02/13/05
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Welcome! To the Amazing Bio of Allison and Caitlyn!
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Why yes, we do know it's a wonderful piece of work but thank you for the complement! *makes mental note to send cookies*
Number of people on account: 2
Age: 16
Eye color: just kidding, we won't make you read all of these stupid, pointless characteristics!
Obsession info: Two HUGE fan's of Harry Potter and Lord of the Rings from California! You should see our rooms, they're COVERED in posters!! lol!...(additional note from Allison): WE LOVE LOST!!! lol, more on that later.
Our Life Priorities... HARRY POTTER: Although Allison and Caitlyn have their devotions to things other then Harry Potter, they do have lives {I know, miracle aint it?} and have faithfully put Harry Potter number 1 on their obsession list and plan to keep it there! We have both watched the movies and read the books so many times, it's not even funny... actually it is, ha ha ha!
Our Fanfiction
Hidden Worlds and Forgotten Secrets: Update: We have put this story on hiatus AT THE MOMENT but thoughts of continuing this story have entered our minds... keep on the look out. We have put our brilliant minds together and created our first fanfiction, Hidden Worlds and Forgotten Secrets! The story takes place in Harry's sixth year at Hogwarts and is about two exchange students from America. We know, we know, totally overdone, but there is a reason the exchange students are there. It's a big point of the plot, so check it out!!! The banner for this story is included below and was made by Caitlyn!
Love Is Pain: Another story has recently been created by Caitlyn called Love is Pain. She is a big fan of Hr/D fictions and decided to write a One Shot which has the possibility for a sequal. She cried while writing it and hates ending stories like she did. Well, it's all done! She's finally made the last changes to it and it's up and running on here on mugglenet!! Thank you so much HavABisqitPotter! Check out the banner I've created below!
All This Time: Update: Hey everyone! This is Allison, and I just wanted to let you know that I will pester Caitlyn to submit the next chapter soon! She's been really busy lately, and hasn't had time to update, so I hope some of you all will forgive her. lol. Hopefully, you won't have to wait much longer...:-)
All This Time: Update: Hah! The first twelve chapters are finished, a total of 82 pages in 10 font on Microsoft Word! Wohoo! I am excited and DETERMINED to actually finish this fic! So never fear! The seventh chapter is now in queue so it now awaits the mercy of the mods! *crosses fingers hopefully* Hope to see you there! ;)
Caitlyn is also working on a story called All This Time... and it's a sequal to Love is Pain I can't really give you any more information about it because then I might end up giving away to much of the story for those of you who have actually read Love is Pain. For those of you who haven't, please read it. It would make me feel really special and we all know how imprortint it is to make me feel special. I also created another banner below for the story, (yes, all the beautiful banners made on this page were created by yours truly). And please pretend you like it. Even if you don't just nod your head and act like you do, I have low self esteem as it is! lol. I know it's aweful, but hey, I tried! lol. (Note by Allison: PLEASE PLEASE HELP ME! I'VE BEEN TRYING FOREVER TO TELL HER THAT SHE IS A WONDERFUL PERSON BUT SHE WON'T LISTEN TO ME! And also I've read both Love is Pain and the part that is written from All This Time...and it's so good that I want to write some of it but I don't want to ruin it :-0...so if that helps you in deciding whether or not you want to read it...and also I think that Caitlyn will be submitting the first chapter of All This Time shortly...make any speculations about the title if you wish.) Um... see above for my answer to her suspicions.
Reviews: We love reviews! We cherish every one of them! One amazing reviewer left me with a quote which Caitlyn absolutely adores:
"Along with success comes a reputation for wisdom."~Euripides
Thank you so much criticalreviewer101! Keep reading our work everyone and let us know what you think!
General Info for our Fanfictions: If anyone has the courage to honestly say they have an issue with our story and gives reasons, we will personally email you thanking you for your imput. Infact, if you review our stories at all, we will personally email you back thanking you. lol. Please Read & Review!!!
Clubs and more: All ya'll members of the SBFC, we are members, so yeah! Sirius Black rules! If you would like to join and/or have suggestions for the club, PLEASE contact us, Secret Lily, or Lil Bouncing Ferrit! We'd love to have you join so just ask! We know you like Sirius Black, I mean, how can you not!?
ALSO: If you would like to read story's about Sirius, Secret Lily does an excellent job writing him! Check it out!
Caitlyn's favorite HP quote at the moment:
For those who have NOT read HBP...
