02/13/05
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Welcome! To the Amazing Bio of Allison and Caitlyn!
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Why yes, we do know it's a wonderful piece of work but thank you for the complement! *makes mental note to send cookies*
Number of people on account: 2
Age: 16
Eye color: just kidding, we won't make you read all of these stupid, pointless characteristics!
Obsession info: Two HUGE fan's of Harry Potter and Lord of the Rings from California! You should see our rooms, they're COVERED in posters!! lol!...(additional note from Allison): WE LOVE LOST!!! lol, more on that later.
Our Life Priorities... HARRY POTTER: Although Allison and Caitlyn have their devotions to things other then Harry Potter, they do have lives {I know, miracle aint it?} and have faithfully put Harry Potter number 1 on their obsession list and plan to keep it there! We have both watched the movies and read the books so many times, it's not even funny... actually it is, ha ha ha!
Our Fanfiction
Hidden Worlds and Forgotten Secrets: Update: We have put this story on hiatus AT THE MOMENT but thoughts of continuing this story have entered our minds... keep on the look out. We have put our brilliant minds together and created our first fanfiction, Hidden Worlds and Forgotten Secrets! The story takes place in Harry's sixth year at Hogwarts and is about two exchange students from America. We know, we know, totally overdone, but there is a reason the exchange students are there. It's a big point of the plot, so check it out!!! The banner for this story is included below and was made by Caitlyn!
Love Is Pain: Another story has recently been created by Caitlyn called Love is Pain. She is a big fan of Hr/D fictions and decided to write a One Shot which has the possibility for a sequal. She cried while writing it and hates ending stories like she did. Well, it's all done! She's finally made the last changes to it and it's up and running on here on mugglenet!! Thank you so much HavABisqitPotter! Check out the banner I've created below!
All This Time: Update: Hey everyone! This is Allison, and I just wanted to let you know that I will pester Caitlyn to submit the next chapter soon! She's been really busy lately, and hasn't had time to update, so I hope some of you all will forgive her. lol. Hopefully, you won't have to wait much longer...:-)
All This Time: Update: Hah! The first twelve chapters are finished, a total of 82 pages in 10 font on Microsoft Word! Wohoo! I am excited and DETERMINED to actually finish this fic! So never fear! The seventh chapter is now in queue so it now awaits the mercy of the mods! *crosses fingers hopefully* Hope to see you there! ;)
Caitlyn is also working on a story called All This Time... and it's a sequal to Love is Pain I can't really give you any more information about it because then I might end up giving away to much of the story for those of you who have actually read Love is Pain. For those of you who haven't, please read it. It would make me feel really special and we all know how imprortint it is to make me feel special. I also created another banner below for the story, (yes, all the beautiful banners made on this page were created by yours truly). And please pretend you like it. Even if you don't just nod your head and act like you do, I have low self esteem as it is! lol. I know it's aweful, but hey, I tried! lol. (Note by Allison: PLEASE PLEASE HELP ME! I'VE BEEN TRYING FOREVER TO TELL HER THAT SHE IS A WONDERFUL PERSON BUT SHE WON'T LISTEN TO ME! And also I've read both Love is Pain and the part that is written from All This Time...and it's so good that I want to write some of it but I don't want to ruin it :-0...so if that helps you in deciding whether or not you want to read it...and also I think that Caitlyn will be submitting the first chapter of All This Time shortly...make any speculations about the title if you wish.) Um... see above for my answer to her suspicions.
Reviews: We love reviews! We cherish every one of them! One amazing reviewer left me with a quote which Caitlyn absolutely adores:
"Along with success comes a reputation for wisdom."~Euripides
Thank you so much criticalreviewer101! Keep reading our work everyone and let us know what you think!
General Info for our Fanfictions: If anyone has the courage to honestly say they have an issue with our story and gives reasons, we will personally email you thanking you for your imput. Infact, if you review our stories at all, we will personally email you back thanking you. lol. Please Read & Review!!!
Clubs and more: All ya'll members of the SBFC, we are members, so yeah! Sirius Black rules! If you would like to join and/or have suggestions for the club, PLEASE contact us, Secret Lily, or Lil Bouncing Ferrit! We'd love to have you join so just ask! We know you like Sirius Black, I mean, how can you not!?
ALSO: If you would like to read story's about Sirius, Secret Lily does an excellent job writing him! Check it out!
Caitlyn's favorite HP quote at the moment:
For those who have NOT read HBP...
"And do I look like the kind of man that can be intimidated?" barked Uncle Vernon.
