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"Alright, here are the rules for the duel,” Salazar began, looking from Helga to Rowena, then realized how absolutely pointless it would be, “aww, screw it, BEGIN!” That was very funny.
Author's Response: Haha, thank you.
Oh, wow!!! Deciding to do a slash fic from a child's perceptive was absolutely engenious! *adds to favs list* This is amazing, and you should be very proud of yourself! :.) 1000/10!!!
"Look at him, isn't he perfect?"
"He looks like you dumped boiling water on his head."
"Shut it, Padfoot, new-borns look like that."
"He looks a bit like you."
"I know, isn't it great?"
"Poor kid." LOLLOLLOLOLOL "No, Wormtail, I stole this one." HAHAHAHAHAHA! As you can see I was highly amused by this chap. I feel very upset about Remmy though. *sobs* Definately a 10!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I have updated, but it's not posted yet.
'Giving up, Remus headed towards the door. "Please continue looking through the rest of my things.” That's definitely what Remus would say in a situation like that. I've always admired your characterisation!
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you managed to read the rest of the chapters here. Thank you so much, you know how much I adore Remus so it's great to hear that you feel I have him so in character.
It probably did happen that way; I'm just so angry that it happened at all! *kills Wormtail* Okay, I feel better. Good chapter!
Author's Response: Haha - thanks! I'm honored that you think it probably happened the way I wrote it.
We're nearing the end of the fic! I'm looking foward to seeing how you'll write it, but I'm dreading what we all know is going to happen too. 10
Author's Response: You're right, though it may not be as near the end as you think it is, I have twelve chapters planned in total, thirteen if you include the Prologue. Chapter nine is in queue, and I have chapter ten written, so updates will be frequent as soon as the mods move things along!
THAT WAS AMAZING!!! I'm sure that's exactly what was going through Remus' mind at the time and you kept Snape perfectly in canon, too. I wish I could give you 100, but sadly I can only give you a 10.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I wasn't sure if it was coming out properly. Thanks!
"Lily is pregnant!" And the dark clouds broke into a heavy rain. INCREDIBLE use of foreshadowing!!!!!!!!!! I was never good at it. I love all of your work so much that instead of adding all of your fan fics and poems to my favourites list I put you on my fav. authour list.
Author's Response: Wohoo! It means so much to me to be on someone's favourite authors list, when there are so many good authors. Thank you so much.
10! Tis very impressive how you can add comic relief to the serious tale. “If you could be serious about something for once in your life - ” “But I’m always Sirius.“ “If you make that stupid joke one more time – “ lol
I LOVE this fic!!! Are you ever updating??? Do you have it on FanFiction.net under the same name? I shall read and review it there if you do!
All of the parts that padfoo4life thought were funny I did, too. Please update soon! 10!!!
Author's Response: Tell you straight up, the funny was unintentional. I suck at writing anything remotely amusing. Thanks so much for reviewing because I promised myself that if I got rejected again, I was going to turn everything over to fanfiction.net!
It makes sense that the Marauders would take a while to become a group. Most authors make them become friends almost instantly, however, that does not seem probable. Great job!!!
Author's Response: Ooh, got it in one! Watch out, though. Friendships are a very delicate balance and they do change.
I can't see Harry acting like that, but then again, twas only a dream. I can really see Ginny as the girl for Harry. Please update soon! (By the way, I loved all the quizzes on your bio!!!)
Author's Response: yesh i do to. and it was a dream....
Tis good that you do not love Remus, otherwise I would be forced to attack you!!! Anyhow, great, and sad, fan fic! update!
Author's Response: Whip me with a wet noodle? (yeah I read your bio) Sure I don't fancy Remus *shifty look*, I just...erm...LIKE him. Yeah. Glad you like my fic, sadness is what I was aiming to acheive. I'm not gonna tell that I've updated, because every time I've said that, the next chapter has been deleted. So I HAVEN'T updated *wink*
Aww, poor Severus. You succeeded in making me sad; I really liked it! However, I too feel that tis more of a monologue than a poem.
I wish I was this girl! I want to make love to Remus!!!! Actually, I do constantly in my dreams...You probably did not want to know any of that. Anyway, I think you summed up very well how a girl feels when she takes a pregnancy test. I would not know from experience, but when I took Child Development class in schol we studied that type of thing. You get 10/10!
Author's Response: Don't get me wrong, I don't know from experience either! I kinda got the idea from this book I read... but the outcome is totally different, so I didn't steal anything!
AWESOME!!! Definate 10/10! I love Shakespeare; I even memorized some of his sonnets. "Await the dawn for madness to be sane." is my favourite line in your incredible poem.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really love that line too. It just worked with what I was trying to portray in my poem.
10/10! I think Remus is one of the only individuals not tainted by evil, too. I REALLY hope you continue this fic. And you have other fics, do you not? I'm going to go read them!
Author's Response: Aw thank you. I'm writing a "sister" fic at the moment, from Sirius' point of view...must get that finished...^___^
Thanks for the review!
Um...I shall not deny that twas well written, but I do not think that if he had a "good start" he would have turned out differently. Some individuals are just born power-hungry.
Author's Response: I dunno... if his father hadn't abandoned him, and his mother hadn't of died... we don't actually know that much about Tom, do we? I still think that if he had been shown love to start with, he would have learned to love. Actually, thinking about that, I don't think that the Voldemort thing would have happened if his father hadn't had left. H'mm, interesting...
Poor Remmy! I want to comfort him!