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01/26/07

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Potions by Soap

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Hermione and Draco - an unlikely pair - go from intense dislike to true love in this story.

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 01/27/07 Title: Chapter 17: Battle

I really enjoyed this story. It held my interest so intently I couldn't stop reading it once I started! I discovered that I was glad it was complete & that I didn't have to wait to read any of it. You have such a unique flare for description, that I could envision the events as if I were right there as they unfolded. Loved it!

Agapanthus by CLee

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: A Sequel to Born the Day You Kissed Me

After losing Draco Malfoy, Hermione Granger is determined to have him back…so determined that she will go as far as inventing a spell that reverses the affects of the “Obliviate” curse. In this anticipated sequel, Hermione and Draco’s lives will collide, along with opportunities for Hermione to perform her new creation on her most valuable subject. However, when a new relationship between the two forms, will Hermione be able to summon the courage to expose their lost love? Will she reveal to him the missing portion of his life? Or will she simply accept the new Draco and without spells, attempt to revive the love that she knows is buried down deep in his soul....

This story is pre-HBP/DH CH 16 Coming Soon

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 02/02/07 Title: Chapter 13: Draco's Decree

Awesome story! Love the storyline. Plz post the next chapter soon!

Two Lattes from Hell, Please by Eilime

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Post-Hogwarts

Hermione sighed in relaxation. She was sitting in her favourite café, the cafe latte steaming cheerily on the small, round table as she immersed herself in the news of The Times. As she flipped a page, the newspaper folded annoyingly backwards and revealed the scenery beyond.

Hermione let out a piercing scream.

4th story in a series of Hermione/Draco one-shot (Check out my author page for more information)

Important announcement in my profile

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 01/31/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Loved it! I could actually feel the emotions within Hermione. Great writing.

Author's Response: Thank you, laceymoibella!

Dance is the Hidden Language of the Soul by Soap

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Set Post-Hogwart's, Voldemort has been defeated and the Wizarding world has returned to normal - well, as normal as Wizarding worlds could be. Hermione has a job at Gringott's, the Wizarding bank, but what will happen when an old enemy turns up as a colleague?

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 04/28/07 Title: Chapter 17: Mrs. Malfoy, again

This was a great chapter. I absolutely loved the part where Hermione got so furious with Lucius for showing up at the wedding that she kneed him! I laughed so hard because I could envision it as it happened. Exactly what he desrved and then some.

Ron's quip during an already agitated situation that it might have been him that blackened Malfoy's eye, was funny. Leave it to him to say something foolish like that at an inappropriate time.

Also, Dobby and the socks! Quite a fetish he has and I like how you worked it in. I enjoy the humor you insert into your story.

Lacey

Gemini Swapped by Cheshlin

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Fred and George have been experimenting with some disguising potions. Things get weird when one of their experiments swap their bodies, instead of disguising them.

This Story came in third in the One-shot challenge, Twins on the Beta Forums.

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 12/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: Gemini Swapped

Your story had me smiling throughout the entire time I was reading it.

I was quite curious to find out how long the effects of their new experiment would last. As well as what Fred and George would be doing when it wore off.

I liked how you included differences between Fred and George.

Very creative fic.

~Lacey
Participant in The Order of the Ravenclaw House Elves

Author's Response: I\'m glad that you enjoyed this! I\'m a twin, so I know exactly what it is like being one. I just put in things similar to what makes my sister different from me! :) Cyns

The Reminder by Misdemeanor1331

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: It's seven years after The War and Hermione Granger, the last whole member of the Golden Trio, is making her way through life as best she can. Then, a visitor from her past arrives, setting into motion a chain of events that would bring her closer to a man she never expected and a horror she had already experienced.

Through time and will-power, Hermione forced herself to forget the painful memories of her past. Could one man make her want to remember?

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 13: Two Steps Forward, One Step Back

Please tell me you have the next chapter ready to go?!

Author's Response: I do, but I have a busy couple of weeks ahead of me. I\'ll try to get my next one out relatively soon.

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Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 02/12/07 Title: None

Love your story! Hope you get the next chapter up soon!! Your last chapter was amazing!

The Man in the Box by the_evenstar

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: What happens when Ron gets a midnight visit from a strange man in a glowing box?

One of five finalists in The One-Shot Challenge – Muggle Artifacts.

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 04/14/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Man in the Box

That was amazing! A tv was not what I expected when I first began your story. I definitely had a good laugh! Great story.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! :D

Follow the Butterflies by Gmariam

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry Potter sleeps restlessly the night before his final confrontation with Voldemort. An unusual vision propels him through a poignant dreamscape where he encounters all those he has loved and lost. As Harry follows a strange guide on a journey both emotional and spiritual, he learns more about the power the Dark Lord knows not, and comes to finally realize how his destiny rests on the power of love.

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 12/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

This story is so profound and emotional. It is beautifully written. You put so much thought into this.

This is a fic that one can easily relate to in terms of love that they encounter and their reaction to the love in their lives.

