06/26/07
Well I'm Jordan...
I really enjoy writing, but I've never really thought I was that good. I'm mainly here to review all my favorite stories, because there are so many amazing authors here at MNFF.
I have a few stories now, and I will mostly write one-shots. This is mainly because I'm horribly uncreative, and I don't think I could ever devise an entire story in my head and then write it out.
I'm a HUUUUUUGE Harry Potter fan (obviously). I absolutely adore H/G and R/HR. My favorite fics are J/L though.
Besides being a HP lover, I'm also really into my catholic faith. So yes, I'm a catholic and religious people who think HP is evil really annoy me, and they give Christians everywhere a bad name.
I love getting feedback on my work; what you liked, what you didn't like, what I can do better. So leave me a review and I'll do my best to respond!
Love,
Jordan
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Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: 2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance
Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)
*Completed*
“I’ll always protect you.”
Date: 10/06/08 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: And The World Spins Madly On
oh man! whoa!
okay.
first of all, emma and ted were really precious together, and i was happy. and then james and lily were really precious together, and i was happy.
and then ted had to go and ruin it all with a dark mark. really? sheesh.
what will this mean for the future? ahhhhh!
great chapter, even if it was a tad bit slow. keep up the great work!
Author's Response: It was a little slow, but the next chapters are going to be rather fast, so. . . . Thanks very much for the review; I'm glad you liked the chapter. And as for what this will mean for the future. . . . you'll see soon!
Date: 12/13/07 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Where We Really Belong
I really liked getting some insight into Emma's thoughts and feelings. That was nice =) I was so sad that she feels the way she does, though.
good chapter, keep it up!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you thought so! It is rather sad, though, you\'re right. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/13/08 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Balance
so good, and worth the long, LONG wait!
mrs. potter was simply adorable, and i liked mr. potter, too.
and of course, i simply can't get enough of james and lily! they are just so perfect for each other, and i love the way that you write their characters.
keep it up!
jordan
Author's Response: They are perfect for each other; I completely agree! I\'m glad you though it worth the long wait (it was super long, I know) and you liked Mr. and Mrs. Potter. Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/01/08 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Comfortably Numb, part 1
wow - so good! (as usual)
I liked having this chapter start off from Remus' point of view... that was nice. And for a second there, I really thought Lily HAD gone mad. I was so worried!
I'm excited to read the second half - so keep up the good work and get it posted as soon as possible =)
Author's Response: I will post it as soon as I have the ten minutes it takes! I'm glad you like this chapter. And yes, Lily is rather close to cracking -- but can you blame her? Thanks for the review!
Date: 11/15/08 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: It's Over
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INTENSE!
i... i just... i don't think i can wait til the next chapter gets posted!
keep up the good work! looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Haha, this chapter was pretty intense, you're right! The next chapter is already more than half finished, and I think I'll be able to finish it tonight. At least, I don't have anything else planned! Hopefully it'll be posted soon. Thanks for the review!
When Darkness Did Surround Us by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: 2007 QSQ Awards Runner-up for Best Post-Hogwarts
Petunia Dursley is enjoying dinner with her family when someone starts pounding on the door. Ready to tell them off for being so rude and refusing to leave when they didn't answer at first, Petunia opens the door to have a baby shoved into her arms and told she is his only family. Years after the great Harry Potter defeated Voldemort, Death Eaters have risen to power and taken over Hogsmeade, Hogwarts, and even the Ministry of Magic. Their marriages announced invalid, their children in danger and their lives hanging by a thread, the heroes of the war with Voldemort must once again take a stand against evil.
H/G and R/Hr
(pre-Deathly Hallows)
*Completed*
*Quote from The Epilogue*
Suddenly Harry was kissing her as if he couldn’t resist the temptation. There was a kind of frenzy to the kiss at first, a kind of desperate need, but it melted into something soft and sweet and gentle, a promise of a future when kisses would never be limited. When they broke apart he rested his forehead on hers, sprinkling a few affectionate butterfly kisses across her face. “I love you,” he murmured.
Date: 03/02/09 Title: Chapter 20: The Way They Were
ACK! so much intensity!
I'm so excited to find out what comes next... really, I'm in the dark. I'm not even trying to guess anymore. But this was another wonderful, wonderful chapter!
Try to update quickly :D
Author's Response: Thanks! It was rather intense, wasn't it? I will try and update as soon as I can; I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! :)
Date: 12/30/08 Title: Chapter 19: The Essence of Time
this is one of those times when I'm glad that I creep around the internet late at night, because I didn't get an email notification that the story had been updated!
But this chapter was so good. Time travel is SUCH a messy business, and I'm really excited to see how you tie all of the different parts of this story together.
Good job! Keep up the good work =)
Author's Response: I'm glad you got a chance to read it, too! Time travel is really hard to do, and I spent a lot of my own time trying to figure out how I wanted it to all happen and what scenes to show first and so on. Hopefully it'll all work out! Thanks very much for the review.
Date: 11/20/07 Title: Chapter 14: The Start of the End
very good, as usual! not as exciting as some of the other chapters, but thats to be expected every now and again.
cant wait to find out what happens next! update soon =)
Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it nonetheless. Thanks for the review!
Date: 09/22/07 Title: Chapter 13: The Words You Never Want To Hear
ahhh waiting for this chapter to be validated is killing me!
Author's Response: It is taking a while. . . .
