My name is Charlotte White, and I'm 18 years old, and I live in Cumbria, near the Lake District, North-West England. I'm obssessed with Harry Potter, and I love writing, so fan fic is like my all-time favourite thing to do! And I can't think of anything else to write, so bye.
~ Chaz xXxXx
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
its even BETTER as a series
Very well written. The chapter was quite short but that worked for this type of spoof fiction. I thought it was really funny, and I espescially liked the Finding Nemo 'wooooosh' joke. Keep it up. ---- Moose xXx
No change. Still brilliant. Keep writing. Love You Loads
Wow this is great. And you have loads of reviews. No one has reviewed my fic :(. but yours is so FUNNY! keep going.
I don't think Harry's stupid. In fact I think your Harry is very in character (apart from his till liking Cho post OoTP, but that's your call lol) Anyway, well done, this fic just keeps getting better and better! MORE! loves, moose
I liked it! An interesting perspective, few fics have a Tom Riddle with friends, as opposed to Crabbe and Goyle type aquaintances. It surprised me to see Tom with a female best friend....remind you of another famous wizard? I think it was well written, though quite short. Keep it up!
See what I have been driven to? Reviewing my own story? Why have I no reviews!!! Is it really that bad???????? I go to the corner to cry :(:(:(:(:(:(
Do I even need to tell you how much I love this? You know how much I love this. But I've just told youb twice, no three times, how much I love this, anyway.
So, overall, an interesting contributiojn to the conversation, as always.....
I'm talking crap.
LOVE THIS! BRING ON CHAPTER....damn I lost count...
Author's Response: Thanks for your input - I guess I have to do a semi-sequel now... And by the way, I lost count too...in my original copy of this I remember titling Chapter Ten "Chapter Nine" and then getting confused when submitting it...oh well.
So good!!!!!!! Love this fic! Love all your fics!!! Update soon!! Read My fic!!! Love this fic!!! Might have said that already!! What is five minute theory????? Is it an Americanism???? Or am I just thick????? Love this fic!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
lol
Author's Response: Not an Americanism - if you look back a couple chapters you'll see that Delia and Felix have some unexplained argument about "five minutes" It hasn't been explained yet and this was the first time I really referred to it as a "theory." Update coming soon!
Is cutting off the american way of saying pushing in?
anyhow.. YEY!!!!!!!!!!! you updated! And yey! I want to be in your next chapter! And YEY! My name is Charlotte! And yey! Somethign else!
UPDATE SOON
Author's Response: *thinks* Now when did I use the phrase "cut off"...hmm...sometimes I'll say something like so-and-so was talking, but then whats-her-face cut her off...like interrupeted...oh well it doesn't matter. Thanks for the review!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry. But this story is just so good. plus, I really should be doing my homework. Anyhoo......ha ha ha Voldy said Anyhoo. ha ha ha ha ha ha ha that's funny
ha ha sorry im drunk
Actually no im not im making excuses im just weird
love this story! almost as good as mine
only joking. tis much better! LOVES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! moose
Author's Response: Thank you for your rambling review! Anyhoo, new chappie should be coming soon!
I Love this story! I love all your stories! Why can't my story be this good? I have like four reviews!
Anyway....YOUR fic. It's so good!!!!!!!!!
I really don't have anything else to say lol.
Loves! Moose
Author's Response: Always glad to get reviews, especially for this story, because it is my *sniff* neglected story (this one gets significantly less reads/reviews, but oh well). Review much appreciated! LOOK FOR UPDATES!
A HORRIBLE THOUGHT has occured to me.
How do I know when you've posted a new story? Because I only know about your updates on this and Hogwarts Overturned because they're on my fave's so I check every day or so. And I though when you posted a new story you would mention it at the end of a chapter on here....you know like you do sometimes.....
I seriously suspect that I may have to actually keep an eye on the Recently Added page
BTW, I have a new fic which will be up in the next day or two. Check it out.
And while I'm here.....
I LOVE YOUR FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for loving my fic! I submitted updates AND my new fic about...4 days ago, so they SHOULD be read through soon! New fic is called "I love...who?" and involves lists/journal entries from various characters. New/recently updated things always appear towards the top of the page. "Overturned" still has more chapters to go though...
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am extremely happy that you updated. More updates soon? *looks at athour with puss-in-boot-off-shrek2 eyes*
I love this story. happy sigh....
LOVES!!! moose
Author's Response: More updates...sometime soon!
HAha!
When SOME person said "Let's kill her!.....Let's humiliate her then!".....I LAUGHED out loud, this MUTATEDsnort-sneeze, that made my mum and her friends all turna round and stare at me in their little Marks & Spencer uniforms. Twas HUMILIATING.
I'm back in the HABIT of RANDOMLY capitalising WORDS!
OMG I LOVEthis fic soo much! Wonderful come upance there!!! and soooooooooo clever!! Paravti SUCKS!
PLEASE don't end it, or at least do another sequel. I love Hogwarts Overturned aswell, but nothing beats Hermione's insanty.......maybe rons insanity! lol MOOSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: i ALSO get into periods in WHICH i randomly capitalize WORDS! You can count on another STORY after THIS ONE though I'm not sure on what it'll be YET! Haha...thanks!
What does pfc mean?
Sorry, distraction. This fic just keep getting better and better! So funny! I( want miniture flamingoes following me around. I could keep them as pets and throw them at people I don't like. It would be like having a flock of pink boomarangs.........
Wow I'm getting excited now.
Love it. Update more, sooner, now, even
Author's Response: Sometimes, when a review is submitted, it shows up on the "would you like to submit a review" drop down box before it's actually visible to the public. If you submit a review, it takes you "back to story" where you can read the story. I think the moderators have noticed this and changed it though...no idea what the letters "pfc" actually stand for though. Wait...pink boomarangs? Hmm...ideas ideas...Thanks for the review, I'm submitting the next chapter as soon as I'm done writing annoying, humorous, and witty responses to these reviews.
This fic is totaly awesome. Update now!!!!!!!!!!! more more more
Oh I love this story so much! And you should definately write the secret thoughts of Ron Weasley, because how funny would that be. What is Harry playing at, that's what I want to know? Come on, Pavarti has hypnotised him, hasn't she? EVIL!
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNN
loves, Moose
Author's Response: I'll update...eventually! The Secret Thoughts of Ron Weasley eh? I don't think I'd be able to do it like this, as Ron would never sit and take the time to record the events of his life like Hermione would, but there're definite possibilities there...hmm...ponder ponder...
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this fic! I bow down to you! On all three knees! (joke from my fic lol) update soon. and slap Harry in the meantime.
Author's Response: Bowing down, are you? Hmm...intriguing...update coming soon!
SO good! SO awesome! I LOVE this fic. I LOVE capitalisation! I CAN'T spell.
Wow you guys should try this its kinda ADDICTIVE.
Getting sidetracked....
KEEP GOING STORY AWESOME STOP ENSING ON CLIFFHANGERS, NERVES CAN'T TAKE IT
Author's Response: mwahahahaha! cliffhangers...you are forced to return to this story...hahaha...I actually started the next chap, so it's in the works!