Again, Clancy's one of the best OCs I've ever had the oppertunity to read about, and seeing Snape . . . . Wonderful. I wonder what her reaction to finding out it IS Snape will be. . . . Yo've an eye for detail, and Molly and Lockhart were perfect, if I can't help but wonder what Lockhart's doing there. . . . Cheers!
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. Dumbledore is perfect, and Clancy's reaction likewise. I like how you've believably brought Clancy to Hogwarts, and . . . just wow. Still one of the best fanfics I've ever read. Cheers!
"I was speaking of viewpoint, Filius, not eye level." Snape to a T, that! Really, funny, from a PoV that isn't Clancy's. Wonderfulk job on Snape, perfectly in character and he feels real like he rarely does outside the books. And Dumbledore continues to be wonderful! Cheers!
Another good chapter -- interesting little predicament there, with Eloise and the veela eyelashes. And the buttons and the ant hill --- that was, in its way, very funny. The dreams, too -- weird and interesting. All in all, another awesome chapter! Cheers!
BUTTONS! I confess I'm having as much fun reading about buttons as you apparently did writing them. I have no idea why. The Veritruism (sp? I wish I could actually look aty the words as I review them) was interesting -- Clancy's answers to Snape's questions were particularly amusing, and the dreams . . . interesting to say the least! Good story! Cheers!
I can certainly see the comparison between PMS and werewolfism. Good chapter, though, I can certainly see Remus wanting THAT out in the open with a friend. Excellent characterization (odd, there are times you've actually made me like Snape. . . .) as well. Cheers!
I know mark my enjoyment of this story on the edge of a cliffhanger I would find annoying if there weren't another chapter to read! I like the way Harry's always in the background, but the focus is on Clancy and Snape (I confess I'd be too inclined to include Harry and the gang). The discription and characterization, as always, are excellent! Cheers!
heh . . . very, very funny. Parody is the best, and you've done a very good job at an origional one! Good dialogue, the narrator's funny. PS THanks for reviewing Magical Creatures Dateline! Cheers!
Hey, awesome: you're writing tyle is awesome, reminds me a bit of JK Rowling's. . . . Discription, characterization, giggles . . . all good. I can't think of anything to really critisize about either the action Harry's dream. Very, very good. PS THanks for reviewing Harry, Prince of Denmark! Cheers!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading!
Very, very funny --- Snape and chacolate fudge bars? That was unexpected but amusing. I like the part about the Muggle-born students dropping their things. Yes, very good, though there are a few missing commas and one missing question mark. Very, very funny, fun to see Snape outside his traditional role! Cheers!
Truly amazing. Discription and characterization are wonderful; Harry seems so much happier a hyper eleven year old than the one he is in the books, and Sirius was great, perfectly Ic. I can't help but wonder HOW he knew about Hedwig and the wand, though. Just a fluke? Other than that, it was AMAZING! Cheers!
I am impressed. Poetry is HARD to write, but you've certainly done it. A whole new perspective on Snape, and not one I truly ever expected to see. Great writing, definitely. All in all, very, very good fic. PS Thanks for the reviews! Cheers!
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much for such a great review!I'm surprised you liked it so much.Yay - someone finally reviewed me!
Hm . . . it has an interesting potintial, though Harry seems somewhat OOC. Good sentence structure, however, and interesting, very funny bit about the sheep theme. Snape vs. Harry, eh? Should be interesting. . . . PS Thanks for being kind enough to email me about Percy in a Pyramid. Glad you like the ending. :) Cheers!
Author's Response: Loki MM-
Thanks for reading and reviewing my story! I know I say that to everyone who does so but I mean it. I tried to follow your advice about Harry being OOC when I wrote chapter two. I think he's a bit less of it then, but not completely. I also appreciate the compliments.
Thanks!
Woah! Usually I review chapter by chapter, but . . . sorry, I got caught up in the reading a bit. Awesome, awesome story, btw. The discription is lovely -- vivid, real, and characterization are awesome -- Mr Weasley and Harry were both IC, and this new character had my interest. What's going on? By the way, it is very rare I give a 10 rating, but this fic definitely deserves it! Cheers!
Author's Response: Thanks, Loki! I'm so glad you like Nicodemus! By my reckoning there are roughly 20 people reading this story who are skipping over the Nicodemus chapters and only reading the cameos. They're in for a shock, since there's only going to be one more cameo between now and Christmas. And, besides, the Nicodemus storyline is so lovely that I'm just really sorry that they're missing out on it. Stupid people. :D Glad to see that you're not one of them.
I suspect this is the 'last cameo' you mentioned. And it was a good one! I'm glad to see that you've got a well-developed Muggle-studies class, and that was Percy to a T. I liked the discription, too, as I've said before, its excellent! Cheers!
Author's Response: That was indeed the last proper cameo. :) And I felt I that I HAD to do a Muggle Studies lesson -- the students would have to know about Father Christmas, since in my story he's a 'muggle phenomenon'. Glad you liked it.
I missed this, or maybe it wasn't there when I went to review. Anyway, I decided the time had come to leave you one last note, and to tell you this was as good as the rest of them. Cheers!
Woah . . . read the last for chapters, still awesome. I like the Nicodemus chapters, partly because I'm just enjoying the historical setting and new chapters, but the chapters about Dennis and Justin were very good as well -- awesome characterization and discription, to go along with a good concept. Cheers!
Author's Response: Thanks, Loki! The characterization kind of took care of itself, to be honest, but I'll certainly take full credit for the description. :D
And Nicodemus is about to become Father Christmas, I'm willing to guess. Awesome, awesome chapters here -- it's rare that I find a fic that excites me as much as this one does. The chapter with Mrs Weasley and Fred and George and Ron was really amusing, and the historical background with Oliver Cromwell is intriguing. Awesome story! Cheers!
Author's Response: You are welcome to make guesses, of course, but I couldn't possibly say whether you're right or wrong...
Author's Response: Okay. MuggleNet is now closed for Christmas, which is not something I had foreseen. :D If you want to read the final chapters of this story and can't wait until after Christmas (when MuggleNet re-opens to new submissions) then you can go along to CoS Forums, where I am still regularly updating the story. New chapters are added just after midnight GMT, so December 22nd's is already there. To read, go here: http://www.cosforums.com/showthread.php?t=21219.
Author's Response: UPDATE: It's alright. The staff have been really helpful, and this story will continue to be updated here on MuggleNet. Hurrah!
Almost sorry I mentioned anything . . . I'm really enjoying this story, and I like Ralph's character, too! The historical setting is great, as is discription (awesome) and characterization! I'm looking forward to new chapters! Cheers!
Author's Response: :D It's funny how everyone starts to really like Ralph when he gets drunk...
Author's Response: Okay. MuggleNet is now closed for Christmas, which is not something I had foreseen. :D If you want to read the final chapters of this story and can't wait until after Christmas (when MuggleNet re-opens to new submissions) then you can go along to CoS Forums, where I am still regularly updating the story. New chapters are added just after midnight GMT, so December 22nd's is already there. To read, go here: http://www.cosforums.com/showthread.php?t=21219.
Author's Response: UPDATE: It's alright. The staff have been really helpful, and this story will continue to be updated here on MuggleNet. Hurrah!
Woah! Sorry about this taking so long -- I thought I was going to miss the last chapters entirely for being out of town, but Thank God my aunt gas internet access. Still greatly enjoying both the characterization and the discription -- lovely job, and great cliffie! Cheers!