This was fantastic. A great tribute to lost parents, and an awesome rendering of the Trio's loyalty. Definitely adding to my favorites- amazing.
That is such a sad story! Bellatrix once being nice, beautiful, loving? I loved the descriptions of her at her wedding, and I love that you've portrayed a Death Eater that can still love. The ending was phenomenal- "He didn't want to go to his grave knowing that he destroyed her." Ahh.. So good!!
There's nooo reason anyone else shouldn't've reviewed this! Get to it people!
Author's Response: *huggles Laur* Thanks so much. I love my Bella. I\'m glad you enjoyed the story. And thank you for being my very first reviewer. *more huggles*
Meryal,
This is great. I came to this category to check out the competition, and yours definitely seems a strong contender-- I'll admit I had to look up the word insensate :)
"Through butchery, a hero gleams,
promising wizards, he redeems.
Filling prophecies he never chose,"
This was my favorite part. I thought it a brilliantly concise way to describe the situation. You're really quite fantastic.
Good Luck!
(: Laurena
Author's Response: Hey thanks! I\'m glad you enjoyed it. I\'ll have to check out your story too.
Scribbler,
That was quite the cute love story. It was different from what we usually see on James and Lily--usually it's that she hated him from the start, then around third year he starts asking her out, and then around seventh she finally admits she's liked him all these years. Very cute, and very well-written. I'd like to see more from you.
You should post around Slytherin more, we're all quite friendly :)
(: Laurena
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments. Hopefully there WILL be more! Never had much to post in the Slyth CR, but I\'ve just joined the Conga, so you should see me around there at least.