I’m a Virgoan environmentalist who loves fantasy fiction and felines!
Oooooh this story is really intruiging and I'd like to read more. The only thing I dislike about it is that Remus Lupin is MINE not hers! haha Please update soon.
I actually could imagine that Snape wrote that; you captured his character perfectly, and twas beautifully written, so sweet and so sad. A pefect 10 for you!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you!
That was truly amusing! You get 10/10 Please update!!!
Oh my gosh, what a cliffhanger!!! You must update ASAP! You get a 10/10.
It is ambitious Lily Evans' 7th and final year at Hogwarts. She is very excited about being one step closer to becoming an Auror and thrilled about being back to school altogether.
But there is one little annoyance: the Marauders. Specificially arrogant James Potter. He has been pestering her to go out with him, but she has coldly denied his wishes. She thinks this year will be no different to the past six school years.
But life is full of mistakes.
..::~!~::.."Just one minute.” Lily noticed footsteps heading in her direction. She saw a hand reach from between the screens and drop a flower onto her bedside table.
“Mr. Potter! Return to your dormitory immediately!”
“Alright, alright…” The hand disappeared.
Once Lily was sure that no one was in the wing, he lifted her head and saw what flower Potter had dropped.
Lily stuffed her head in her pillow and screamed a muffled scream that no one could hear.
I think tis great that Lily beat James! Please update soon; I MUST know what happens to those slimy, blackmailing Slytherins!
Oh, the poor ants! *sobs* Anyway, 10/10 and PLEASE do not make me wait so long for an update again!!!
I have Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them, too. Tis a great book, is it not? Well, I liked this chap and I hope you update.
I think that twas very original and that goodbye is indeed the hardest word to say. Superb job! You might like my fan fic A Very Sirius Full Moon since tis a Remus/Sirius story about what happened when James actually did save Snape.
I have never read a fan fiction that involves the reader so much before! This fan fiction is highly original and humourous. If you do not update soon I shall literally die!
Author's Response: Oh no, i think u'll have to die. sorry about that cuz i don't think i'll update soon or maybe i'll never update. i'm kinda depress right now cuz they just won't accept my chap arrg! thx for reviewing anyways!! :)
I'd be happy to read for you, too. Anyway, I hope you update ASAP because I love this fan fic SO much!!!
Author's Response: u would beta for me too? two beta readers would be kool. just contact me on lalime50@aol.com as soon as u read this.
Oh no, poor Severus! I hope he is okay! Update ASAP!!! 10
Author's Response: No more Severus until chapter 7, the next one's a flashback. I will write as fast as I can though! Glad you liked it.
"Small and thin, she appeared fragile, but the eyes that shone out at him were full of power. Her dark hair fell to her breast in waves, in a startling contrast to her beautiful, bloodless face. With each step she took the grass beneath her feet withered and died. She remained perfectly dry, the sheets of rain separated in front of her as she drew near, and closed behind her again." Fabulous and creepy description!!! And Snape having a daughter seems very probable to me. Great job!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. Wow, I can't believe you quoted that entire paragraph - thanks!
You write Tom better than any author besides Miss Rowling herself could!!! I loved the French and understood all of it! 10/10! You deserve it!
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much! That's high praise.
OOOOOOOOOOOh Avril and Voldemort's evilness creep me out! awesome job!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Nice chapter! Nasce is a pretty cool name; what does it mean?
Author's Response: Emmm....(looks foolish)...I'm afraid I made it up. It just came to me one day - I like to make up names. No, wait - scratch that..it can mean something....hmm...it means...tied. To be tied to something/someone. Yep, that'll do.
Perfect pourtrayel or Tom's personality, and I liked seeing Avril and Tom when they were young.
Author's Response: Thank you, those scenes are always my favourite to write.
I know it isn't really funny, but I laughed when I read this chapter because it reminded me of how Frodo had a finger bitten off in Lord of the Rings. 10!
This fan fiction is too fabulous for words! I really wish I could describe to you its magnificence, but I cannot. I can only give you a 10 and hope that such a gesture helps you to comprehend your work's wonder.
1st reviewer!!! Oh. My. Gosh. Regulus is DEAD?!?!?!?!?!?! What a huge shock! I am so intriuged to learn what happens next; please, please update! This is what a 10/10 is!!!