03/23/05
http://www.myspace.com/DeerKillerBeemer
Age: 18
Grade: college freshman
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Blue
Favorite HP book: umm...it's a tie between HBP and OotP, but OotP wins because Harry was finally the moody teen that I always wanted him to be!
Favorite HP movie: Most definitely GoF..although parts were cut out, the plot at least made sense and nothing extremely major was changed...at least they dumped Cuaron and got a decent director who knew what they were doing.
Okay, enough about me. Well, maybe not. I am a HUGE HP fan, and I am working on 5 HP fanfics right now. "Love Always, Ginny" is the first of the first series, all of which are finished, and awaiting approval. I live in MI, where the weather is constantly changing. Every five minutes, to be exact. I am also very involved in my school's drama program, forensics team, and music (choral) program. I write in my spare time, and I have nothing but time right now....so I'll probably be doing most of my writing and updating in the next few months. Some of you will probably be saying yay at this moment.
Also, I am voluteering to be a beta reader to others, as I'm pretty good at finding mistakes (except for my own according to the mds here at MNFF!) So, go ahead and contact me if you want to.
Please R&R, I really want feedback! Hugs and kisses to all of my fans!
Ciao,
Ari
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Date: 05/04/05 Title: None
I like this story alot. I would recommend showing some of Ron and Parvati's relationship so that Hermione can make up her mind for good!
Hermione's birthday by Beci
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: It's Hermione's 18th birthday, and a bottle of firewhiskey from the twins leads to an evening Harry will never forget...
Date: 05/18/05 Title: Chapter 1: Hermione's birthday
SWEET! I love love love love it! Who can imagine Hermione DRUNK? Keep writing!
Author's Response: I really enjoyed writing the characters drunk. Because we have enevr encountered anything like it in the series it gave me a kind of freedom to choose how they behaved in certain situations, within reason. Glad ya liked it and thanks for reviewing.
Date: 06/06/05 Title: None
One word needed: HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the story...Keep up the good work!
Surviving Sirius by Gemmika
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: It's sixth year for the trio and Harry is coping with the loss of his godfather. Who will help him overcome his trials, Ginny or a familiar stranger who could mean more to Harry than either of them know?
Date: 05/05/05 Title: Chapter 11: Head Over Feet
I love this story! People don't seem to like the Gem character as much, but I get why she does what she does. After all, she knows what people are thinking, being a Legilimens! Update soon, 'cause I really want to know who Gem likes! I just hope that it isn't Malfoy....we'll see, I guess!
Author's Response: Definitely not Malfoy.... eww!
Date: 05/05/05 Title: None
Ummm...yeah, can you say "laws of nature?"
Finally Home by Weasley Mom
Rated: •Summary: This story starts during the summer between Harry's fifth and sixth year. It follows his journey from the skinny, guilt-ridden Boy Who Lived to the Man Who Would Defeat Voldemort. Some H/G and R/Hr romance. Chapter 50 is up!!!! STORY COMPLETE!!! Written pre-HBP. This story no longer follows cannon.
Date: 04/15/06 Title: Chapter 25: Bump in the Night
And the prodigal son returns! Wow, this is the first story which I have read where Percy makes an appearance that has anything to do with protecting his family...normally, I don't like the git, but all I have to say is: GO PERCY!
Daddy by blondebouncingferret
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Post Hogwarts: Ron and Harry are sent to America for Auror training. Ron spends his last night in England with Hermione, and after returning two years later, he finds Hermione with a fifteen-month-old baby ...
Date: 05/04/05 Title: Chapter 5: The Talk
I love the story plot! Perfectly balanced, and of course, Ginny and Hermione have to get that cow of a girl good! Update soon!
Date: 07/05/05 Title: Chapter 6: Swing Low
Only one word can fully describe this chapter--PERFECT! It was absolutely perfect, and I am so glad that Ron and Hermione finally got a chance to talk without the witch hanging around. Update soon!
Harry Potter and the Punishment for Immaturity by Obliviate
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Mere weeks after OOTP's end, we find Harry in his room. He is unwilling to do anything but lie in bed, demoralized by the loss of Sirius. That is until he receives a letter. This is an AU fiction with some anghst and pairings of Hermione/Ron and Ginny/Harry. Humor is my primary focus however. Story complete. There is a sequel: "The Deepest, Most-Desired Wish." You can find it in the Dark/ Angsty section.
Date: 05/18/05 Title: Chapter 23: What Next?
SWEET! Harry's back at Hogwarts *does happy dance*! yay! Okay, I love this chapter--it's awesome! Keep up the good work...hopefully you'll still continue the story even though Harry is back to his normal self. ;)
Author's Response: The story will continue for a bt still, I think to chapter 25. And since Honeydude already ruined the secret, there will be a sequel. The sequel will focus on something Harry learned over the last five chapters of this story.
Date: 05/04/05 Title: None
I love this story! Perfect balance of new characters and old! Pleease update soon!
Date: 07/23/05 Title: None
Okay, I feel so weird, not having read this chapter yet! NEways, love the chapter, perfect balance. Personnally, the only thing I would change would be the length of the Quidditch scene. I would make it a bit longer. But other than that, perfect 10!
P.S. I like how you want to incorporate Dumbledore's death into the story. When I finished the book, I was crying so hard. How could JK Rowling do that? Okay, enough complaining...for now.
