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The Perfect Cliché by MagEd
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Here's the story of awkward situations. The story of a stubborn girl and a determined boy. The story of broom closets, bra straps and declarations of affection. Here's the fairy-tale story of how Lily Evans finally fell for the bullying toerag James Potter. *one-shot*
Edited 10/26/08.
Date: 11/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Aaw well done. Very funny and totally in character. Never has snogging in a broom closet been so sweet and original.
Uncle Fred Calls Him Dick by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: 2008 QSQ Awards Runner-up for Best Post-Hogwarts
Harry defeated Voldemort. Harry married Ginny. Harry and Ginny had five children. Harry disappeared. My name is Lily Potter, and this is the story of what happened when my father returned after six years missing to find my mother about to re-marry. This is the story of myself, my crazy family, and most of all, this is the story of my parents and the man who tried to come between them. (pre-Deathly Hallows)
*Completed*
"Oh, I can so die happy now!" -Sirius Potter
Date: 12/01/06 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Uncle Fred is Going Crazy
I love this story, it's really original and quite sweet. Things might seem bad now but atleast Harry is still alive and things will work out. The only critiicism i would make is that the kids really seem to act a lot older than they are. I know 11 year-olds aren't bables but they don't say things like "did you jump into Dick’s bed as soon as Dad disappeared?" But that doesn't really matter because the story is fantastic!! I'm wondering if fred and george will be angry for abandoning his family or just relieved. i'm thinking ginny definately will be angry, he made her lose her spark!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked the chapter, thanks for the review. Hmm, you really are right, they don\'t exactly act their age. My only weak defense is that they\'ve been forced to grow up with everything that has happened. . . . But thanks so much for the constructive criticism, I\'ll be taking it into account. . . .
Date: 11/28/06 Title: None
Ooh what an eventful beginning! it's so sad that this is happening while they're still at school. I'm hooked.
Author's Response: I love hooking you! Thank you so much for your review. Comments always, always make my day. And since I am such a drama lover, you can expect plenty of tragedies and misfortunes in the rest of the story! Hugs, Cristina