~Lacey

Author's Response: Lacey! I can\'t believe I never responded - thank you so much for reading this story! I\'m so glad you read it - I really did put a lot of thought into it, and am still proud of it. Thank you so much for the wonderful review! *turnip hug* ~Gina :)

I Heard the Phoenix Song That Night by Cheshlin

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The reaction of someone who heard the Phoenix's Song the night Dumbledore died, and continues to the Holiday season.

Alternative words to the song I Heard the Bells on Christmas Day

This is for the A Christmas Carol: Parody Challenge from Cheshlin in Slytherin House.

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 12/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Phoenix's Song

Your peom was quite moving. Beautifully written.

~Lacey

Author's Response: I\'m very glad you enjoyed this. I had a lot of fun writing it! Cyns

Reverse Attrition by delta

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: She had always noticed him. Him, with his sleek hair and posh manners, his upturned nose and poignant eyes, and trademark smirk of his. She had always hated him. Hated the way he hated her and her kind, hated the way he could be so smart and yet couldn't see past his family’s preconceived notions of right and wrong. He was a bad boy with a sharp mind – the kind of kid she wouldn't usually have looked at twice.

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 01/29/07 Title: Chapter 1: Reverse Attrition

Beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you enjoyed reading this. :)

All Alone with Nothing but a Choice by Emily_the_Poet

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Written for Ravenclaw by Emily_the_poet

Sometimes it takes a nudge to see things as they really are...

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 12/14/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thought your story was well written from Draco's POV. I got to feel the inner conflct he was experiencing over becoming part of the Dark Lord's followers. As well as the tumult of emotions concerning his understanding that the muggleborns that he was supposed to despise, had done nothing warranting the deaths that were bestowed upon them.

Super piece of writing!

~Lacey
Participant in The Order of the Ravenclaw House Elves

Smells Like Sirius Black by Soap

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Hermione Granger finds herself in an unusual place, an unusual time for that matter. Through an unintentional mishap, she is tossed right into the mix with James Potter, Remus Lupin, Peter Pettigrew, and Sirius Black. Will she make it back to her own time without altering the future irreparably? And what will happen when she returns?

Sirius/Hermione

Thanks to everyone who nominated this story for a Quicksilver Quill, and congratulations to the winners!!

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 05/07/07 Title: Chapter 15: A Change in the Routine

OMG! That was heartwrenching! I could feel Hermione's pain when she knew that she had no choice but to return to the future-without Sirius. Well written! Kudos to you! On to your next chap!
Lacey

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 04/30/07 Title: Chapter 14: Quite the Scoundrel!

I have been following all of your stories for some time and you are an awesome writer!

I did not know how I would feel about Hermione & Sirius being an item; but I love your story!

I hope you get your next chapter done up soon. I am anxiously awaiting to read how Hermione has affected the future. I believe Dumbledore knows more about her capers than he is letting on.

I think it is rather neat how you have Hermione keeping in mind how all of the characters have turned out in the future as she is interacting with them.

Wonderfully written!

Lacey

The Wedding Ring by KASK

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily and James Potter were always happy and in love. In a way, they never had to try to make it work. But, going through a rough time, their relationship is pushed to its limits.

Written for the February One-Shot Challenge by Kask of Slytherin.

Winner of the February One-Shot Challenge.
Winner of the 2007 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Canon Romance.
Thank you everyone :)

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 03/28/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Wedding Ring

Heartwrenchingly beautiful.

~Lacey

Author's Response: Thank you!

Incomparable Love by Red and Gold

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:

What is the truth and what is the illusion when logical Hermione Granger experiences a vision - or is it a prophecy?

The warning is for a light, brief reference only.

HG/DM HBP One-Shot

Submitted by red and gold of Ravenclaw for the New Years Challenge #2- Dreams

**Came in Second Place in the Dreams Category of the New Year's Challenge!**

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 03/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Incomparable

What a great story! I was completely enthralled by it. What a surprise at the end that they really were a couple! Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and review! I love twisty endings that take one by surprise - I\'m glad you liked it! *hugs*

Full Moon's Lament by FenrirG

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A young werewolf awaits his first full moon with lycanthropy.

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 04/21/07 Title: Chapter 1: Poem

Poetry is not my favorite type of reading, but this poem is quite moving. I felt chills as I understood the sorrow and anguish the character was feeling. Wonderfully well written.

Author's Response: Lacey! *tackles* I\'m so thrilled that you like this even if you\'re not a poetry fan; thanks so much for reading and reviewing! ~Fennnnn

Deathcall by SnowyHedwig112

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: She lies on the blood-stained ground,
with people like her spread all around.
Hexed and cursed by the Death Eaters,
the vile servants of Voldemort.

Harry's thoughts and pain about Ginny dying. Please review!

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 12/14/07 Title: Chapter 1: Deathcall

Remarkably written. I could feel the heartwrenching pain that Harry was experiencing over Ginny's death. Great job.

~Lacey

Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!\r\n\r\n~Kathy

The Lone Wolf by Soap

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Three words:
Remus's First Kiss.

A completely fluff-filled one shot from the Marauder era. Enjoy!

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 03/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Lone Wolf

You are a wonderful writer. Loved the story! Keep up the awesome work.

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