Author's Response: No, its all right! I'm so excited! My first review in three weeks! Well thanks for your devoted reading and your review! The Quidditch scene longer, eh? I'll look into it, personally I'm having more problems with later chapters to worry about that one but I'll see what I can do! Yes, I do want to make this fic canon and I've been brainstorming and writing down lots of ideas for the future of the fic. I'm already working on chapter 35 at the moment, its very intense, might I add, but yes, I'm going to get Dumbledore's death in it, Draco being "evil" and Snape betraying Dumbledore's trust and everything from HBP will be associated. Yes, this is a lengthy reply because I'm so excited that I got a new review! Thanks hun and I hope that you enjoy future chapters as well! :) Love DramaCutie
Date: 07/23/05 Title: None
Okay, I feel so weird, not having read this chapter yet! NEways, love the chapter, perfect balance. Personnally, the only thing I would change would be the length of the Quidditch scene. I would make it a bit longer. But other than that, perfect 10!
P.S. I like how you want to incorporate Dumbledore's death into the story. When I finished the book, I was crying so hard. How could JK Rowling do that? Okay, enough complaining...for now.
Author's Response: Ditto to last response! :)
Date: 05/16/05 Title: None
Love love love this story! Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Date: 05/17/05 Title: None
I love this chapter! Harry is such a gentleman, not pressuring her! And I love the Trisha character... she adds the perfect balance of old characters and new without being over-the-top! Keep writing!
Author's Response: Oh goodness! Thank you! I have to say this is the nicest review I've ever gotten! I was actually expecting people saying "Why are they close to having sex already?" Thanks so much about Trisha too, I tried so hard to make her a good character. Ooooh thank you again!! :) Two smilies for you! :)
Ancient Magic by kjpzak
Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Summary: Harry and Ginny are destined to have a love that endures. He Who Must Not be Named certainly thinks so. Could their love be the key to fulfilling one of his greatest wishes?
Date: 07/23/05 Title: Chapter 3: Ch 2 - Written in The Stars
I love this story! Even though the chapters seem to be a bit short, you write well enough to pull it off. Great story--I'm a total H/G shipper, and your fic has the perfect flow to it. Perfect 10!
Author's Response: LOL - my beta on Blood of the Heart told me the same thing - my chapters were too short! Blame it on my first chapter fiction - I didn't know I could write more. Ah well! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Harry Potter and the Blood Traitor by Huskers
Rated: •Summary: Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, a blond Weasley. It's Harry's sixth year. Voldemort is back, yet strangely quiet. A second prophecy. This is my version of what happens next. The whole book is written, along with all of year seven. I will post as fast as I can get the chapters past the moderators.
Story is now complete. Look for the sequel, I will be posting the first chapter tonight 6-2-05, and it usually takes 4-5 days for the mods to approve it. The title of the sequel is, Harry Potter and the Unlocked Mind.
Date: 05/18/05 Title: Chapter 1: Letters
Yay! I love your story! Something where it isn't centered around just one character but all of them! I hope you get your 300 reviews!
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like the story. Still got a ways to go for the reviews, but it is possible.
Date: 05/04/05 Title: None
I like this story alot. Please update soon! Finally, a story about Lily and Petunia! It's kind of hard to believe that she was ever a pleasant person...great job! 10/10!
Date: 06/06/05 Title: None
WOW!! I loved it! Clever how you made it so that James and Lily know that they are going to marry, and Lily doesn't like it!! NEways, I have one thing to point out. Lily doesn't have orange hair like the Weasleys, she has auburn hair. But whatever. Update soon!
Author's Response: I've never dyed my hair, but it's changed colour about three times. Orange hair in particular tends to mellow with age - by my guess, although she has auburn hair in later life, there's a goodly chance it would be orange when she was younger.
Power The Dark Lord Knows Not by PatronyBologna
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Post OotP:
His vision blurred by blood and the lack of glasses he willed himself to his desk grabbing for his quill, ink, and parchment. Unable to stand, he slumped back down to the floor. Hands shaking wildly, he managed to write one word.
“You know what they say, keep your friends close and your enemies even closer.” Ron turned the page for Hermione and scanned the list of cruel and unusual jinxes and spells that he thought were a shoo-in for an unforgivable.
~Patrony :)<
Date: 04/13/06 Title: Chapter 21: Seeds
Awesome! I love how you begin and end the chapter with the same paragraphs... in forensics, we call that a teaser, and you definately chose a good one to use! I really love this story, and I'm glad that I stumbled across it because it is worth it to be reading. You definately have a talent for writing and I can see how you've grown and improved over the course of this story. I'm sad that it's ending soon, but I hope you write a sequel!
Author's Response: I have to tell you, your username makes me laugh! I\'m sure there\'s a story behind it! Teaser?... just dumb luck. As I was writing it, I didn\'t like the ending, origionally I left it at \"I love you.\" Since I actually liked the opening paragraphs..(not much that I really do like of my own scribblings... toughest critic... that sort of thing,) I copied it down, tweaked it and there you have it. Dumb luck at its finest. I\'m so glad you can see improvement. It would be a terrible waste of time if I didn\'t, or just prove that my braincells had indeed gone kapoot, which the jury is still out on that! lol Thanks much, DKB! Hopefully I won\'t keep you all waiting much longer. ~Patrony :)
Date: 07/24/05 Title: Chapter 1: Of Dreams Or Visions
This is a really good story! I can't wait to read the rest. I like how you portray Ron--it's the perfect portrayal of brotherly concern! ten!
Author's Response: Ron... Never had an older brother, so I'm guessing! Love him though, he's great... Thanks for the review, next chapter should be up shortly.