"Well..." said Moody, pushing back his bowler hat to reveal his sinisterly revolving eye. Uncle Vernon lept backward in horror and collided painfully with a luggage trolley. "Yes, I'd have to say you do, Dursley."
Order of the Phoenix
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For those of you who HAVE read HBP...
Fav. Quote:
"Do you remember me telling you we are practicing nonverbal spells, Potter?"
"Yes," said Harry stiffly.
"Yes, sir."
"There's no need to call me 'sir,' Professor."
Half-Blood Prince
Page 180
Fav. Quote PERIOD in HBP:
(This section will NOT Change! IT's just so CUTE! Not romantic cute, but character building cute! I love these quotes:)
"Well, it is clear to me that he has done a very good job on you," said Scrimgeour, his eyes cold and hard behind his wire-rimmed glasses. "Dumbledore's man through and through, aren't you, Potter?"
"Yeah, I am," said Harry. "Glad we straightened that out."
Half-Blood Prince
Page 348
"...Well, it appears that Rufus found a way to corner you at last."
"He accused me of being 'Dumbledore's man through and through.'"
"How very rude of him."
"I told him I was."
Half Blood Prince
Page 357
"It's going to be all right, sir," Harry said over and over again, more worried by Dumbledore's silence than he had been by his weakened voice. "We're nearly there.... I can Apperate us both back.... don't worry...."
"I am not worried, Harry," said Dumbledore, his voice a little stronger despite the freezing water. "I am with you."
Half-Blood Prince
Page 578
OMG! I almost cried while I was Writing that! Those parts are probably my favorite quotes in Harry Potter EVER! I mean, from what you now know of me, are you surprised? I was balling my eyes out when Dumbledore died, but I think that Harry becomes a stronger person because of it. Compare his reaction to Sirius and his reaction to Dumbledore. HUGE! Anyway, I just had to say that. I love those quotes.
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The Sweetest Sin by annie
Rated: Professors •Summary: In the years following Voldemort's victory in the second war, Muggle-borns must become slaves and servants to pure-bloods in order to survive. Over time, Hermione Granger has learned to suppress her pride and independence in households where she is considered lower than dirt. She thought she would be prepared for this new family, just like she was for all the previous ones. What she didn't know was that this new family was none other than Draco Malfoy's. Will she manage hold up when she finds herself struggling to withhold her sharp tongue, returning hatred, and...something else?
The last chapter of this story has been posted! Thanks for reading :)
Thank you to everyone who voted "The Sweetest Sin" as the Best Tearjerker in round 4 of the Dramione Awards!
Thanks to some of my amazing readers, The Sweetest Sin has been/is being translated into seven languages: French, Italian, Russian, Portuguese, Czech, Latvian, and Chinese. If you would like the links to any of the translations, please e-mail me or leave a review :)
Date: 12/28/05 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue
Wow. I very nearly cried. AND, you're right. You're completely and totally right. It's not quite that she moved on, more that for the last ten years, her love for Draco has been on display and locked in a steel box. She almost felt as though it would be a sin to his memory to let it go... subconsciously, I think she felt loving his as a sort of responsibility. Oh, ofcourse she loved him... who wouldn't? *sly grin* But in the end, she not only loved him, she felt it her responsibility to love him. So when she cried, her tears couldn't touch the love she preserved so placidly. But when she saw that Draco had finally allowed himself to move on - to live another life where Iris and he could become one forevermore - she realizes what she's been forbidding herself to see all along; all she needs to do is take away the steel surrounding the love... take it away and disown it. Only then can the love dissapear. It will never be gone forever, only muted for her existence. The rain storm is in preperation of what she's about to do; the solo raindrop hitting the love is like an announcement of the love she's forbidden; the love she's going to leave behind her as it should remain.
This chapter broke my heart. It really did. I could not believe he had died. I wanted him to come back so badly, but knew in my heart that he couldn't; it would only ruin both of their lives. It's almost better this way, although terribly aweful that Hermione should be condemned to go through this. I love this story and hope I'm somewhere on the right track with the metaphore. I am a HUGE Hr/D shipper and LOVE reading stories like this. I have adored your story from chapter one and have been reading it since you posted chapter 3. It's amazing and I have spent countless hours reading it when I should have been doing homework. I was on crutches for three months and therefore couldn't do P.E. Therefore, I was an aid for a teacher I loved and as the aid, was permitted to lock myself away in her office and read. After starting your story, I would ask her if I could go on her computer and read your story instead of doing homework or reading the designate books she had offered me. She grudgingly would agree and I found myself widdling away my time with your fantastic work.
