I enjoyed SS(PS) and PoA the best of all. I still believe Sirius shouldn't have died. He was just too sexy for that *sobby*
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Why does everything happen so fast? And why Keira Kngihtley!?
I lik the conniving Ginny... muahahahaha!
Author's Response: Sorry, I would've told you this sooner but anyway... For some reason, the second chapter to this fic was rejected. I don't know why, so I don't know what to do different if I sent it again. I'm too busy with other things to bother trying again anyway. There is somewhere else you can find it, though: www.moonromance.net. It's still in the "New Stories" section, so when you get to the main page, click on that. Scroll down until you get to the section labelled "Harry Potter" and it's there.
A they live happily ever after... aah how I wish it were true... Loved your fic, though :P
Reading this a lot late for Christmas, but loved it!!!
It was so great! But why does Luna call Ginny Virginia then Ginevra? Anyways, I loved, but it was kind of sad. Stupid, stupid Ron!
Argh.... I would've reviewed sooner but my compy is a bit drunkx___x;;A great chappie! I really hope Raven tells them about her "situation" soon. Are you going to do any chapters in other perspectives? Like Raven's for exaple. Or you could switch perspectives throughout the chapter, separated with those thingamajigers! 10!
Author's Response: lol, I understand. My computer can be like that too :)
I probably will do chapters in others perspectives, for the upcoming "events" I think I have to otherwise it won't make much sense. Plus, when I asked, a lot of people said they though other perspectives would be a good addition :) Lily will always be the main perspective though. Thanks for reviewing!! I love reviews ^_^ They always make my day like a gazillion times better!
When I first got on this site your fic was the first I saw, and is by far the best! You included everything a reader could want, including angst. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That's one of the nicest compliments I've received ^_^ I'm glad you enjoy it!
Another great chapter! I think you should keep switching their perspectives to keep everyone interested. It would be more fun to know what they both thought of something then to only kow what one thought (my english teacher would die if she saw my grammar)!
Author's Response: Yeah, I totally agree. Lol, well it's a good thing your english teacher doesn't go on here.... and if she does... well, I'd be scared if I were you! hehe. Thanks for reviewing ^_^
I loved it! You chracterized boh Ron and Luna well, with being confused, the makeshift Quaffle, and the Blibbering Humdinger joke! The dialogue was wonderful as well. Iloved the way you made everythin seem so... magicky!
It was so cute! I'd enjoy a longer fic, I think.
“That arrogant…arrogant…ARG! That toerag is Head Boy! HEAD BOY! How did he make HEAD BOY! What is Dumbledore on? I mean, he struts around, pranking, pranking, PRANKING, and then Dumbledore says, ‘Gee, this kid really is an irresponsible bad influence, prankster, and all around jerk. Yes! He’d make a fine Head Boy!’”
Awwww... it was so cute! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks!! We'll update as soon as we can!
At first I thought Lily was a spoiled brat with no temper control, but she gets better. I thought James had no spine for trying so hard not to get Lily mad, but that outburst was enjoyable! (That row with Sirius was great, too. You can tell I like James' better than Lily :p)
Author's Response: At first Lily was a brat, not necessarily spoiled, though, and she was only mean to James. James rocks, it's alright to like him more. And Lily'll definitely get better. Eventually there'll be a thourough explanation as to Lily's completely mean behavior... I'm not sure where it'll be though.
At first I thought Lily was a spoiled brat with no temper control, but she gets better. I thought James had no spine for trying so hard not to get Lily mad, but that outburst was enjoyable! (That row with Sirius was great, too. You can tell I like James' better than Lily :p)
Author's Response: Ooop, double post.
Anr exceptional chapter! But I think James should have realized that none of their friends knew that Lily's parent's had died, and were only smiling at seeing them together. But James was so sweet! Why does Emmeline point out flaws? (i.e. "Operation: Flower for Prongs went through well," "But they're not dating." It might be just a pssinghing but Emeline seems very negative t me.) 10!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! James did realize, but he was so upset he didn't really think.
'Twas fluffier than cotton candy, but that's why it was so beautifully touching! It was... beauting! I love that song, too! 10, 10, 10!!!
I liked it! But it would be safer for Harry to have someone live with him at #12 Grimmauld Place? Hmmm...
Author's Response: Could be...but for over the summer, muggles watching him would be pretty safe. Thank you for reviewing!!!:)
Lily Evans and James Potter share absolutely nothing in common, not even their feelings for each other. Lily, perceived as a ‘model student,’ detests the handsome, popular, Quidditch star James, who she thinks to be something of a git. James, on the contrary, has been infatuated with Lily for years, and has let her and the whole school know it.
As time progresses into Voldemort’s ‘reign of terror,’ the two have to learn to trust, tolerate, and love each other.
Please note, this story is incomplete, and will likely remain so for a long time. I apologize!
Great chappie! Marlene needs an extreme attitude adjustment... I can't imagine how Lily can stand to be her friend.... I suggest you kill off Mick the prick before I do... lol But a nice way to give Lily her first boyfriend (he is her first, right?)! And everyone loves a righteously angry/jealous James and a Lily in denial! 10
Author's Response: Ah, Marlene will come around in the end...Poor Mick!!! He hasn't done anything wrong...*sad sigh* Haha, well thank you so much for the review. ;)
O______O ANother fabulous chappie. But I would've made the fight between Marlene and Lily longer... I heart reading fights... but anyway, I think I know where Lily's going.... ^___~ 10!!
Is Marlene going to stay the way she is (overprotective and such) forever? I wouldn't want that to happen... I'd have to start singing Britney Spears "Overprotected" lol But I'm loving your story! That 'one yet' bit (I know I'm late but I wanted to review at the latest chappie) by Dumbledore was genius! Why's Lily have to get orphaned so quickly, though? Will she tell Marlene all of it? Update sOoOoOon!
Author's Response: Poor Marlene! No one likes her very much, do they? Well, she wasn't written to be an extremely likable character, but she is Lily's best friend, so there must be something good about her! Hehe...to answer your question, I have a lot of character development planned with Marlene, but as always, things get a lot worse before they get better. :)
Thank you for the review!