Katherine, striving to master the art of story-telling. My stories are always so much better in my head.
HeyHey, I loved this poem. I too am fascinated with Remus, and I think that more people should write about him. Check my poems out, maybe you should give me some tips!
Author's Response: Thanks!!! I would happy to read (and review because only evil individuals read and run) your poetry.
You should attach a warning to your fic - addictive! I've read it at least twice already today!
Author's Response: Thank you so much again :-) and please tell other pals to review too. I hope you read my other fic The Serpent's Embrace about Sev and Narcissa. I love that one. Married to the Godlike Lucius and has a long time tie to sexy Severus - oh yeeeessss (wish I was her!) ;-)
Hey, I'm the first to review this! i thought that this story was beautifully written, and I've added it to my favourites. I am a fan of Remus, and I think that he deserves a bit of romance, he is always shunned. Lily is just so right for him! On thing however, Severus hates Lily, so why would he want to work with her on a Potions project? On second thoughts, I think that he secretly loves Lily, his attitude towards her is just a pretence to save her. Why else would he hate James so much? i think that you should write more stories about Lupin, he is such an interesting character. I've written a couple about him, I think one up on mugglenet at the moment, a fic called The Downfall of Remus Lupin, about the older lupin. Check it out if you have a minute. I loved this story: it's the best romance fic I have read in a while, and thats saying something, I read tons of romancy stuff. I think that you desrve the ten I'm giving you. Well done.
Author's Response: A BIG thank you so much from a fellow Slytherin - what a compliment! I am overwhelmed! Lily had defended "Snivelous" in the books during the Marauder flashbacks, and I think she felt sorry for him. In their school days, I felt she and he could easily be paired - but in my story she did feel a bit afraid of him when his dark nature came out. He could have been torturing her too. I agree, I would not be surprised if Sev had an attraction and was angry at himself so instead was mean to her... Lupin is such a sweet character, and please go see The Serpent's Embrace - about Severus and Narcissa. Sev is my fave :-)
HURRY UP AND REVIEW!!!! Please. If you want. Maybe?
*sniff* I'm hurt you know, Annie amd Imo! I thought I was OK at writing... well, obviously not, by the sound of that. Maybe I won't write anymore :(. I'll leave it to you, Imo, you're someone who actually CAN write.
I like this chappie, very good. I actually read it earlier this week but because of the log in problem couldn't reveiw it. I agree, by the way, that D/Hr head boy/girl thing is becoming very cliched. How irratating must it be for her, stuck in that room with him. Hurry up and submit your next chapter, or let me read it when I see you!!! xxx slytheringal :)
Author's Response: I've muddled everything around in the story and am very confused. But the next chapter will be the best yet!
YAY! Your story's up! Didn't I tell you it would be today in Registration! It's great, but you have to write more and more and more and keep updating for all the other people in the world to see!
Author's Response: You're the all knowing...
Aaaw sweet, well sorta. 9/10. Well done!
Author's Response: haha i know, it's kinda cheesy. thanks for reviewing
Cool! Loved this fic! Keep updating!
Author's Response: thanks :-)
like the story, but it sounds mean to point out that you said the 'tree' of them instead of the three of them.
LOVED IT!!!!LOVED IT!!!!LOVED IT!!!!LOVED IT!!!! I love all your fics!!!! Update all yours others!!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! Thank you! I am going to try updating everything very soon.
Cool, like them! Yeah I agree with Diamond Quil on both counts -- Riddle me flowed best.
Author's Response: thanx dude! maybe i should use some of these poems for poetry class or something. : )
Great :) keep writing I'm not going anywhere.
LOL! Very funny, well written and I really enjoyed reading this! Well done!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I LOVE your poem about Remus. It feels really good to get praise from a writer I admire!
Interesting story, seeing as I'm not the biggest fan of Peter, but I think you did a good job as I found him likeable and convincing. Well done!
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Now that, was CUTE!
Very nice, well done.
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