Keep it going and continue to write. You're work is amazing and I LOVED reading the last chapter. I admit, I have snuck over to fictionalley to read your story because I couldn't stand waiting for it here. And, I was a little scared to read this chapter. A) I had to find time to read it and B) I always worry about what I'm going to say in the review for the final chapter. So, great job and you WILL be seeing me again! Yours Truly, ~PhoenixCGandAC PS: Sorry for the long review! 10/10 all the way; I wish I could give you more.
Date: 06/10/05 Title: Chapter 8: The Only One
Wow. That was really good! Huge props for writing a chapter long conversation! That's really hard to do! I love the interaction! Do you have the next chapter written yet? I know this sounds aweful but I think that the next chapter should have like abuse in it or something. I dunno, it just seems like the next chapter needs to be dark or something after this one. I know this one wasn't good, but in comparison to the rest of the story... lol. I know, I am very odd. I get it all the time. lol. Update really soon and I can't wait to read more. I hang onto every word and I clutch the arms of my chair as I read this story! It's amazing! 10/10 and update the next chapter!
Date: 06/12/05 Title: Chapter 9: No Idea
OMG!!!!!!! OMG OMG Oh. My God!!!!!!! That is terrible! AGH! I officially HATE Blaze!!! OMG! lol. He can go and burn! Great chapter, I finally know who her rapist is! lol. That is so sad! :( Okay, this is me thinking out loud. She was probably his servent or something, that or it happened during the war... or, no. It had to have happened after the war! I want to know MORE! lol. You should have her start getting, like, flashbacks of the incident because she finally admitted who did that to her and that it happened in the first place. Like, a dam that was broken when she finally admited the truth outloud. I don't know, I have way to much free time... school's like almost out, two more days, so there isn't any homework for me to take my mind off of things with. lol. I wanted Hermione to finally admit it to Draco, but atleast it's out now. Update really soon! I can't wait for more! Do you have the next chapter written yet? 10/10, update soon!
A Letter for My Love by Beth Brown
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry is getting married, and it's to the woman he loves. Isn't it? Then why does he still look at Hermione and never want to turn away? Why does her presence leave him breathless and a mere touch send shivers of desire through him, leaving him wanting more? Surely this is just cold feet. Yet a single letter changes everything and Harry comes to discover that what his heart truly desires has been standing before his eyes all this time.
Date: 06/28/05 Title: Chapter 6: Awakening
Wow! You're an amazing writer! Keep up the great work! I love it! I love the conflict, I love the plot, I love the character progression... I love it! There are only a few parts that are confusing and those occur with your uses of "he" and "she" and "her " and "his." It gets quite confusing, but I manage to figure it out! lol. I love your writing! Please update really soon and continue writing! 10/10!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and sorry for the confusion. A friend of mine challenged me to write a fic effectively without using the couple's names. So I tried, and clearly I failed, but i'll edit it once i finish the last two chapters.
Oh and if you like this, why don't you check out my other fic entitled "Torn". I hear it's interesting. (Advertising is grand.)
Date: 02/20/05 Title: None
This is a really great story! I really liked how you made all of the girls mysterious! I liked how you dropped certain hints so you can guess who likes whom, but you're still not quite sure. Please update soon!
Author's Response: thanx! I thought it would be cool if i did that. I mean, with Luna and her little brother threatening to blab all of her secrets! Thanx again! Just submitted chapter six: Seeing Things!
Author's Response: it is taking a while for my chapters to come up. if you want me to email you the chapters, send me an email at wildthingpiggyjj13@yahoo.com
i have chapters 8-thriteen done and ready to post.
Date: 05/14/05 Title: None
Bravo! Update really soon! I loved it! I just read all three chapters! Is the next chapter going to have fluff between the two again? Poor Hermione! Harry's completely OOC but for the sake of this plot line, it's ok... lol. :) Can't wait to c where u take this story!
Date: 03/16/05 Title: None
Just wondering if you've submitted the next chapter yet, lmk! I love this story and can't wait for more! Sorry about the last review! I was really hyper and felt like revieling all of the pointless phrases I've memorized!
Author's Response: LoL, thanks! I submitted the next chap a few days ago... it should be up anytime. Check back soon!
Date: 03/07/05 Title: None
OMG! I have a suggestion for your story, a couple actually! First of all, they HAVE to go on Splash Mountain, that's a give in! Second of all, they should, like, start collecting pins because they think if they collect enough of them, they'll be able to figure out where they are, or something. Oh, and they also have to go on Thunder Mountain Railroad. Just in case you wanted to know the voice on this ride, I've included it below, I pride myself on memorizing these things, lol!
