Author banner by Emily (HorseLover), Knight of the Turnip Table.
Hello everyone, I'm an adult female student from India. I'm obsessed with fanfics, like everyone else here at MNFF.
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I like all the fics in the series even though I didn't spot any connection, apart from the HBP spoilers in them.
In Nomine Amoris is beautifully written, and I'm sure it's going to be very long. Harry's interactions with various people is never out of character. Even though you've strayed a bit from canon in the vampire chapter, I found it okay.
The Susan/Justin fanfic was just excellent. I found the pairing believable, even though it's not official canon.
The only flaw I spotted was in the classification of Never. Since Harry/Other Character is a sub-category of Romance fics, I feel that the fic is better suited in the Dark/Angst category. In any case, I would advise you to put the fic in one category only, due to MNFF rules about multiple categories .
This fic is extremely funny! I re-read it six times and I was laughing all the way through! That just proves its finesse and calibre. The characters (especially Bill and Charlie) did seem a little OOC, but that was how you wanted it to be. Great humour, and thanks for the laughs!
Ok, I want to add more to my review. Upon re-reading the fic, I saw a deep, subconscious message in it that impressed me a LOT. Ironic, that Life itself is not alive.
I had a look at your bio, and I found out that you like rarepairs. You might want to read my fic Amor Non Mutuus (if you're comfortable with the rating and warnings). It's a Tom Riddle Sr./Merope Gaunt fic. You've mentioned that you want to read Tom Marvolo Riddle/OC fics, so why not give a shot at a fic involving his father? ;)
~Mini.
Author's Response: I\'m also glad you saw the deep side of the fic. If the fic made you think and laugh a bit, then it served its purpose. :-)
And I will have to take at look at your Thomas/Merope fic sometime soon. I think the only way I\'m going to find the kind of Tom/OC fic that I want would be to write it myself...which is so much work. ;-)
Ooh, strange and interesting story.
In some lines, I could see the humour: (Bode) even missed writing the overly-polite letters to the leaders of alien worlds, begging them to prevent their scientists from abducting the defenseless Muggles on Earth.
I laughed out loud at this. Integrating magic with sci-fi! *rotfl*
I felt sad for the new Unspeakable and the predicament of the Unspeakables themselves!
Overall, great story! *thumbs up*
P.S.: Thanks for the banner! I've got a question: are we allowed to submit the Harry Hospital Wing Challenge fics now?
~Mini.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. And I\'m glad you saw the humor, since that is definitely supposed to be a part of the fic. And you\'re very welcome for the banner.
As for your question, I\'m afraid I have no idea. You\'d have to ask one of the moderators running that challenge.
*rotfl*
OMG! This fic is simply hilarious! And so is the prequel! :D
To be constructive:
1. Most people were completely OOC, but in a funny way.
2. McGonagall's name is spelt as McGonnagall in some chapters.
To heap some praise (and put in some random comments in the style of this fic):
1. I laughed my head off for a long time over the most trivial of sentences.
2. I just discovered that I have a bizarre sense of humour.
3. You have an even more bizarre sense of humour. *lol just kidding. The fic is original!*
4. Write more humour fics.
~Dumbledore Prince
Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.
Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.
~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!
This story is just amazing. You've handled the subject quite maturely. It's not easy to have a gripping plot with OOCness (mainly with Draco and not much with Hermione and the other). I've found one of the few writers who can pull it off in such a brilliant way.
As a fellow writer of sensitive subjects, I know the guts required to post this kind of story anywhere. I've started admiring you for your bravery of writing about sensitive themes. I liked the ending, because in my opinion, a happy ending for such a stirring fic would be a wrong interpretation.
There are a few cliches in the story (the Head Dorms, for instance), but they didn't stop me from reading the story until the very last line. Again, very few authors have the skill to pull this off.
There are many justifications within the story itself that indicate your excellence in writing. All hail Queen of Serpents!
Tragic, yet heroic. Nice rhyming.
Lovely ending I'd say!
Lovely FF... but I began to read it when there were 29 chapters. I was so sure that Harry & DD were going to die. *sighs with relief*
I reckon he's dead, the Dark Lord can't be alive ... no matter how tragic this FF is, no writer in their right mind would want to destroy the world
Very sad! *cry*
Right, sorry! There must've been a glitch when I was reading! I think it's just the epilogue left now! great FF!
Excellent and tragic! *sniff* "This story is complete." I dunno if all the readers have read that line ...
Great chapter, that! EVIL CLIFFY!! Hope the DEs don't harm a single hair on Ginny's head ...
Author's Response: Thanks1 I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've finished the next chapter and it is well on its way. Hope you enjoy!
-HPotter7
If there's a delay, contact the mods ASAP!
First review! Good chapter ... very bizarre, DD at Number 4 ... (lol)
Author's Response: Thanks? that was a coment
Hey, your chapters have a lot of suspense in them and they're awesome!
Author's Response: Wow, you've been with me from the start and I want to say thanx! okay so anyways, down to buisness, I've decided to make my story a summer fan fic because I've pretty much run out of time! So after chapter ten the story will be over!
Thanks! Hey are you having login problems? You've responded thrice! BUMP, BTW.
Author's Response: Yes!
Yes!
Yes! lol....
What's the title of the next chapter? Have you submitted it yet? Can't wait to read!
Author's Response: I really want to tell you but i can't, this chapter is kind of confusing to write so i'm still touching up parts.
-Thanks for reading
HPotter7
Author's Response: I really want to tell you but i can't, this chapter is kind of confusing to write so i'm still touching up parts.
-Thanks for reading
HPotter7
Author's Response: I really want to tell you but i can't, this chapter is kind of confusing to write so i'm still touching up parts.
-Thanks for reading
HPotter7