I know that i have never posted a review before - but i just wanted to say this is the best story i have read on any sight - i can imagine JKR writing it. This is fantastic

Is it finshed?

Wow... an excellent story. Is it finished? ALso, just so you know, it is longer than JKR's version of book 6. much longer. But it is fantasticly written, and has many necessary twists and turns. I never would have thought of Harry having a sister, or a brother for that matter. I liked how Sirius' life befor azkaban came in, and how it used draco not being evil. I really liked it - it took me 48 hrs to read!!! Harry/Ginny was very good as well as Hermione/Ron. I have to wonder... is there a Draco/Jamie?? Or maybe the prophecy ment Fred or George by twins... urgh! post more soon, or i might die

Wowzas! That was really really good! Consider this my review for the entire story, not just the last chapter. I loved it! How could I have not realized that there might be more to the prophecy? That Dumbledore might be keeping some things for later? I'm stupid, and you are a genius. But that's the way it goes, isn't it?
I have just a few comments and questions.
1) What year is this? It seems like a seventh year fic, but so much has happened since HBP to this story.
2) There are a few words (sirus, and music) that are hyperlinked to an invalid web URL. Do you know this, is it on purpose?
3)You might want to proof-read one more time... several capitilization and grammatical errors including quotation marks... but that's up to you.
4) I love how we see Ginny's thoughts, but I think that maybe it would be better if they were in italics so we could better seperate.

That's all, and I'm off to start the sequel. Tata for now!
Abby

AHH I LOVED IT *goes off to read sequel* great job.... awesome... they don't cover it! Darn, I have to wait until later to read the sequel because I have to go do stuff.. I've spent all morning reading this!! Great job, and tata for now!

I'm back! Here's my little comments about chapter two...
I love Remus' confession of sorts, it seems so real and Remus is trying to explain everything to Harry and trying to get closer to him. Aww that was mean for Harry to say he was alone, because Remus cares about him! This story is so perfect, I almost feel like I don't need to leave these reviews! I usually have long lists of corrections whenevver I do this, but this almost deams unnecessary! Aww, Harry cried into Remus! Soooo sweet, yet so awkward for Harry, because he's never had that person to cry into before! You wrote that part very well. The whole thing is exceptional!

Hey everybody! Abby's back! Haha! Charlie kissed the girl Ron was hitting on - Dumbledore's granddaughter! Can't tell you how hard I laughed at that! And Mrs. Weasly approved - that was classic! Oh this is hilarious! Harry told them he loved them, so sweet and kinda girly! SO he's the Boy who Lived AND the Girl who Lived! There's the end to your story! Lol. And Hermione, eager to talk about school. Only her, only her. JUST for being the famous Harry Potter. Lol. Wait, why is Ellie being called Ms. Dumbledore? I'm confused. She's like Harry's age, right? Okay, igoring that part, CONSTANT VIGILANCE! Wow, Ellie does know the people in the Order. Aww, and she tucked him into bed. “That’s the problem with the world today you know, too many bleeding hearts. You’ll never make an adequate teacher if you fall to pieces every time some one has a bad dream. You, young lady, are more like your grandfather than you realise.” I love that line!!! So Phineas! Okay, now we are at the reading of the will. "Either I have passed away a very old man or I have done something very stupid and ended up somewhat dead" that line was even better than what Phineas'! Wait, what does Sirius hope it was the latter. Harry, Ron, and Hermione being young Marauders is hilarious, I'd never made that connection. Remus better cause more than a little mischief, he'd better cause A LOT! Who cares for a stuffed shirt? Lol. Haha - drawGinny in! He'd better draw her into a huge kiss! I love H/G. “Now, if you’re still underage, which I daresay you probably are," It's like he knew he was gonna die! *Tears up and sniffs loudly* Poor Sirius!!! The way he turns over his guardianship to Ellie is almost as if he is there! It's so sweet. Wild parties - HAH! Aww, Sirus spiliting everything up to everybody is so sweet how he gives it to everbody with a little speach. "Sort it out or I'll be back to haunt you, Snivellus!" I love your writing, it's so funny! I can't tell you how many times I've started laughing as I read. Lupin being Ellies godfather and ellie being Harry's 'mom' in a sense - that makes Remus Harry's adopted godgrandfather! *Grins proudly at this conclusion* Okay, Tata for now!

Aww, they won. Sorry my reviews stopped, I decided this was too perfect for corrections. And btw, was I not right about GInny? Was I? Tata for now!

YAY! I've been waiting for this! The match was written fine, don't worry. I love the ending as well. Please update soon, this is one of my favorites!

Oh. My. Freakin'. God! This story is amazingly written and it just screams to any reader! I love this I love this I love this!!! Just a little mention - in the chapter where we first met Natalie, you said she had green eyes and raven hair, which is how I imediatly figured she was Harry's. You seemed to change the eyes to brown.... you might want to correct that. Other than that, this is one of the best H/G stories I've ever read, and I am adding it to my favorites list so I know when you update!

Author's Response: You aren\'t the first person to mention it, I just haven\'t gotten around to fixing it yet. I will do that now. Oh, and by the way, I have the 10th chapter finished, I just have to wait until the queue opens back up.