Howdy Folks! Fer yer safty, keep your hands, arms, feet, AND Legs inside the vehicle, and be sure to watch your kids! And if any of you folks have hats or glasses, best remove 'em, 'cause this 'ere's the wildest ride in the Wiwderniss! (No that's not a miss spelling, that's how he says it!, lol)
Yeah, that's my favorite ride in Disneyland! YOu need any more lines from the rides, I;ll email them to you! Good Luck and update soon!
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks! I've got the general idea for most of them, but geez, I'll definitely ask you for the ones I don't know! Thanks again!
Date: 04/02/05 Title: None
We love this story, as we've said a million times before, tehe, and were just wondering when you were planning on updating!! Let us know in A/N or by email! Love this chapter, great job, can't wait for Haunted Mansion
Date: 03/04/05 Title: None
Ok, Ok. Both of us are resorting to crying ourselfs to sleep at night because we have no new chapters to read in this story! Please update soon! We're taking happy pills to stop the misery! (Actually, that's not quite true but it makes a good story!) PLEASE... whaaaaa... UPDATE...whaaaa... SOON!... ok, we'll stop now, love your story, obviously!
Date: 05/16/05 Title: None
Great Job! I love this story! Love the updates even if they did take a while. You were in Disneyland, though. Who can blame you 4 that? lol. I just had 1 complaint and that was the entire ghost thing. I think Harry, Ron, and Hermione would try to associate with the ghosts to get information about where they are as opposed to if they know Harry's parents. Other then that, it was great! Thanks 4 reviewing my story, btw! loving yours! Can't wait 2 read the next chaper! Remember to email me if you need the lines spoken on the ride! I have a thing for remembering stuff like that! lol.
Date: 03/19/05 Title: None
Yeah my friend can't spell. Anyways, I love that chapter. I love your story. I really think they should also go on the Matterhorn, and Splash Mountain. Brilliant!
Date: 03/01/05 Title: None
That was a really good chapter! I could see the ride and see Harry, Ron and Hermione walking through the lines and on the ride. I thought Harry's thought about some of the people laughing was truly hilarious, since I myself was laughing at everyone screaming last December on that ride! Another perfect and flawless chapter!
Date: 03/18/05 Title: None
Ohhhh! That was great! I love Haunted Mantion!(sp, whatever) I can't wait to read the next chapter, it was worth the wait. If you need any of the lines from Haunted M. just email me. Muhaha! A ten all the way!
Date: 03/06/05 Title: None
JW if you've submitted another chapter to the mods yet, I know they're slow right now. Can't wait to read more as i expressed in my last review. lol!
Author's Response: I'm sorry, I haven't posted yet. This one is creepin' along like a stoned turtle! It should be up within the next week or so; hopefully the mods will post it as soon as I submit it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03/01/05 Title: None
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha ha Ha Ha, and... oh ya did I mention that I am currantly LMAO?!!! I love that chapter! All of my friends are telling me to shut up about it but I can't stop laughing! You did a great job! THat was bloody hilarious in the words of Ron!
Date: 02/27/05 Title: None
I'm answering your question about when I went...December 18-19 when did you go??? I think your idea for this story is great!!! I wish I thought of this myself, but it's your story!! I think it deserves more than 10
Author's Response: I was there Dec 27-30... it was so fun! First time ever riding Tower of Terror-- it's my favorite ride in California Adventure! Well, maybe Soarin' Over California... who knows! I love em all! Thanks for R&R!
Date: 02/27/05 Title: None
This story is so awesome! I want to read more! You're making me mad, I don't like hangers! It does keep your readers hooked though! It's really funny, since I just went there last winter, and I love the trio's reaction to Disneyland. Are you going to include California Adventures somehow? Because if you do I think you should make the trio go on The Tower of Terror at night! Thanks for posting this very entertaining story!
Author's Response: I really REALLY want to include California Adventure specifically FOR the Tower of Terror, but I'm not sure how to do it just yet... I think that could be a good plot for a sequel. ;) Also-- you were in Disneyland this winter? Me too! When did you go?
Date: 02/27/05 Title: None
That's hillarious! I love it! Please update soon!!!!!! Indiana Joans... They are going to go crazy!!! Can't wait to read more.
Date: 02/22/05 Title: None
What? You are so evil! You can't leave me hanging like that! Great plot by the way... love the pink haired witch! Update soon!