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 11: The Schemes We Dream
oh no!!! please tell me ron didnt die - that would just be horrible.
i loved the repetition at the end of each section - that was cool.
ahh update soon!
Author's Response: It would be horrible . . . but . . . well, you\'ll see. Thanks for the review; I\'m glad you liked the repetition.
Date: 03/31/08 Title: Chapter 15: The Great Escape
oh, SO worth the wait! I was so excited to find out that Ron and Harry finally broke out of prison. And I, for one, quite enjoyed "Crazy Harry," and the reunion between Harry and Ginny! Very sweet.
Wonderful job!!! I'll be waiting patiently for your other stories to be updated =) keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I\'m a big fan of Crazy Harry, too :) Thanks very much for the review, I\'m glad you thought it worth the wait!
Date: 11/08/08 Title: Chapter 18: The Final Measure
AHH! Your chapters always make me want to read more and more. I was so worried about Hermione, and I was SO glad that she was okay - and little Eleanor! How precious!
And that ending... well, to be honest, I'm mystified. So keep up the good work and get the next chapter out soon!
Wonderful job =)
Author's Response: Thanks! Writing the scene with Eleanor's birth and such was very difficult, but I really like the finished product -- I'm glad you do too! The ending is supposed to be mystifying. I'll try and make up for it by updating soon!
Date: 08/30/08 Title: Chapter 17: The Reason For Everything
oh, wow! a nice long chapter. and full of excitement! i can hardly bear having to wait and not know how everything is going to turn out, and if everyone is going to be fine.
i especially liked the part with remus and tonks, i think you got remus' thoughts and feelings exactly right.
great job, get the next chapter up soon!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! It was rather exciting, wasn't it? I'm glad you thought I did the scene with Remus and Tonks well! :) I'll try and update soon!
Date: 06/17/08 Title: Chapter 16: The Return
that was precious! I'm so glad that Ron and Hermione were finally reunited. I also liked getting to see the goings-on from Petunia, that was nice. She's had quite a journey, and I'm glad that she's come to really be sorry for how she treated Harry, and Lily as well.
Amazing job, as usual =)
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you think. As much as I loved the seventh book, I really wish Rowling had put something more about Petunia in it, and this is my way of making up for that. I\'m glad you like it, too!
Date: 08/02/07 Title: Chapter 12: The Devil's in the Details
YEAHHHH! I almost lost it for a moment there, when I thought Ron was dead. but he wasn't! and i loved the conversation between hermione and petunia.
wonderful chapter! cant wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: I couldn\'t kill Ron! Thanks for the review, I\'m glad you liked this chapter and Hermione and Petunia\'s conversation.
Date: 08/02/07 Title: Chapter 12: The Devil's in the Details
PS -
i am VERY glad you decided not to stop writing fanfiction.
that would have broken my heart =[
you're too talented.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 09/25/07 Title: Chapter 13: The Words You Never Want To Hear
FINALLY!
ahh i can't believe Ginny doesn't remember anything! that's horrible - but i hope the message gets her out...
and Hermione! poor Hermione, she thinks Ron's dead!
this was great (as usual, of course)
update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad you liked it! Poor Hermione and poor Ginny -- poor everybody!
Date: 06/10/09 Title: Chapter 23: The Epilogue
A wonderful ending to a WONDERFUL story!!! I loved it. Thank you for all of your hard work, it really paid off. Please keep writing, because I'm pretty sure that we all enjoy it an awful lot :D
Congratulations on finishing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you thought it both a wonderful story and this chapter a wonderful ending :) I worked so hard for so long on this story that it seems unreal its really over. It's good to know that the story was appreciated and enjoyed!
Leaves by Simply Being
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: I would look out into the forest, full of huge lofty trees covered in leafy green foliage, pointing downward as if sensing the rain, and trying with all their might to get as far away as possible from it. It doesn’t really make sense, I used to muse to myself. Why would leaves hide from the rain? Maybe, I decided, because they were afraid; afraid that the thing they loved the most would somehow hurt them, and why bother even taking a chance? Therefore, I had concluded, they pointed downward as far as they could reach.
What if the death of Luna's mother wasn't an accident?
A/N: Thanks so much Kasey, Rachel, and Catrin! Also: This comes with a slight AU warning, it all depends on how you look at it. But, strictly speaking, it does not go against cannon.
Date: 10/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Leaves
this was so sad and beautiful and heartbreaking and wonderful, ALL at once! I loved the very last sentence.
fantastic job =]
Author's Response: Thanks!
Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel by Starmom
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Summary: What happened on that fateful night at Godric's Hollow and the (still!) unknown events that followed in the next twenty four hours, before Harry's arrival on Privet Drive? What motivated the actions and decisions that were made in the years leading up to the defeat of Voldemort? The truth is neither black or white - only complicated shades of grey. Behind the stories of Lily Evans, Severus Snape and Peter Pettigrew we learn that we are all vulnerable to evil.
(written between HBP and DH - story is complete)
Date: 08/11/07 Title: Chapter 25: 18. From the Ashes and Epilogue
okay, wow.
i've just finished reading your story, and that's pretty much all i can say. you did an absolutely magnificent job telling the tales of Lily, Peter, and Severus. Your descriptions were amazing and the characters were extremely believable.
excellent, excellent job!
Author's Response: Why, thank you!! I\'m thrilled that you found my fic and that you read it all the way through! I appreciate your comments very much!