02/13/05
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Welcome! To the Amazing Bio of Allison and Caitlyn!
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Why yes, we do know it's a wonderful piece of work but thank you for the complement! *makes mental note to send cookies*
Number of people on account: 2
Age: 16
Eye color: just kidding, we won't make you read all of these stupid, pointless characteristics!
Obsession info: Two HUGE fan's of Harry Potter and Lord of the Rings from California! You should see our rooms, they're COVERED in posters!! lol!...(additional note from Allison): WE LOVE LOST!!! lol, more on that later.
Our Life Priorities... HARRY POTTER: Although Allison and Caitlyn have their devotions to things other then Harry Potter, they do have lives {I know, miracle aint it?} and have faithfully put Harry Potter number 1 on their obsession list and plan to keep it there! We have both watched the movies and read the books so many times, it's not even funny... actually it is, ha ha ha!
Our Fanfiction
Hidden Worlds and Forgotten Secrets: Update: We have put this story on hiatus AT THE MOMENT but thoughts of continuing this story have entered our minds... keep on the look out. We have put our brilliant minds together and created our first fanfiction, Hidden Worlds and Forgotten Secrets! The story takes place in Harry's sixth year at Hogwarts and is about two exchange students from America. We know, we know, totally overdone, but there is a reason the exchange students are there. It's a big point of the plot, so check it out!!! The banner for this story is included below and was made by Caitlyn!
Love Is Pain: Another story has recently been created by Caitlyn called Love is Pain. She is a big fan of Hr/D fictions and decided to write a One Shot which has the possibility for a sequal. She cried while writing it and hates ending stories like she did. Well, it's all done! She's finally made the last changes to it and it's up and running on here on mugglenet!! Thank you so much HavABisqitPotter! Check out the banner I've created below!
All This Time: Update: Hey everyone! This is Allison, and I just wanted to let you know that I will pester Caitlyn to submit the next chapter soon! She's been really busy lately, and hasn't had time to update, so I hope some of you all will forgive her. lol. Hopefully, you won't have to wait much longer...:-)
All This Time: Update: Hah! The first twelve chapters are finished, a total of 82 pages in 10 font on Microsoft Word! Wohoo! I am excited and DETERMINED to actually finish this fic! So never fear! The seventh chapter is now in queue so it now awaits the mercy of the mods! *crosses fingers hopefully* Hope to see you there! ;)
Caitlyn is also working on a story called All This Time... and it's a sequal to Love is Pain I can't really give you any more information about it because then I might end up giving away to much of the story for those of you who have actually read Love is Pain. For those of you who haven't, please read it. It would make me feel really special and we all know how imprortint it is to make me feel special. I also created another banner below for the story, (yes, all the beautiful banners made on this page were created by yours truly). And please pretend you like it. Even if you don't just nod your head and act like you do, I have low self esteem as it is! lol. I know it's aweful, but hey, I tried! lol. (Note by Allison: PLEASE PLEASE HELP ME! I'VE BEEN TRYING FOREVER TO TELL HER THAT SHE IS A WONDERFUL PERSON BUT SHE WON'T LISTEN TO ME! And also I've read both Love is Pain and the part that is written from All This Time...and it's so good that I want to write some of it but I don't want to ruin it :-0...so if that helps you in deciding whether or not you want to read it...and also I think that Caitlyn will be submitting the first chapter of All This Time shortly...make any speculations about the title if you wish.) Um... see above for my answer to her suspicions.
Reviews: We love reviews! We cherish every one of them! One amazing reviewer left me with a quote which Caitlyn absolutely adores:
"Along with success comes a reputation for wisdom."~Euripides
Thank you so much criticalreviewer101! Keep reading our work everyone and let us know what you think!
General Info for our Fanfictions: If anyone has the courage to honestly say they have an issue with our story and gives reasons, we will personally email you thanking you for your imput. Infact, if you review our stories at all, we will personally email you back thanking you. lol. Please Read & Review!!!
Clubs and more: All ya'll members of the SBFC, we are members, so yeah! Sirius Black rules! If you would like to join and/or have suggestions for the club, PLEASE contact us, Secret Lily, or Lil Bouncing Ferrit! We'd love to have you join so just ask! We know you like Sirius Black, I mean, how can you not!?
