I love this story!!! You have to update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Aww thank you! I'm glad that you like it! Actually the rest of my story is posted on www.harrypotterfanfiction.com. If you want to find the remaining chapters, then go there, go to Search and type in the Penname AmyChris. That'll take you to my bio page where my stories are. Thank you very much for reviewing! I'm sorry for the inconvienence.
ok sweet story but the charactors are WAY OOC its a little weird hamionie shouldnt hav listed that quickl yand should have worked to gain Malfoys trus im not tried to be the big bad 14 who critisizes but i want to help i really like it :)
didnt draco hug hamione in the 2nd chapter try to read each others chapters mor carfully
hon dracos eyes are gray not green
omg mel submit a chapter i want others to share the lovly storie oh please make chapters longer
Author's Response: You are so lucky I'm sneaky sss. I'm grounded people so I can't post till April 15. Sorry. Blame my math Teacher!!!!!
Very good but try to use a bit more contractions. You don't have to! but it would make the talk a bit more modern.
Author's Response: Thanks for your suggestion!
ok kinda cufused ron and herms are supposed to love each other but ron bearly says any thing i liked it though
Author's Response: Glad you liked it =). Hey, it took JKR five whole books, and still nothing....it'll happen eventually, but just remember: if the love is worth it, then it's a lenghty vistor. Teehee, cryptic-ness.
oh my I love it please up date soon