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Stoical Silence by lupinslover12

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Living in disappointment, the shadows of the past, Impressions and expectations that last. His whole life, Neville has been masking all the sorrows he has experienced. The broken expectations cloud his every existence, as he lives in such stoical sorrow.
Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 12/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Stoical Silence

Very nice!! Nice summary!

Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 12/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Stoical Silence

Very nice!! Nice summary!

Felix in periculis - In danger but happy by rik

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry and Dumbledore left Hogwarts in the night, looking for a Horcrux. Hermione and Ron, having had from Harry his Felix Felicis, are going to discover the plot of Malfoy. A missing moment in HBP.
Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 12/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: _

I liked your story and I wanted to congradulate you for writing and posting a fic that is in a language other than your native one!! I am taking Italian and we're learning how to write (a little bit) and it is very difficult to write in a second language, so I want to give you kudos for a job well done!!!

Author's Response: You are right about writing in a non native language which you didn\'t use habitually. It\'s really hard. I\'ve been studying english for a lot of years, but I managed a rough translation. It was accurately revised by my beta, Paisa. I\'m happy you liked my story. Thank for your review and your congratulation and good luck for your italian writing. ;-) Rik

The Progeny of the Pure-Blood by Sunny Christian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Holy Horcruxes, Harry! All of your BOOK SEVEN questions answered! Harry, reeling from the events of his sixth year, must now begin the hunt for Voldemort's Horcruxes. To his dismay, everyone in his life is keeping things from him! During his search, Harry uncovers his enemys' darkest secrets, as well as the secrets of his own past. The killing curse leaves no mark, so why does he have one? Why did it take Hagrid twenty-four hours to get Harry to the Dursleys’? His phenomenal adventures continue, and he will not emerge unscathed. Who will survive? Will Harry defeat Voldemort? And whose side are Snape and Draco Malfoy really on? If you like it, please review it! COMPLETED 6/27/2007!!!
Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 12/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - The Magic Carpet

Very good job! I'm proud to be your first reviewer! I really liked this story. You have a talent for dialogue. The first scene was ingenious! However, there are some areas where you need work that, though pertaining little to this chapter, have to do with th story. The first thing that needs work is your summary. Here's your summary as it is currently:
Can't wait until Book Seven? Wait no longer! Harry must begin the hunt for Voldemort's Horcruxes. Along the way, he encounters a mysterious stranger who may either help or harm him. Will he defeat the Dark Lord? Find out in this well-researched version. First of all, you don't need the first or second scentences as part of the summary. In my humble opinion, that detracts from the summary. The summary's third scentence, the one beginning with "Harry must begin the hunt..." could be made much more exciting and captivating! You're a GREAT author and if the summary was a little more captivating you would have SO many reads. Try to add imagery into your summary such as "Harry, nervous but determined, must set out to rid the world of Voldemort and his Horcruxes. Along the way, he encounters a mysterious stranger. Who is she? And will she help him or be detrimental in his quest to defeat Voldemort?" The last scentence is unnecessary too. Also, I think you should recatagorize it. I don't know if it will be a romance between Harry/Luci (though that would be awesome! You've written Luci SO well...I am so intrigued about her!) but you could categorize it Harry/OC under Romance. It's just that when people read stories, they're more likely to look under the "Romance" topic- it's just more specific, nothing more. I hope I wasn't too harsh about the summary, and EXCELLENT JOB!!!!! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: You are SO sweet! You totally made my night, I have to tell you. I will take your advice about the summary and rework it, since you seem to know what you\'re talking about! If you don\'t want to wait to read more, you can check out the link that I posted in Chapter 1. THANK YOU again! Happy holidays! Best wishes, Sunny

Broken Promises by Helley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is the story of Hermione's and Ron's love:

Of how it all started;

how it blossomed into something big, something never been seen before;

and how it all ended.

Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 12/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Broken Promises

Nice job, but (this is probably the second time this hour I've left a review of this caliber) The summary must be changed. That summary is not attracting readers/reviewers at all. Poems are barely read/reviewed, so they must have appealing sumaries. I suggest you look at Stoical Silences by lupinslover12 for a good idea of a nice poetry summary.
I like this poem a lot. It involved a lot of emotion and I did like the rhyme pattern. Said outloud, the ABAB stanzas were very quirky and cute. However, this poem did have a lot of sincerity and depth. Good job!!!

Author's Response: Thank you a lot. I\'ll see what I can do with the summary. Thanks fot your kind advice. I\'ve noticed it myself too that it doesn\'t seem to attract many people, sadly.

