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01/31/05

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Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 02/01/05 Title: None

i love this only critisism i have it takes you to long to update

Author's Response: Hiya doggstarr Im happy you are enjoying the story so far. I must say sorry for the delays but I'm just back to work after having two heart attacks last year, so my time as been cut down to say the least. I will however try my hardest to update the coming chapters a little quicker. All the best Wiganlad.

Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 02/18/05 Title: None

I just love this the lolly-pop lady made me laugh, and I so love cliffies they build the excitement but please hurry and update

Harry Potter and the Labyrinth of the Mind by Sandy Phoenix

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Summary: Harry has survived his fifth year at Hogwarts, but so has Lord Voldemort. Having lost the weapon he hoped to gain in the prophecy, Voldemort is launching his most daring plan since his return. Harry is again his target, but this time, he is not a target for death. Will Harry find the power to stop Voldemort's plan and protect the ones he loves?

Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 02/24/05 Title: Chapter 6: Home to Hogwarts

when are you going to update this story. I was really enjoying it.. I keep coming to see if you've updated yet Hurry up

Mysteries by Vloyski

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Summary: Harry is home, Sirius is dead and Harry has a long summer ahead to worry about the prophecy. He meets a stranger, learns more about his parents and develops a plan to overcome Voldemort. This is a complete novel-length story. I think you'll find this a gripping tale to the very end. Reviewers on other sites have given this a 10 out of ten.

Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 02/18/05 Title: Chapter 21: Ch 21 Latcho Drom

I have just had a wonderful night reading this fic from begining to end. What a feast. You are a terrific story-teller, truly on a par with JKR. I truly believe one day you will be as famous as the great lady herself.This is a wondefful tale told with verve, description, and flair. It made me laugh , cry, and filled me with awe for your creative brilliance, you are terrific. I read ' Gypsies ' first and then came straight to this, I am sated on your writings and can only say, this is the next best thing to the last five Harry Potter books and has helped fill the void untill the Half-Blood Prince. Thank You. One day You will be in print on your own behalf I'm sure of it. I'm of now to red the sequel to Gypsy, thanks again for these wonderful fics.

Author's Response: Wow, well I'm not sure what to say, such high praise. I hope that when you say Gypsies, you mean Band of Gypsies. The next in lineis A Debt Repaid, A Fatal Attachment, Gypsy Witch, Harry's Tale and the Assassins. Two independent stories are Mysteries and Destinies Child which I have just completed. They are all on several sites in their entirety. I hope that your good wishes will come true. it is one thing to write using someone elses characters and storyline and writing one's own. When and if I ever get published I will post my own name on this site. Thank you again for your special words. Natasha

A Push in the Right Direction by Weasley Mom

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's the summer between Harry's 5th and 6th year and he is not dealing with the loss of Sirius. Perhaps all he needs is a little push from beyond the veil.

Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 01/31/05 Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue

what a fantastic idea, and a great way for us sirrius lovers to get our fix lol. You have taken JKR's world and made it your own, this fic had me laughing and crying just like a true author would, find your own story and one day you will be published, i know it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I would love to write something of my own one day, now if I can just come up with a story...

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Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 02/18/05 Title: None

Love this two chapters together hurry up with next two

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Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 02/05/05 Title: None

What a wonderful way to go, a chapter of great pulchritude. More please.

In Essence Divided by Wintermute

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Summary: Harry Potter and Tom Riddle are strangely alike. And yet their choices are so different - what made the difference? A story that explores the possibility of Tom Riddle's soul within Harry and a journey behind the Veil to find Sirius. AU as of HPB, contains no spoilers. Main Characters: HP, TR, AD, Sirius, Ollivander, Alphard Black, Aberforth Dumbledore, Voldemort.

Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 03/03/05 Title: Chapter 18: Grave

I love this story and this chapter was so moving, well done update soon.

Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 02/18/05 Title: Chapter 16: Dumbledore's Worst Memory

this is great but do we have to wait so long between chapters

Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 02/12/05 Title: Chapter 15: Coincidence

I have waited so long for this chapter, but it's been worth it. Don't take so long updating next time cos I love this fic.

