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01/26/07

Reviews by laceymoibella

At the End Comes the Beginning by FaunaCaritas

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary:
We live. We die. We pass into the Great Beyond...

The Adventure begins.

~Remus/Tonks~
First Place Winner of '07 Autumn Ode Challenge!

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 12/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautiful, heartfelt poem.

I could feel the pain Tonk's experienced when Remus died. Well done.

I love your version of how Tonk's possibly died in battle. It is a missing piece that many have voiced they would like to know and I thought you wrote it superbly.

~Lacey

Author's Response: Thank you, Lacey. I\'m sure you know how much it means to have someone drop by and leave a review. Your praise encourages me to not only write more, but keep trying to write better! Have a wonderful Christmas. ~Fauna

Entwined Paths by FlightofthePhoenix

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Teddy Lupin has just said goodbye to his girlfriend Victoire Weasley before she heads off to Hogwarts for her final year and has some time to kill before he is to be at his Uncle Harry and Aunt Ginny’s for lunch. So he visits two people he never really got to know and makes promises for the future.

Second one-shot in The Teddy Lupin Files

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 12/14/07 Title: Chapter 1: Missing Them, Loving Her

Your story was absolutely wonderful! I could feel the turmoil that Teddy was experiencing while he was visiting his parents graves and once he arrived at Harry's place. It brought tears to my eyes!

You're depcition of Teddy, was superb. He is a character that we know virtually nothing about, but you bring an insight to him through your writing that is realistic.

You have every right to be proud of this story.

~Lacey
*Participant in The Order of the Ravenclaw House Elves*

Author's Response: Thank you very much Lacey! *Swells up with pride* ~Nicole

Ghosts of Memories Hidden by A Cappella

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: There was a time when the Bloody Baron sought for the Grey Lady’s affections. That time has long passed, but Ravenclaw’s daughter has realized the cruelty she inflicted upon him. Nineteen years after the defeat of Voldemort, she decides to mend the past, but the Baron has always been unreadable…

First place winner in 'The Epilogue' prompt for the Autumn Challenge!

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 01/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Ghosts of Memories Hidden

You did a splendid job with this story. It is beautiful and touching. One in which we see both the ghosts in a new light.

~Lacey

Ready As I'll Ever Be by lovely_witch

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's been two weeks since Fred's death and George is still refusing to leave his room. His family has become incredibly worried, and has had no luck attempting to coax him out of his room.

Will the Weasleys be able to convince George to come downstairs? Or will it take someone else to remind him that life is still worth living?

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 11/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: Ready As I'll Ever Be

Wonderful story. You wrote Luna quite well. I know she can be a difficult character for some to write but you did it superbly.

I, too, would love to see you write a sequel to this.

~Lacey

Author's Response: Thank you! It means alot that you like it, because I really enjoy your story as well. Luna was actually suprisingly easy to write, because I identify well with her. So many requests for a sequel! I guess I\'ll go get started then.

I Tied my Heart to the Tail of a Kite by Gin_Drinka

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: She wanted to go somewhere new; he gave her a world. She wanted someone who would understand; he was her best friend. She wanted to lift her feet off the ground, if only for a while...

He gave her wings. And with them he gave her his heart.

Always...

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 12/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thought your story was so beautiful. You showed how much Severus loved Lily.

Your last two lines were brilliant.

~Lacey

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m very glad you liked it.

Gold by Starmaiden

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Neville Longbottom finally has a chance to do what he loves: work with plants. Will this chance be just that, or will it be something bigger?

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 12/21/07 Title: Chapter 1: Gold

Marvelous story! You showed Neville at something he does extremely well. You did a wonderful job writing Neville.

~Lacey

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'ve gotten rather fond of him lately :)

Between Heaven and Earth by BlackClaude

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Fred and George find themselves between worlds in this retelling of the Castor and Pollux myth.

Written for Nan for the SPEW Halloween Exchange

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 01/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Between Heaven and Earth

Brilliantly written story.

I loved how Fred, as much as he desired to return to his loved ones and all he had left behind, was not willing to allow George to sacrifice his life.

I could empathize with George and how, out of desperation, he was willing to give up a portion of his life to be reunited with Fred.

Loved the line, "Give 'em hell from me."

~Lacey

Wishes by the Fireside by dancingwithneville

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Christmas is supposed to be filled with friends and family. Although when Ginny finds out she may be spending it alone all she can hope is that her wish might be granted by the fireside.

Ginny/Neville

Submitted by dancingwithneville a proud Ravenclaw for the Winter's Challenge, By the Fireside prompt.

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 01/25/08 Title: Chapter 1: Wishes by the Fireside

Brilliant story. I loved it. Keep up the super writing.

~Lacey

Author's Response: Thank You Lacey! I\'m glad you like it!

Author's Response: Thank you also for the encouragement!

Author's Response: Thank you also for the encouragement!

A Popped Bubble by youngrowling

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: After having suffered years of torment from working in one of the lowest possible positions in the Ministry of Magic, Hermione’s dreams were finally coming true. She had been assigned to train side-by-side with one of the leading heads in the Ministry. Nothing could have burst her bubble of happiness, well, at least until she discovered the name of her new “boss”.

Reviewer: laceymoibella Signed
Date: 07/07/10 Title: Chapter 8: Final Pop

I enjoyed your story. The storyline was great. The only concern I had was that their relationship seemed rushed.

In a matter of 3 weeks and Draco fell in love with Hermione and told her so. I would have liked it more had you stretched it out over a few mths instead. Had more animosity between them for a while since they were never friends at Hogwarts and neither thought highly of the other. Build up their trust on one another for founded reasons. Then the realtionship emerges.

I do look forward to seeing more stories by you.

~Lacey

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