I still don't see it up!!! AAAAAHHHHHHH! I'm going to die from pure frustration and sadness over not knowing what's happening!!! (I always give you a 10 by the way! And yes, you do deserve it!) I hope it gets up soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much dark arts master! Well I hope it will be up soon... they always take a long time to ok each chapter, I don't know why. It's frustrating for me too. Thanks for the 10... I hope you like the sequel just as much!
Wow!!! This chapter, just like the others, is incredible. The suspense is real, the charecters are real, the emotions are real!!!!
I love it, you have me glued to my seat. Literally, i found a bottle of superglue and I am glued to my seat!! Keep the chapters coming!
Author's Response: HA! Funny. I'm truly glad you like it so much. Wow. Thank you!
excellent job! I love every second of this story. You bring out every little aspect of each charecter, you talk about every minute detail, you, you, i don't know, you are good! Keep writing, don't ever, ever stop!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! what a high compliment... I don't know what to say... *blushes* I hope you continue to like it!
Thank you so much for updating!!! I love the story, this chapter was great! The battle was brilliant! I loved the way they fought back and forth, and, well, I won't go on forever! Please update soon, and I can't wait for the sequal! Also, yes, you are a very good writer!
This is incredible! Real action and suspense, I love it, I am addicted to it!!! Please update soon, there are a lot of us who are wanting you too, why havn't you?
It's Stuart Kavan isn't it? The second Voldemort started talking about Kavan and the bones I knew it had to be the servent, but I didn't say anything. Now, Kard Starvan (said it sounded similar to his real name?) Come on! He's Stuart Kavan isn't he? Oh well, please update!
Author's Response: Well, can't tell you... but surely I've given you enough clues to work it out by now, right? (A little JKR quote there for you.) I hope you continue to enjoy! :0)
Author's Response: Well, can't tell you... but surely I've given you enough clues to work it out by now, right? (A little JKR quote there for you.) I hope you continue to enjoy! :0)
Utter Perfection! A great opening! I love how you show both Harry and Hermione's feelings and then you write about the event. OOOOHHHH!!!!! The entire scene, and later flashbacks of the scene, gave me butterflys! Maybe we will see these love scenes get a little bit more graphic and, oh I don't know, even more exciting than they already are! You get a 10!
I loved how you dropped hints in the first chapter, and than here finally showed what Hermione had gone through--excellant style! I can't stand the fact that Harry is going to let her slip away however, NNNOOOOOO!
Oh my god! Your are an incredible author! You keep the suspense and mystery full mell with the Voldemort thing, but you don't reveal what he's actually up to!! It keeps us reading! I love your style, I love where this is going.
Wow! All I can say is-Harry, be a Neville! That bedroom scene really had me in stitches, I loved it. I am completely shocked and in suspense as to how Voldemort is climbing inside of Hermiones usually perfect brain-I must find out! Great job, you rock!!
Draco fancies Ginny!!!! She's a Weasley! For some reason, when you think about it, it was bound to happen, but when it did it was a shocker none the less. I love the idea however and I hope to God that it will continue and develop in later chapters! I'm also hoping Hermione will lighten up a little? She's hurting my feelings?
I am a little confused, not criticizing 'cause i love it, but Hermione would probably be the first one to run to Dumbledore with something like this going on-wouldn't she?
It's the best chapter yet! The voldemort scenes have my skin crawling and I love it!
Author's Response: WOW. You responded to each and every one of my chapters. I'm so happy. Not a lot of people actually take the time to do that. I'm glad you like the fic so far. The whole draco/ginny thing will develop in further chapters but i won't concentrate on it as much as harrt/hermione. The reason why Hermione won't run to dumbledore will be made known in further ch also. Thanks again for reviewing!
Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.
Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.
~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!
I seriously don't know what to say--this story is scaring me, turning me on, and god knows what else all at the same time! I love it!
WOW! I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!!!