Memories and Love by Rons chick

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A short poem about Ginny and Harry.
Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 12/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: Memories and Love

.I liked it, it was a very good poem. However, I know it's your style, but I'm not a very big fan of stanza four, I think one line is a lilttle too short to be one stanza, but I realize your trying to put emphasis on that line. However, I think there are more visually stirring ways to do that without giving it its own stanza- italics perhaps. Otherwise, great job! I'm going to read your other stories later when I have more time and I really hope this is a sample of your writing abilities because I really LOVED this poem!!! Kudos!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Manda*

Wake me up when it's over... by muggle_child

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Hermione sat at the in her dormitory. It was dawn on the last day of the term. Dumbledore's funeral was to happen today also and then an hour afterwards, they would be heading home. Hermione did not want this day to end for she knew that this was the last moment of peace that she will have so she woke early to write a poem to remind her of the good times she has had with Harry and Ron and to help get through her pain.
Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 12/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a great great story! Good job! I really liked it. I don't mean for this to be so short, but there's really no suggestions to make- it was perfect! I just wanted to give you this as kudos and props for such a good story!

Death of a Rose by scars_are_cool

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Part I of The Rose poems. This can be read by itself, but if you want to find out what happens next, read 'Mourning the Rose' (as soon as it's validated.)

Ginny's final moments.

Weakly she parted her rose red lips,

As she gazed into the rose red eyes of death’s kiss.

Now her eyes once full of light

are dulling, never again to be so bright

Please review! All will be responded to.
Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 12/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Death of a Rose

This poem was very very good, but, as often is the case with poetry, the summary needs some more work. What I find best in poetry is if an excerpt of the poem is put in the summary. For an example of a good summary, I think you should look at Stoical Silence, a fic by lupinslover12. Now about the actual poem, I must say that I liked it a lot! I loved the whole pattern and ABAB rhyme scheme. I also LOVED how you constantly brought up the rose, weaving an intricate theme all through the story!! Great job, and you'l get many more readers if you tweak your summary to include an excerpt of the peom, because it's really good and I like it a lot!

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'ll put an excerpt of poem in the summary. The rose is my favorite flower and when I saw a pic of a red rose on a black background I just knew I had to write this poem. Thanks for the review and advice!

Cruciatus Cursed by Moony 62442

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Everything in life has a “what if?”

What if Voldemort didn’t try to kill Harry in the Atrium of the Ministry of Magic? What if he used the Cruciatus curse instead? What if Dumbledore didn’t come to the rescue until ten minutes after the curse had been executed? And what if Harry had been held under said curse for all ten minutes?

All the answers and more lie ahead…

Slightly AU as it is an alternate ending for Order of the Phoenix. Check out info. on this story on my profile!

***Nominated for a Quicksilver Award***
Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 3: To Lose and Find Anew

I really liked your story and everything but what's going on with the last two chapters...I keep getting "access denied"

Author's Response: Thanks! The next two are in the queue and haven\'t been validated by a mod yet, which is why you can\'t see them. This will happen two chapters at a time until we get to chapter eight. Thanks for reviewing! ~Moony : )

James' Christmas Chaos by stareyed_in_LA

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Twas the day before Christmas, and James was faced with a dilema. He forgot to get a present for Lily, so he must now find something that she will love. Little did he know that it will cost him something that he prizes above all things.


Stareyed_in_LA for Gryffindor. Winter Tales Challenge Prompt #1, "Gift of the Magi."
Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 12/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: James' Christmas Chaos

Awww!!! That was a really cute take on a classic story. However, I did think the story was a little unrealistic. JK Rowling has said many times the Potters' were very rich, so I doubt somehting like this would occur. Still, I hope that's not too harsh, and with all due respect, I think you did a good job on this! Love the line about the wierd pregnacy craving!

Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 12/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: James' Christmas Chaos

Awww!!! That was a really cute take on a classic story. However, I did think the story was a little unrealistic. JK Rowling has said many times the Potters' were very rich, so I doubt somehting like this would occur. Still, I hope that's not too harsh, and with all due respect, I think you did a good job on this! Love the line about the wierd pregnacy craving!

Author's Response: D\'oh! I forgot that detail! I almost never use Lexicon! I usually forget to do so. I added that AU warning just in case so that people will know what they are in for. Thanks for catching that!

