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02/08/05

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Katherine, striving to master the art of story-telling. My stories are always so much better in my head.


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Where the Wolf is One with the Wild by LadyLupin827

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Just a poem about how excluded Remus feels because of his lycanthropy and how he wants to run away to a place where he can be at peace.
Reviewer: slytheringal Signed
Date: 03/16/05 Title: Chapter 1: Where the Wolf is One with the Wild

HeyHey, I loved this poem. I too am fascinated with Remus, and I think that more people should write about him. Check my poems out, maybe you should give me some tips!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! I would happy to read (and review because only evil individuals read and run) your poetry.



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Date: 03/16/05 Title: None

You should attach a warning to your fic - addictive! I've read it at least twice already today!

Author's Response: Thank you so much again :-) and please tell other pals to review too. I hope you read my other fic The Serpent's Embrace about Sev and Narcissa. I love that one. Married to the Godlike Lucius and has a long time tie to sexy Severus - oh yeeeessss (wish I was her!) ;-)



Reviewer: slytheringal Signed
Date: 03/13/05 Title: None

Hey, I'm the first to review this! i thought that this story was beautifully written, and I've added it to my favourites. I am a fan of Remus, and I think that he deserves a bit of romance, he is always shunned. Lily is just so right for him! On thing however, Severus hates Lily, so why would he want to work with her on a Potions project? On second thoughts, I think that he secretly loves Lily, his attitude towards her is just a pretence to save her. Why else would he hate James so much? i think that you should write more stories about Lupin, he is such an interesting character. I've written a couple about him, I think one up on mugglenet at the moment, a fic called The Downfall of Remus Lupin, about the older lupin. Check it out if you have a minute. I loved this story: it's the best romance fic I have read in a while, and thats saying something, I read tons of romancy stuff. I think that you desrve the ten I'm giving you. Well done.

Author's Response: A BIG thank you so much from a fellow Slytherin - what a compliment! I am overwhelmed! Lily had defended "Snivelous" in the books during the Marauder flashbacks, and I think she felt sorry for him. In their school days, I felt she and he could easily be paired - but in my story she did feel a bit afraid of him when his dark nature came out. He could have been torturing her too. I agree, I would not be surprised if Sev had an attraction and was angry at himself so instead was mean to her... Lupin is such a sweet character, and please go see The Serpent's Embrace - about Severus and Narcissa. Sev is my fave :-)



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Date: 10/03/05 Title: None

HURRY UP AND REVIEW!!!! Please. If you want. Maybe?



Reviewer: slytheringal Signed
Date: 03/24/05 Title: None

*sniff* I'm hurt you know, Annie amd Imo! I thought I was OK at writing... well, obviously not, by the sound of that. Maybe I won't write anymore :(. I'll leave it to you, Imo, you're someone who actually CAN write.



Reviewer: slytheringal Signed
Date: 04/15/05 Title: None

I like this chappie, very good. I actually read it earlier this week but because of the log in problem couldn't reveiw it. I agree, by the way, that D/Hr head boy/girl thing is becoming very cliched. How irratating must it be for her, stuck in that room with him. Hurry up and submit your next chapter, or let me read it when I see you!!! xxx slytheringal :)

Author's Response: I've muddled everything around in the story and am very confused. But the next chapter will be the best yet!



Reviewer: slytheringal Signed
Date: 03/18/05 Title: None

YAY! Your story's up! Didn't I tell you it would be today in Registration! It's great, but you have to write more and more and more and keep updating for all the other people in the world to see!

Author's Response: You're the all knowing...



Before They Met by GryffindorGoddess

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: James' inner voice guides him to befriend Remus.
Reviewer: slytheringal Signed
Date: 03/22/05 Title: Chapter 1: James and Remus

Aaaw sweet, well sorta. 9/10. Well done!

Author's Response: haha i know, it's kinda cheesy. thanks for reviewing



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Date: 03/18/05 Title: None

Cool! Loved this fic! Keep updating!

Author's Response: thanks :-)



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Date: 03/22/05 Title: None

like the story, but it sounds mean to point out that you said the 'tree' of them instead of the three of them.



Classified Marauders' Information by LadyLupin827

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily knows that the Marauders are planning something, but when she tries to find out what it is all they shall tell her is "Classified Marauders' Information." A fluffly and funny one-shot.
Reviewer: slytheringal Signed
Date: 05/03/05 Title: Chapter 1: Classiefied Marauders' Information

LOVED IT!!!!LOVED IT!!!!LOVED IT!!!!LOVED IT!!!! I love all your fics!!!! Update all yours others!!!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! Thank you! I am going to try updating everything very soon.



The Shoe Box by ColorsOfTheWind

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A cute little one shot I dreamed up. Remus Lupin finds a box of James' old poems and gives them to Harry to read.
Reviewer: slytheringal Signed
Date: 03/22/05 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Cool, like them! Yeah I agree with Diamond Quil on both counts -- Riddle me flowed best.

Author's Response: thanx dude! maybe i should use some of these poems for poetry class or something. : )



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Date: 04/07/05 Title: None

Hiya! LMAO! Loved this story! LMAO!



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Date: 05/03/05 Title: None

Great :) keep writing I'm not going anywhere.



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Date: 04/27/05 Title: None

LOL! Very funny, well written and I really enjoyed reading this! Well done!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I LOVE your poem about Remus. It feels really good to get praise from a writer I admire!



Little Ratty Paws by Vindictus Viridian

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Have you ever gotten halfway through an experimental kiss and realized that yes, this really was a good idea? Remember, it's the quiet, mousy ones you should look out for...

Sirius comes back from a Marauder jaunt with a sleeping rat curled up in his hair and a mood that won't quite go away.



A whiskery nose poked lightly at the side of Sirius’ jaw. Little ratty paws laid their claws lightly on his neck. Peter was awake and hoping for a little help changing back. Sirius held still and kept his breath regular. A small paw settled on his cheek. Sirius thought Peter could bloody well leave him alone and go back to sleep, since finally he was relaxed.

The pointy nose suddenly plunged into his ear and snuffled furiously, whiskers vibrating. Sirius wasn’t particularly ticklish, but everyone has limits. Sirius discovered his with a stifled yelp. “All right, all right!” he hissed, and fumbled for his wand. Pointing it over his shoulder, he performed the spell to help Peter back to his normal shape.


Reviewer: slytheringal Signed
Date: 12/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: Little Ratty Paws

Interesting story, seeing as I'm not the biggest fan of Peter, but I think you did a good job as I found him likeable and convincing. Well done!
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The Second by Slian Martreb

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Per Sirius: Until of course the first full moon after that in which the lot of us woke up at the crack of dawn sort of sprawled in our usual spots around the Shack, except for me and Remus, who had in fact ended up in a sort of tangle. I didn't kiss him until the wolf was entirely gone, you understand, but I don't think anyone had ever been that close when he came out of a moon and was back in his right mind and yeah. Bloody hell. Toes. Curled. James threw a shoe at my head and threatened the hose. Bah. He was just jealous.
Reviewer: slytheringal Signed
Date: 12/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Second

Now that, was CUTE!
Very nice, well done.
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