This is great, I love cliffhangers, they keep the readers coming back (let me tell you, that is a good cliffhanger!!) Anyways, as far as the Harry/Hermione relationship getting deeper thing goes- I loved it! (Yes, I do get my kicks like that! LOL!) But anyways, I hope we get some more "deepness" and I hope you get 6 up soon- I mean come on, you have a lot more than 10 reviews! lets go, i can't wait any longer!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm hoping to have 6 up soon, but I've been uber busy latly...should be soon...Thanks again!
WOW! I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!!! This is great, I love cliffhangers, they keep the readers coming back (let me tell you, that is a good cliffhanger!!) Anyways, as far as the Harry/Hermione relationship getting deeper thing goes- I loved it! (Yes, I do get my kicks like that! LOL!) But anyways, I hope we get some more "deepness" and I hope you get 6 up soon- I mean come on, you have a lot more than 10 reviews! lets go, i can't wait any longer!
Very very well done!!! loved the fluff, yes, we did need it!!! But I'm loosing my mind-- Are they gonna do it or not!!!! You can't go and get a body all worked up like that and then just drop them!!! AGGHGH! Okay, I'm better now!! Update quick, I can't wait to see what's up with Wormtail. I hope he's going to help Harry!
Very good! I am loving this story! Really! Please update soon! I'm anxious to start seeing some really steamy scenes between Harry and Hermione!
Author's Response: Steamy scenes...eh? Well, Harry is a bit of a doof, but things will be starting to heat up in the next chapter or so...mind Hermione isn't a big slut, so this isn't going to be turning into anything NC-17, but hey, I aim to please...*winks*
I just want you to know that your torturing me!! But it's okay, I need it! Have a great time in georgia, I am sooo jealous! All this Harry/Hermione action is really getting to me! I can't stand that your not going to update soon! What will I do! Anyways, I'll shut up now! Have fun, great Chap, always a 10!
A story about how the love between two people can turn out to be more than just love, but a life saving experiance. Plenty of suspense and twists and turns! Please Review: tell me you love it, hate it, want to change this or that, hell, tell me all about the secret conversation you and your cat had last night! Just review!
The Sequal is up! Look for Love Fulfilled in the Dark/Angst section by me! the dark arts master! So go read it, now! It's even better than the first one!
Just wanted to let you all know that I am very very sorry about how long it's taking for 11 to get up! I uploaded in on Monday, just like I promised! But it's taking the moderators a long time to read and approve it! Just wanted to apologize! I love all of my fans and I hope your not upset!
dark arts master
Author's Response: As you will all see when Chap 11 gets up, I asked for 15 reviews before Chapt 12 and the identity of Voldemort's daughter. I changed my mind, however, because of how long it's taking the moderaters to OK 11! I uploaded 12 just now, so as soon as 11 get's up, hopefull soon, 12 should follow fairly soon after! I hope you all don't hate and I hope you havn't given up on me! Much love!
FYI! my e-mail is legallyblond1988@yahoo.com! Go ahead and e-mail me if you want to discuss anything going on in teh story, the sequal, etc... I'll give you spoilers, excerpts, or maybe a whole chapter! Anyways, I'm just lonely and would do anything for some attention! That's why I love reviewers!
Hey you two!! You told me to read your story and I am. I love it!!!! Very original! If there is one thing that matters above all else in a story it is originality!!! I give you my props. Also, I am interested in joining the SBFC and I am working on a new fanfic called Saving Sirius.
dark arts master
Strongest Bond of Love
Love Fulfilled
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I loved your stories! You have to update the sequal ASAP! lol. This next comment is for everyone! If you would like to be in the SBFC, email me and I will email you the president's email address. In the mean time, take a look at the story we have posted on here called the Sirius Black Files. Love you all!
Hello again!! Chap two even more interesting than the first. Like I said, I give you my props on originality. I love the cliffie, it's very intriguing!!! Side note: Was Amanda in that dorm for a reason? Was she in there on purpose and not really lost?
Author's Response: Hmm, no. She really was lost... that's an interesting comment though. Thank you, it could change the future plot a little bit. He hee, cliffies are evil, but sooooo much fun to write. lol. Hope to see you next chapter and thank you for your kind words!