"And do I look like the kind of man that can be intimidated?" barked Uncle Vernon.
"Well..." said Moody, pushing back his bowler hat to reveal his sinisterly revolving eye. Uncle Vernon lept backward in horror and collided painfully with a luggage trolley. "Yes, I'd have to say you do, Dursley."
Order of the Phoenix
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For those of you who HAVE read HBP...
Fav. Quote:
"Do you remember me telling you we are practicing nonverbal spells, Potter?"
"Yes," said Harry stiffly.
"Yes, sir."
"There's no need to call me 'sir,' Professor."
Half-Blood Prince
Page 180
Fav. Quote PERIOD in HBP:
(This section will NOT Change! IT's just so CUTE! Not romantic cute, but character building cute! I love these quotes:)
"Well, it is clear to me that he has done a very good job on you," said Scrimgeour, his eyes cold and hard behind his wire-rimmed glasses. "Dumbledore's man through and through, aren't you, Potter?"
"Yeah, I am," said Harry. "Glad we straightened that out."
Half-Blood Prince
Page 348
"...Well, it appears that Rufus found a way to corner you at last."
"He accused me of being 'Dumbledore's man through and through.'"
"How very rude of him."
"I told him I was."
Half Blood Prince
Page 357
"It's going to be all right, sir," Harry said over and over again, more worried by Dumbledore's silence than he had been by his weakened voice. "We're nearly there.... I can Apperate us both back.... don't worry...."
"I am not worried, Harry," said Dumbledore, his voice a little stronger despite the freezing water. "I am with you."
Half-Blood Prince
Page 578
OMG! I almost cried while I was Writing that! Those parts are probably my favorite quotes in Harry Potter EVER! I mean, from what you now know of me, are you surprised? I was balling my eyes out when Dumbledore died, but I think that Harry becomes a stronger person because of it. Compare his reaction to Sirius and his reaction to Dumbledore. HUGE! Anyway, I just had to say that. I love those quotes.
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So long sweet memories by dreamergirl5
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: It has been 10 years since Hermione left Hogwarts. She has not seen or spoken to Ron or Harry since their seventh year. She married Draco Malfoy. It was her relationship with Draco that seemed to have ruined Hermione's friendship with Ron and Harry. Hermione is forced to relive these memories when she recives a letter from Harry telling her Mr. Weasley has died. Will they be able to mend their friendship? or will her love for Draco drive her friends away forever?
Date: 07/11/05 Title: Chapter 13: A long awaited battle
I just recently read the entire story through and I really enjoyed it. It was so much fun to read all of the implications turning into big plot points. lol. You really have a nack for it! One of the things I enjoyed most in this story, though, were the animal and M.O.M references you used. That was an odd way to put it but oh well. After reading about every new creature, I whipped out my "Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them" borrowed library book and looked it up in the book. WOW! You REALLY did your reaserch! It REALLLLLLLY bothers me when people make up creatures in their stories and don't take the time to check references which are already out there. You did a marvelous job with your references! I give you major props. In one story I read, the author wrote something like, It was the first time she had spoken to him since their fight or something along those lines. And then she had an author's note saying, Was it the first time? I can't remember and I'm to lazy to check! I mean, that REALLY bothered me! lol. So anyway, enough of my ramblings, GREAT job, I look forward to reading more of your stuff. You have a great style, and you spell check your work for spelling mistakes and Grammer mistakes. I give you props for that, too! I am VERY impressed! 10/10! Keep up the AWESOME work! ~Caitlyn, PhoenixCGandAC PS: Oh, btw, the ending was REALLY sad! I almost cried! I didn't like the fact you told Hermione to tell Harry and Ron that she didn't ever want to see them again.
Vampyr by Zetera
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: A tale showing excerpts from the life of Tom Riddle as he became Voldemort, and Severus Snape in his double agent role. Both of these tales are linked by the Vampyr.
This fic is totally wrong now since the release of DH and I find it completely annoying at this stage as it was written so long ago, well even before it was published on this site. But some very nice people liked it at the time, so it's staying up.
Date: 03/07/05 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Visions of the Golden Glade
This is amazing! It's a sharp contrast from your other story, Tom Riddle and the Half Blood Prince, but I like it never the less. I've always wondered how Voldemort came to be how he is and why Snape left him. I'm having fun reading about your take on both subjects and can't wait to read more! Ten all the way!!! Update really soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I love to write in different genres and experiment with different styles. Glad this is working out!
