chews on nails* I need an update! I don't do well with waiting forever! 10!
Author's Response: I'm updating as fast as the chapters can get accepted. I know what you mean about waiting forever, I hate waiting, I'm a very impatient person, lol.
Wow! This is really original- and the suspense is killing me! Please add another chapter soon- it's awesome! ~Paprika
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope it wasn't too muddled... I was in a rather strange mood while writing it.
Oh yay if I hurry I'm the first to review! First off I can't wait for the next chapter, when Ginny wakes up... Hehe! Oh boy, this was a great chapter! 10! ~Paprika
Author's Response: Thanks again!
I love reviews too! LOL I really liked this chapter but Goyle- ewwwwwwww! And I thought that the Lord Tweezemont thing was SO funny! Well please update soon! ^o^ Cheers! ~Paprika
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I love writing Luna... there's so much room for bizarness (spelling?). Keep reading!
Just wow.
Author's Response: As always, another great review. Thanks a heap Paprika!
Author's Response: As always, another great review. Thanks a heap Paprika!
Oh yay! I'm the first to review! I love this chapter! Draco was VERY in character, especially when he was insulting the Weasleys. :D Grrr but I think I would like to hurt Lucius- how mean! Well- please update soon! This story is still a ten in my book- 5 reviews, all with perfect markings? Awesome! ~Paprika
Author's Response: Thankyou very much! I loved writing this one... It was so easy to make him mean.
Woah! Dark, evil, angst Hermione! Yes! I love fanfics like these, they're so against the grain and wonderfully unique! Wow- just sounded like I swallowed a dictionary! These different fics are so awesome- I love the original series and all fanfiction but it's nice to take a vacation from "Harry was a hero. Ron was his sidekick. Hermione was their assistant. Until the Prince of Darkness came. But the hero and sidekick understood and became friends with the Prince. Together they vanquished the Dark Lord." I mean- it's good and all but life needs a little spice sometimes! Now that I've bored you to death with my ramblings, I'll try to wrap this up. This story is, of course, a 10 and is (of course) going on my favorites list! ^-^ Cheers! ~Paprika
Yay! I loved this chapter, how weird for Hermione to be having the mirage-ish thing. Poor Draco, his small capacity to love is overflowing and is confusing him.
I like reading the out of character Harry. And he wasn't really THAT out of character, if they had been dating and he was drunk who knows. Anyways, I love the fact that Draco WASN'T out of character, out of character Harry is rare and out of character Draco is common. Yay! Another 10~Paprika
Author's Response: Thanks!! It was very interesting to write OOC Harry. I guess anyone can do anything under some kind of influence, so though it's not that OOC, the admins still asked me to put that warning there. And thanks for the Draco comment. I hate him when he's OOC so I generally try to keep him in character. Obviously I'm doing alright so far!!! Thanks agian!!
I like the Harry being unfaithful to Hermione thing because it is SO obviously going to be Ron and Hermione in the books! ^-^ But I love your story- so refreshing not for them to have secret crushes on each other! Yay for you, your original storyline, and your obvious writing skills! As for good Draco and Hermione stories- I know too many! A lot of the good ones are on my Favorite Stories list, though, where your story will soon be joining them! This story is awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter to come through! I love it- have a 10! Cheers~Paprika
Author's Response: Thanks heaps!! I'll check your favourites as soon as I can. My next chapter should be up in a few days. Hope you like it.
That was soo funny! 10! ~Paprika
Author's Response: Thanks!
It just had to be a cliffhanger for your too-stupid-to-read-the-next-chapter-on-the-other-site-reader? Oh well, I hope that the next chapter comes soon! I'm not to good at balancing and I think that I might fall off the cliff.
Oh! Hehe- I started reading this story on fanfiction.net but I had to go before I could read much of it and was too dumb to add it as a favorite! Love it though! ~Paprika
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Hmmm- didn't read that one! Love it- heck- love all your stories! ~Paprika
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad you like my stories!!
I really like this story so far, and it sounds interesting... so... next chapter will be posted soon- right? Because I need to know what will happen next, locked in a room... with Malfoy... call me Hermione from now on! Just kidding! ^-^ But I hope that you update soon~ this fic is going on my favorites list and getting a 10! Cheers!~ Paprika
Very nice beginning to this story, but I spotted a few grammar errors and plot holes. In the sentence, "Dumbledore had said to Voldemort (Tom Riddle) that there are worse things than death, when the battle began toward the end of Harry’s fifth year," I had some misgivings about the tenses. The verbs make the sentence a bit hard to read. Also, a few commas and semicolons were misplaced. I agree with those who reviewed before me, I have difficulty seeing Harry torturing Voldemort, and I also think that Wormtail turning good and being friends with Harry and Harry calling Voldemort "Tom" was a bit out of character. As I said, there were a few problems that I spotted but overall this story is off to a good start! ~Paprika
OOOOOOOoohhhhh! I've never seen (or read- whichever) Constantine so this is like a whole new story to me! Please update soon!
Oh wow! Hehe, I loved the dartboard scene. Chapter was a bit confusing, but it's the first chapter and no one's supposed to have any clue whatsover what's going on. I don't think that I can even try to critique- that's all been covered. All I have to say is- Ginny in a slinky nightgown? And green too....
Author's Response: I hope you liked it... I know it was a bit confusing, but most of the stuff is answered in the next chapter and some in later chapters. Thanks for the review!