ALSO: If you would like to read story's about Sirius, Secret Lily does an excellent job writing him! Check it out!
Caitlyn's favorite HP quote at the moment:
For those who have NOT read HBP...
"And do I look like the kind of man that can be intimidated?" barked Uncle Vernon.
"Well..." said Moody, pushing back his bowler hat to reveal his sinisterly revolving eye. Uncle Vernon lept backward in horror and collided painfully with a luggage trolley. "Yes, I'd have to say you do, Dursley."
Order of the Phoenix
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For those of you who HAVE read HBP...
Fav. Quote:
"Do you remember me telling you we are practicing nonverbal spells, Potter?"
"Yes," said Harry stiffly.
"Yes, sir."
"There's no need to call me 'sir,' Professor."
Half-Blood Prince
Page 180
Fav. Quote PERIOD in HBP:
(This section will NOT Change! IT's just so CUTE! Not romantic cute, but character building cute! I love these quotes:)
"Well, it is clear to me that he has done a very good job on you," said Scrimgeour, his eyes cold and hard behind his wire-rimmed glasses. "Dumbledore's man through and through, aren't you, Potter?"
"Yeah, I am," said Harry. "Glad we straightened that out."
Half-Blood Prince
Page 348
"...Well, it appears that Rufus found a way to corner you at last."
"He accused me of being 'Dumbledore's man through and through.'"
"How very rude of him."
"I told him I was."
Half Blood Prince
Page 357
"It's going to be all right, sir," Harry said over and over again, more worried by Dumbledore's silence than he had been by his weakened voice. "We're nearly there.... I can Apperate us both back.... don't worry...."
"I am not worried, Harry," said Dumbledore, his voice a little stronger despite the freezing water. "I am with you."
Half-Blood Prince
Page 578
OMG! I almost cried while I was Writing that! Those parts are probably my favorite quotes in Harry Potter EVER! I mean, from what you now know of me, are you surprised? I was balling my eyes out when Dumbledore died, but I think that Harry becomes a stronger person because of it. Compare his reaction to Sirius and his reaction to Dumbledore. HUGE! Anyway, I just had to say that. I love those quotes.
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Date: 03/01/05 Title: None
Ok, there are two of us on this account, so that's why I'm submitting another review! Love this story! I wasn't sure how Draco and Hermione were going to work out but you've done a nice job with it! Update soon, I can't wait to hear what happens!!!!
Date: 02/27/05 Title: None
Love the hanger! update soon! I love this story!
Date: 03/11/05 Title: None
What's happening with the next chapter, are the mods rejecting it? I love this story, update soon!
Date: 03/15/05 Title: None
Can't wait for more Draco and Hermione, you've done a nice job with this story. Update soon!
Through the Fire by Croyez
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: It all starts out with a meeting. Little do Harry and Hermione know what problems and dilemmas will surface along with their secret relationship. Hearts are shattered, prophecies are spoken, disappearances occur, dark plans are schemed, and discoveries beyond their understanding are made. Can their relationship withstand the perils it is subject to? Will their fate and worries stand in the way of true love? They can only hope not…
He didn’t notice it when his hand began loosening its grip on the edge. He didn’t notice it until he began to fall to the ground, but as soon as he did, he pointed his wand at Voldemort. He felt seventeen years of suffering, seventeen years of mystery and trials…he felt hatred like he had never experienced before, pouring out of him. He felt every single thing that had happened to him on Voldemort’s account, rising to the surface, almost drowning him in a mix of emotions.
And then, he yelled, with all his might, “Avada Kedavra!”
He wished for it all to end…for it to be over…
The Last Chapter (Twenty) is up on [July/12] Thank you so much, Stephanie!
H/Hr, and Book 1-5!Hermione! will only sink when there are none loyal to them. So there.