Date: 03/16/05 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five: A Twist of Fate
Can't wait to read the flashback! Good job, update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Updates asap.
Date: 04/21/05 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Worse Than Death
Wow! That was great. There are so many different emotions in this fic and I'm loving them all! I feel so bad for Avril, though. That would be terrible to be a Vampyr, but I have a feeling more detail on just how bad life as one of them can be. Keep up the good work and update really soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad that the detail is good. More on the way asap!
Date: 04/19/05 Title: None
I just read all four chapters, great job! I love this story and can't wait for the update. I did notice that you haven't updated this story in a couple of months and was wondering if you were going to come back to it or not. I hope so! Once again, great job. Poor Hermione, though!
Date: 05/07/05 Title: None
I just read the entire story and I'm LOVING it! Wow! I've been kicking my sister off the computer all day so I could read this! lol! Update really soon... is chapter 10 in queue yet? I know the updating process can take a while... my story has been in queue for about a week now! Anywho, great job! I'm giving you a solid ten... keep up the excellent work!
Author's Response: :-D Thank you SO much!! its so great to have wonderful readers like you all!! Yuppers, chappie 10 has been in queue for awhile, so hopefully the busy mods will have a spare sec to check it... keep it up!!:-D
Delightful Pain by Queen of Serpents
Rated: Professors •Summary:
Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.
Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.
~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!
Date: 04/15/05 Title: Chapter 3: Guilt
Wow, I just read all three chapters. That would be so terrible. I feel so sorry for Hermione. Ha! He feels guily now. Fancy that, a Slytherin feeling guilty! Ha ha! I can't wait to read the next chapter, though. Update soon! Do you have an average time for how long it takes you to update? Otherwise I end up checking on the stories I follow about everyday just to make sure. lol. I'm giving you a ten. Good luck! I just have one bit of advice for your writing, the rest is wonderful! I mean, the style, not the subject. lol. Past and Present tense is hard to distinguish between, I have a hard time with it, too, just try to work on it. Please don't take that the wrong way, though! Love this story!
Date: 03/06/05 Title: None
I know my friend, who is also on this account under PhoenixCGandAC, already submitted a review, but I thought you might like me to submit one as well! I liked the story and want to read more, but it did get a little confusing when there was no description after the diolauge as to who was talking. Do you live in America? that was random but oh well. Great Job!!!
Author's Response: Yes I do Live In America! Thanks for reviewing thats what matters the most! and also for letting me know that it was a little random. It will improve I promise!!!
Date: 03/06/05 Title: None
No, your story wasn't random, my comment in the email was random! sorry, I didn't mean to confuse you, I confuse my friends all the time! Great story, update soon!
Author's Response: i got it now!!! :P Isa
Date: 03/05/05 Title: None
This is a really good and unique first chapter! I'm now going to read the second chapter. You got me hooked on your story, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!!!
Date: 03/05/05 Title: None
You have me hooked even more than the first chapter! The only thing I think you should work on besides grammar and spelling(which I don't think is completely necessary, since people know what you're saying anyways, but whatever), is to have a bit more description when you're using dialogue. I love the plot and hangers and questions that I want answers to, though!
Author's Response: everything will be answered!! i promise my next chapters will improve !!!(in EVERYTHING) :P Isa
Date: 03/05/05 Title: None
There are two of us on this account, which is why there are two reviews from the same person in a row. I liked your story, but had a question about Harry using Hedwig to contact Lily and also Hedwig's speed with delivering mail. It seems a little fast to me and since Lily doesn't know she's a witch, wouldn't she be surprised to see mail delivered by an owl? Just a question, but I do like your story and am planning on reading your next chapter asap!!!
Author's Response: Well, she was surprised but i forgot to put some details! sorry... !«« † (Χª)† »»XD
Aching by Sincerity Angel
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: ONE SHOT. COMPLETE. Hermione reflects on the one who left her standing in the pouring rain aching for him. Excerpt They were never meant to be. "Then why does it feel so right?" a voice asked inside her head.
Date: 04/19/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I loved it! Great job, your writing is simply amazing! I looked at some of the reviews below and noticed a sequal was being mentioned. Well, it's up to you, and to me, the reason for a sequal is apparent; we all want to know what happens next. I think a sequal could be amazing, but I also think, for the sake of our crushed hearts if you decline, that it's also fun to just let the reader decide what happens next! Let us know what you decide and I will understand either way! Great job, once again!!! *10* all the way!
