Loki becomes reviewer number one. I liked it --- Remus and Snape were both very much In Character, and the discription was awesome. If the story lives up the prologue, you've got an awesome thing on your hands here. Just one, minor thing: "Muggle" is capitalized in cannon. Other than that . . . wow. Cheers!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'll rectify my error as soon as I'm finished typing this response. Thanks for bringing it to my attention - and thanks for the great review, hopefully my writing can live up to my ideas!
Whee! I'm first reviewer again! "He looks a bit like you." "I know, isn't it great." "Poor kid." I love that exchange, very in character and very funny. Proof that there can be excellent comic relief in tragedy. "Through the class window that seperated them from Lily," . . . oops; you've got a typo there. a quote mark that doesn't need to be there after James carries his son to his wife. Forgive my nitpicking, I love this chapter, really. Everyone is in character an very funny. I take it Peter just joined Voldemort? And Lily and Remus were great; awesome job with them. All in all, an chapter of an excellent fic. Cheers!
Author's Response: Thanks - I try to do my best when it comes to exchanges between characters. Thanks for pointing out the typo, I must correct that. Don't worry about nitpicking, if it helps, then I don't care! We'll find out more about Peter soon. Thanks!
*laughs* Very entertaining; both as the Marauders themselves (I think Sirius was spot on, and of course Remus would be trying to keep those three in line) and as a parody of Shakespeare . . . . Hm . . . Middsummer Night's Dream, eh?
Well, if it's true Parody THAT should be interesting. . . .
Cheers!
Author's Response: ^_^ Thanks so glad to read that you enjoyed this.
Actually I won\'t follow the plot of Midsummer - that\'ll be too predictable. I\'m just massacring a title of Shakepeare\'s play and will be grabbing soliloquys from different works and try my hand at the sacraligious act of Hp-dizing them. *lol*
Wow. That's beautiful, really it is. (The granfather's Neville, right? You did a really good job of laying the clues, you know. . . .) Just . . . wow. I hate to repeat myself, but all I can think of to say is that it was awesomely, beautifully written. Thanks for sharing it with us! Cheers!
Author's Response: Hiya Loki, glad you found this little fic and that you enjoyed it! Thank God you figured it was Neville, I think I ended up confusing a lot of people!