Date: 05/13/05 Title: Chapter 5: Villains Arise
I know you've updated since writing this chapter but I have some thoughts I wanted to write down about this chapter. BTW, these are just my takes on JKR's version of HP and suggestions; I love this story anyway! lol. I can't stop reading it! Ok, I don't really think that Sibil would admit to not being able to predict the real future; I think she actually believes she can predict things. Also, the only real predictions she has ever made happened when she was compleatly unaware of what was happening... therefore, I don't think Sibil would be able to predict the outcome of the war and Snape's sides concioulsy. I also have a different view of Snape (although, I do hate him with a passion) but it's very minor. I know from reading this review you are probably thinking I hate this story, so why bother continuing reading this, but I don't! I really do like the story, I just have a couple of things I wanted to mention! I'm giving you a 9 for an EXCELLENT plot and character development! I love this story and can't wait to read more! So sorry and please don't hate me! BTW, there are two people on this account and so if someone on this account reviewed later chapters, it was my good friend, Allison! ~Caitlyn
Author's Response: Your views are interesting. Sibyll does strike me, now that you mention it, as being proud of her abilities. Judging by her attitude in OoTP, I'd say she does believe she can predict things. I didn't quite think on that when I wrote, and so she's...uh, different. =)
On the predicting consciously...I think I wrote that she looked into her crystal ball, right? Well, if you're presented a crystal ball to look in for a Divinations final, and you're supposed to tell the teacher what you saw, then you are predicting/seeing those things consciously. I hope that makes sense, lol.
Of course not. Your criticism is onstructive and greatly appreciated. I love to know the different views on things that my readers have, and you've presented yours in an excellent, non-rude way. =)
Thanks very much! I'm glad you like the story, and no, I don't hate you. =)
Date: 06/01/05 Title: Chapter 17: Through the Fog
GREAT Chapter! Allison is actually sitting next to me this time, as apposed to me making up stupid things 4 her 2 say! lol. Allison: God Caitlyn! You're so weird! Caitlyn: So? Yeah so anyway, we loved this chapter! Update really soon! We both {but especially Caitlyn} loved reading the romance aspect of this chapter! lol. It was adorable! Is Hermione's mom's letter going to be in the next chapter? I can't wait to hear what she has to say about Hermione's reaction to her relationship with Harry! lol. Update soon, once again! 10/10... no. 100000000000/10 but I'll settle for a 10!
Date: 06/18/05 Title: Chapter 18: Expect the Unexpected
That was adorable! Even if you think it was a filler, I saw quite a bit of plot points, or possible plot points, hidden around this chapter. lol. I loved the *ahem* moment between Hermione and Harry. lol. They're so cute when they stop thinking. lol. I just have one question... are you ever going to have them, like, go too far? Not that I want them to, it's just what you've sort of been implying with their steady increase of, erm, passion. lol. Yeah, anyway, I LOVED it! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update really soon! 10/10!
Date: 05/16/05 Title: Chapter 16: Give Unto Me Your Troubles
He hee! Curse everybody not reviewing! I finally finished! lol. I think Allison was about to rip my hair out if I took any longer reading this! lol. She loves this story so I'm reviewing 4 her! Allison: Yes, I absolutely love this story! Caitlyn: Yes, OK, Allison, you can go now. This is my review! Allison: Fine! lol. Great job You are very talented! I love this story and can't wait to continue reading it! Are you going to encorporate the "midnight" scene you had to leave out a couple of chapters ago, soon? 10/10! I love it! Update really soon!
Author's Response: You'll be happy to know, that, because you brought up that midnight scene (hich I'd almost forgotten about, lol), it has been written into ch. 17. =) I hope you enjoy it.
I took long in updating...sorry about that.
Thanks! I'm so glad you like the story!
Date: 04/29/05 Title: Chapter 15: Preparations and Plotting
I just read your entire story, and I love it! It has the perfectplot, just enough of everything. I loved Hermione's letter. It was well written! I also enjoyed the twist about Godric's Hollow. I need to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I loved writing that letter. In fact, I've enjoyed writing all of the letters that appear in the story. =D
I'm so very glad you liked the GH twist as well. I hope you like the next ch.!
Hands of War by Bloodyrose
Rated: •Summary: After a long drawn out war, Harry searches the battleground for survivors. Eventually he stumbles over the last person you would have thought he would have hoped to see...