With You by Niamara

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: [Ron-Hermione oneshot] Hermione had a terrible day at work, and she can't wait to get home and spend the weekend with Ron. Takes place after the final war. Rated 3rd-5th years because of minor language. Formatting fixed!
Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 12/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: With You

Great job! This story was so sweet and cute! I loved it! The only thing is, and this is a mere technicallity, perhaps you would like to reformat it, to put a lline between each paragraph. My latest story formatted incorrectly, too, and it was ever so annoying when people commented about it in reviews, so I'm sorry, but I find it necessary to point out. You'll get tons more positive feedback once you reformat it, I guarentee! This story was great and the only part that turned me off was the formatting, which isn't even your fault! You should be very proud of yourself!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have no idea why it isn\'t formatted properly, though... I did the same thing I\'ve done with all my stories, and it\'s never done this before... *headdesk*

Merriment by Magical Maeve

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Remus has fallen, and he finds Tonks sinking in her misery on their first Christmas parted by death. His words bring happiness back to her.
Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 12/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow...this is an absolutely wonderful and amazing poem! This poem is amazing! Just one minor query: How does Tonks recieve this poem if Remus is dead? Well anyway, great job and I really LOVE this poem!

Author's Response: The dead always have ways of communicating ;-) Glad you liked the poem.

Last Standing by Herminoninny

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is about the war against Voldemort!
Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: Last Standing

I really liked your poem, but I'm going to offer you some constructive criticism:
1. Did you know that your entire poemwritten under the heading of "Author's Notes"? I don't know if you can change that or anything but it's really bugging me.
2. I really don't like your summary. I think you would be able to get more reads/reviews with a summary that includes, possibly an excerpt from the poem, or something to that extent. I know, poetry summaries usually aren't that good, but I've read a poem once with a truly excellent summary- it's called Stoical Silence, by an author called lupinslover12 and it was on this site. I suggest you check it out for a model of a good summary.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I really loved your points and I shall try to act on them!! P.s. I don\'t think I can get rid of the Authors Notes bit, I have tried and failed, sorry it is that annoying.

A Gift of Faith by Gmariam

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Albus Dumbledore celebrates his first Christmas after the dramatic events on the Astronomy Tower. An old friend arrives with a special gift for the holiday, and a gentle reminder to always believe.

This story was written by Gmariam of Ravenclaw for the December Challenge extra credit prompt on Santa Claus and received First Place.

Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 12/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Gift of Faith

This is a FANTASTIC piece!!! I must say, I think this is the BEST one shot I've ever read. The summary is SO intruiging...this piece is so...wow...it's absolutely incredible...great job! I'm adding this story to my favorites (if i figure out how)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the fabulous review, I\'m speechless! I\'m glad you read this story and enjoyed it so much. I really appreciate you taking the time to leave such a wonderful review, it is so great to know when someone enjoys a story so much! I\'m so excited! Thanks again!! ~Gina :)

Lily Did You Know? by Madame Marauder

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: For the Winter's Tale "A Christmas Carol: Parody" by Madame Marauder of Gryffindor House. A parody to the song "Mary Did You Know?"
Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: Lily Did You Know?

Great jon! I laughed so hard when I first read this! The last two lines are so sweet!

To Walk a Mile by Thoth

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A series of short vignettes featuring some of our favorite (and not so favorite) minor characters.
Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 08/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Choices, Gregory Goyle

Wow I really really like this chapter!!! I love how you write in present-tense, that's difficult to pull off but you did really well!!!!

Author's Response: I\'ve never written present tense before, I had to keep correcting my \'was\' and my \'were\'s. Thanks a bunch!

The Final Farewell by mrsdan

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry says his final words to Albus Dumbledore and discovers within himself the power to go on and continue fighting.

This was once going to be a long story, but I decided to change it to a one-shot. You'll see why once you read it!

Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 08/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Final Farewell

Very very very cute!!!!! Good job!!! I loved Harry's speech!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it!!! :) *hugs*

A Fainting Fancy by Kayonaise

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A year and a half after the end of the war, everything is going well for Tonks; she’s newly married and has recently been promoted. But is all the hard work beginning to take its toll? Mindless fluff. RL/NT.
Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 08/31/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Fainting Fancy

So cute!!!! What a cute RL/NT oneshot!!!! I enjoyed the ending, good job!

Author's Response: Ta very much! I\'m glad you liked the ending, as I worked hard on it.


Reviewer: to_the_stage93 Signed
Date: 08/14/07 Title: None

I liked it. It was very good. However, I think, if this is in compliance with canon, the time line needs to be checked. Because Tonks's hair was pink when they came and picked up Harry at the end of the year, we can assume the thing with Remus didn't happen until after that, while she got out of St. Mungo's before the end of the school year so....following me? Anyway, good start.

Author's Response: Oh, well, thanks. I didn\'t really think about that when I started. I\'ll try and rearrange that, though, so thanks.

Author's Response: Oh, well, thanks. I didn\'t really think about that when I started. I\'ll try and rearrange that, though, so thanks.