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Date: 03/03/05 Title: None

what a great chapter if you can write like that while feeling suicidal well WOW. Absolutely fantastic please start feeling better soon and hurry up and update. I give this chapter twenty out of ten lol

Author's Response: lol, that definitely cheers me up! Thanks alot!^^

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Date: 02/24/05 Title: None

This is definitely the best story I have ever read on any fan fiction site, and believe you me I've read one or two.. hundred...or thousand in the last few years . I did read this in the run up to Xmas( my favourite time of year) and I must tell you it was like being a kid again waiting for each days instalment, so thank you for that too. Browsing Mugglenet today I came across the clue thing I got Ralph /Rudolph and Nicodemus but some of the other things well what can I say except hats of to a great author(that means you) I'm sure anything you do will be successful in the published world, please let me know when you have anything published. I will definitely buy it. Good luck and hope it's not to long until you do get your name in Print. Thanks for an incredible story.

Oh to Remember, but Never Forget by MartiOwlsten

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Part One: Everyone knew and loved Lynn, but her ordinary and, well, muggle life isn't exactly what is seems. She's tried to forget the life she had before, but now she must face what she left behind... even the guilt. Starts right after GoF. Later chapters are post OOtP.

Part Two is now Here! Be sure to look for it as Recently added! (I was going to tack it onto this story, but realized that it may need to be it's own, as it has changed Genere)

Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 02/08/05 Title: Chapter 5: Truth Be Told

WOW what a fabulous story more more more like yesterday

Author's Response: Awww, thanks!

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Date: 02/18/05 Title: None

I like this I can see it turning into a good story. I agree with the others your English seems to be a little stilted, would I be right in thinking English is not your first language.

Author's Response: You are nery wise. My first language is not English. I belong to Pakistan. But I am trying to over come these default. Thanks for reading.

The Second War Begins by OhISee

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Post-OOTP Harry and his friends have much more to worry about than classes and homework. They face the constant threat of Death Eaters and Lord Voldemort as the Second War takes hold. As teenagers, their roles in the war are expected to be minimal. However, Harry soon finds he and his friends must play a larger role than they ever imagined. The story will also involve the beginnings of H/G and R/Hr. Chapter 28 submitted! :)

Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 02/24/05 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Girls and Quidditch

excellent chapter you capture the mood of teenage passions brilliantly. this story just keeps on getting better and better, keep up the good work. eleven out of ten lol

Author's Response: Wow, what a huge compliment! Writing the characters of teenagers is indeed challenging, and I am SO happy that you enjoy my attempt. Thank you!

Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 02/05/05 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - It Starts

aaaarrrrgggghhh or words to that effect I hate cliffies next chapter NOW please

Author's Response: Oooooooooo... quite demanding....it's coming, don't worry :)

Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 02/11/05 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Tonks's Fate

Find it hard to believe you had trouble with this chapter the writing is so fluid and well done. Loved Moony telling Tonks he loved her marvellous. Update soon this is great.

Author's Response: Oh! Thank you SO much! Sometimes I wonder whether the stuff I'm writing is any good. Thank you for the boost! Yay! Now I feel like writing more...thank you! Good ol' Moony, eh? :) He and Tonks are so fun to write!

Harry as Dumbledore: An Explanation in Action by 14hf

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: At the end of the seventh year, Voldemort and Dumbledore have killed eachother after an epic final battle. The trio discuss how this could have happened when Dumbledore wasn't part of the prophecy. The aim of the story is to argue whether Dumbledore could be Harry, using the characters to try and make the idea more real. Hopefully, by reading this, you'll be able to make your own decision as to whether the theory is possible.

Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 02/08/05 Title: Chapter 1: Discussions

What an incredible idea and it fits so perfectly into canon. Your a genius mate.

River Styx by Wintermute

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Summary: Remus Lupin and Severus Snape, framed for murder and sharing a cell at recently overcrowded Azkaban. Will the dysfunctional pair make it out of their cell before the wolf comes out during the next full moon? ::set in a hypothetical sixth year where Dumbledore has vanished and Regulus Black, who returned mysteriously from the dead weaves a dangerous intrigue::

Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 02/18/05 Title: Chapter 9: Cold Turkey

I love this you are so into your characters and the description of the apple tree, I can picture it exactly your a great writer up-date soon and goodluck in your exams

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: doggstarr Signed
Date: 02/15/05 Title: Chapter 8: Kensal Green

this is a great idea can't wait for next chapter, eleven out of ten and i don't want to do cold turkey so update quickly.lol

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