Date: 03/05/05 Title: Chapter 1: N/A - One shot
Ohhhh! I love it! You are SO talented! Are you considering writing other chapters including what happened in the battle? Like a trip back in time? That would be really cool. I love your writing and hope you end up adding to this incredible first chapter
Date: 03/05/05 Title: Chapter 1: N/A - One shot
Oh..My...God! That was excellent! I loved it! The writing of an author! Update ASAP, I'm hooked! (Just so you know this is someone else writing, since I've noticed that my friend has already posted a review)
Date: 06/30/05 Title: None
Hey! I just read the story through, chapter 1-4 and I love it! I can't WAIT to see how this goes! The *ahem* language is what brings them OOC and is unneccessar, but other then that, I love it! You haven't updated in like forever, though. Have you written the next chapter yet? I can't wait to read more! PLEASE update really soon! 10/10!!
Date: 04/26/05 Title: None
I really enjoy this story! I like the different side of Harry; your getting the message through that humans aren't perfect. I love it. Update ASAP!
Author's Response: what i find really amusing and equally flattering when people review on my story is that they see things that i hadn't until then...one example is the message that you were referring to, which somehow is similar to harry not being the perfect hero that most people think he is, really made me wonder if my story really contained something about humans not being perfect...and you know what...i'm glad people tell me what they see...which means i write with meaning...thanks for your comment...it truly means a lot to me...
Civility by SecretKeeper
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: THE LAST CHAPTER IS IN! Read, review and enjoy! The first battle of the second War- Dementors illegally issuing the Kiss on Death Eaters- A murder in the Weasley family- Voldemort's plans- Dumbledore's and Harry's struggle. In the midst of this chaos and hardship, Hermione is left feeling slightly disheartened. When Harry and Ron are temporarily unavailable to befriend her, an ironic and seemingly platonic relationship is born. Will it ease the pain of the War's influence, or will it only create further turmoil for a girl that needs anything but? And in the end, a terrible decision is left to be made; one that no natural person would envy.
Date: 06/13/05 Title: Chapter 15: Civility
Oh. My. Freakin. God! That was BLOODY amazing! You are a fantastic writer! How do u do it? AND, I had no idea you were a seer, you should take over for Trewlaney, lol! How in tarnation did you know that my first thought at the end of this was, ummm... sequal? Please? NEED ONE NOW!!!!!!!!! lol. That was amazing! Go Draco and Hermione! I would have reviewed the other chapters as well, but I just found this story! Great Bloody job! Please consider a sequal... in all your spare time I'm sure. lol. I wanted Draco to go with Hermione so bad! But I understand what Dumbledore was saying... I just don't like it! I think that Dumbledore's words shoudl be like a foreshadowment of the plot of the sequal... it could be, like, what he said ends up coming true... Hemione does get torchured by Voldie and Draco goes to save her! GO DRACO!!!!! he heee! Can't wait to read more of your work! 10/10... I wish I could give you more!
Date: 04/10/05 Title: None
I really like this story! I think it is a bit 'AU' (alternative universe), but it is a very interesting and fun read. don't stop posting, please!
Date: 03/06/05 Title: None
That's discoraging, I'm trying to get a story submitted by the mods right now and if your chapter isn't even getting submitted, mine probably won't! I love this story! Good luck!!!
Date: 03/05/05 Title: None
Just wondering if you have another chapter in the works, or submitted and waiting for the ok. Can't wait to read more of this story!!!
Author's Response: I do have another chapter, but again the mods aren't in a friendly mood lately so I've been getting sent back, so you will have to wait til the mods are nicer than they are now.
Date: 03/11/05 Title: None
I can't wait to read about the duel! The fact that Harry and Missy both had lightning bolt scars was a little to coincidental but other then that, I liked it! Good luck getting the next chapter submitted!
Author's Response: Thx for reviewing. Though I'm having trouble with the next chapter considering I messed up on chapter 4, but I'll try my best for the fifth chapter.
Date: 03/11/05 Title: None
What makes you say you messed up on Chapter 4? You can email me back a response if you wish... my email is listed in my bio.
Date: 02/27/05 Title: None
This is a really awesome story. I don't get the memory with Ellie and Tom though. I'm sure you will explain it in later chapters that's obvious. I want to know what happens next, submit ASAP!