Date: 05/28/05 Title: None
This is a really cute story! I'm lovin it! lol! I can't wait for the next chapter. I just read the entire story through and think it's awesome! I loved the chapter "A kiss and a wink" Draco is hillarious! And EXTREAMLY sexy! God! I have the perfect picture of him loaded on my computer and I just have to get a new print cartridge so I can print it out! lol. Once again, update really soon! I love how you're moving the plot along! 10/10 all the way! :-)
Author's Response: *blushes*
Date: 06/29/05 Title: None
Hey! How's your beta problem coming along? I can't wait for the next chapter to come up and I noticed you need a beta reader. I have quite a bit of free time so if you'd like me to beta your next chapter, I'd be glad to do it! I have one story on this site at the moment if you look into people's writing as a reference and I have one in queue which I'm particularly proud of. lol. Just say the word and I'll do what ever it takes to get the next chapter updated. You can contact me through my bio page if you wish. 10/10 again! ~Caitlyn, PhoenixCGandAC
Date: 03/16/05 Title: None
That was really good, can't wait to read more! You are a really good author! Keep up the good work!
Date: 04/12/05 Title: None
Just wondering how the second chapter's coming. I can't wait for the next update!!! Are the mod's rejecting it or something?
Author's Response: The Mods were rejecting it because I was having grammar issues. And trying to get a BETA is on this system is like asking a 500 pound person to do a cartwheel. It ain't happening! It should be ok now though! Thanks for the patience.
Grace
Stranded by Queen of Serpents
Rated: Professors •Summary:
Now, they are left, lost and forsaken amidst a sea of chaos.
Pre-HBP
Ch. 9 - 20% complete
Date: 06/27/05 Title: Chapter 4: Of Limits and Levitation
Oh, that's sad... Hermione and Draco action next chapter? Next chapter up soon? How soon? Are you working on it yet? lol. Questions, questions, questions... oh! How is your fanfiction.net account doing? Did they tell you anything else? I'm so sorry that happened to you! This story rocks! I loved the part when the chocolate gang were about to - I don't know what they were going to do but anyway - and Hermione lept onto Draco. For a second there, I thought she was going to pound him for giving her the chocolate and that's why she had pushed him down on the ground but I like what you did too. lol. Update as soon as you can! I'll be waiting! 10/10!
Date: 05/07/05 Title: Chapter 3: Of Hunger and Honey-Brown Eyes
Hey! I read this story a while ago but I guess I forgot to review! Sorry! I thought I had. Anywho, I've been checking back to see if you've updated and have been disapointed when it shows you haven't. Have you written the next chapter yet and just been busy? Please update soon... this story rocks!
That Night by eothyne
Rated: •Summary: The story is Finished! Hermione and Draco are both embarassed about 'That Night" but neither can stop reliving it. This story delves deep into the minds of these two characters, going back to that night. Full of description instead of action.
Date: 06/29/05 Title: Chapter 5: Written in the Stars
Man that was amazing! I have to say that what I liked most about that story was the fact that they didn't... well, you know. lol. They kept themselves at bay and handeled their emotions in a mature manor. I'm still waiting for my first kiss and I hope it's as sweet as that one. lol. You're a great writer! Can you possibly write a sequal? Please? I have an idea for how you could write one...
Ok, so they can go on in life and stuff and then, Draco could, like somehow change so his hair turns a different color so he's sortof mostly unrecognisable and stuff. And because of something I don't know of yet, he can, like, change his name! Yeah! And then, he runs into Hermione somewhere and he recognises her but, she doesn't recognise him, and his name, so he goes along letting her fall in love with him... again? ... and he finally tells her his true identity and after he does, his apperence is altered back to normal... or something. Then she obviously gets mad at her and then they forgive eachother and live happily ever after... or something like that.
Anyway! If you want to use the idea, I would be MORE then estatic with joy! You have a real talent and you should use it! I hope you do and I can't wait to read more of your work. Loved the simple progression and I loved you progression of events. 10/10! You'll be seeing me around!
Author's Response: thats actually a really good idea, but I would feel bad taking that wonderful Idea and claiming it for my own. why don't you write it? I'll let you use my story line as a prequel because I'd love to hear your take on my fanfic. If you still would rather have ,e write it you'll have to wait some time. email me at authorschoice@hotmail.com