I’m a Virgoan environmentalist who loves fantasy fiction and felines!
I would never judge Remus; I LOVE him!!! Excellent job! 10/10
Remus and Sirius are my fave pairing, so this made me happy! The parts I liked best were:
"'I’ve promised to do something special for James and Lily’s wedding, but since they’ve forbidden me to pull any pranks-”
“Oh, the horror!” Remus said in a mockingly scandalized voice,
“That’s what I said,” Sirius muttered disgustedly.' That was so funny!
'He’d looked irresistibly gorgeous, if he did say so himself' Def. something Padfoot would think!
"Just picture everyone in James’ Golden Snitch pajamas, and it won’t be so bad.”
*giggles* Moony gives the best advice!
OMG I loved that so much! It put me in such a good mood! The house points was an especially nice touch.
Author's Response:
Hee. Remus thought so, too
It was good, but why did you give it such a high rating?
Oh wow! That was exciting! I'm very interested to see where you go with this!
“'Would you like to know why?” he asks in a voice that promises adventure and danger.' I loved that line, and the ending too! The characters were portrayed well; wonderful job!
Author's Response:
That right there is the perfect example of crack!Sirius, in my opinion. It\'s one of my favorite lines, too
Thanks for reading!
...I don't even know how to describe that. The was it was written is too amazing for coherent words.
I like how the story implies that Sirius suspected Remus as the spy. Unique and clever.
Author's Response: Thank you, darling.
"If Remus is going to treat him like a child, he’s damn well going to act like one. " Yep, that sounds like Sirius.
Author's Response:
Doesn\'t it just? :P
Thanks for reading!
TRHBP was such a success that it's very ambitious to take on a sequel. I can already deduce that this is going to be good because I laughed aloud when Snape said, "Isn’t the fact that I killed Dumbledore really bad for my character’s development?" and “Oh wow, that would be so cool!” exclaimed Malfoy, his eyes shining. “Can I be the narrator in the next book?”
Author's Response: Thanks Minerva, I\'m glad to see one of the old fans of TR+HBP around. I know that this is going to be a huge task, but I was continually asked to do a sequel so I caved, hoping it would be fun! Hopefully it will live up to expectations, or my name in fan fiction will be mud. At least I got you laughing in the first chapter!