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06/26/07
Well I'm Jordan...
I really enjoy writing, but I've never really thought I was that good. I'm mainly here to review all my favorite stories, because there are so many amazing authors here at MNFF.
I have a few stories now, and I will mostly write one-shots. This is mainly because I'm horribly uncreative, and I don't think I could ever devise an entire story in my head and then write it out.
I'm a HUUUUUUGE Harry Potter fan (obviously). I absolutely adore H/G and R/HR. My favorite fics are J/L though.
Besides being a HP lover, I'm also really into my catholic faith. So yes, I'm a catholic and religious people who think HP is evil really annoy me, and they give Christians everywhere a bad name.
I love getting feedback on my work; what you liked, what you didn't like, what I can do better. So leave me a review and I'll do my best to respond!
Love,
Jordan
thanks to immortal_evil for the banner =)
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Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: 2008 QSQ Awards Runner-up for Best Post-Hogwarts
Harry defeated Voldemort. Harry married Ginny. Harry and Ginny had five children. Harry disappeared. My name is Lily Potter, and this is the story of what happened when my father returned after six years missing to find my mother about to re-marry. This is the story of myself, my crazy family, and most of all, this is the story of my parents and the man who tried to come between them. (pre-Deathly Hallows)
*Completed*
"Oh, I can
so die happy now!" -Sirius Potter
Categories: Post-Hogwarts
Characters: None
Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded
Series: None
Chapters: 13 |
Completed: Yes |
Words: 67532 |
Hits: 52826 |
Published: 11/04/06 |
Updated: 05/01/07
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Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 07/03/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Uncle Ron Never Laughs
im reading two other of your WIPs, but i just LOVED this one. lily was such a great character to narrate the story, and the whole weasley family - just brilliant!
it was great, youre amazing =]
Author's Response: Thanks! I think Lily was the perfect narrator for the story as well.
Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Harry places his thoughts into Dumbledore’s Pensieve in hope to save Ron and Hermione’s relationship. Ron and Hermione delve into the Pensieve and revive essential moments of their Hogwarts experience starting with the day they met. This is a riveting tale, casting Ron and Hermione to the past as they unwind time and memories. As they unfold time will their hearts dare to let each other in? Or is the past too hard to bear?
Categories: Ron/Hermione
Characters: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 |
Completed: Yes |
Words: 22107 |
Hits: 14417 |
Published: 11/05/06 |
Updated: 09/19/07
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Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 09/28/07
Title: Chapter 1: Hope and Wait
i really liked this story! and i thought the ending was just perfect.
good job :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I did like the ending, I\'m glad people enjoyed it even with its simplicity.
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Whoever knew that a couple still went on "dates" after they were married?
:::old H/G:::
Runner-Up in the Best Canon Romance category of the 2007 Quicksilver Quill Awards
For those interested, I'm planning on writing a Prequel to this story. Just thought I'd let everyone know.
Categories: Harry/Ginny
Characters: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 |
Completed: Yes |
Words: 3445 |
Hits: 3169 |
Published: 01/26/07 |
Updated: 01/31/07
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Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 07/03/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
oh, this was just beautiful.. i loved it! i almost started crying... it was horribly sad, but so wonderful.
great job!
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily and James Potter were always happy and in love. In a way, they never had to try to make it work. But, going through a rough time, their relationship is pushed to its limits.
Written for the February One-Shot Challenge by Kask of Slytherin.
Winner of the February One-Shot Challenge.
Winner of the 2007 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Canon Romance.
Thank you everyone :)
Categories: James/Lily
Characters: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 |
Completed: Yes |
Words: 4645 |
Hits: 3369 |
Published: 02/22/07 |
Updated: 02/23/07
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Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 11/14/07
Title: Chapter 1: The Wedding Ring
hey! i just wanted to let you know that i read this one-shot wayyyy back, last summer some time an i could have sworn i reviewed but, alas, it appears i didn't. this story was so well done, and i absolutely loved the idea. it was simply beautiful!
congrats on your quicksilver quill award! this story definitely deserved it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m glad you took another look ;)
Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Hermione and her two best friends, Harry and Ron, are on a trip with their sixth year Herbology class to Bodmin Moor. While searching for magical plants, Hermione stumbles on a door in the ground that leads her and the boys to the crumbling mansion of the time-travel obsessed wizard, William Rashleigh. After her encounter with Rashleigh, Hermione finds herself trapped in a time where magic is feared, witches are hunted, and the punishment for being able to do magic is death. Can Hermione survive The Salem Witch Trials?
A/N: This story is not for the faint at heart. The descriptions of death in the fic will be somewhat graphic and not suitable for young and impressionable readers.
I am
BeautifulDreamer07 of Gryffindor House rising up to the answer the prompt. A Shift In Time, in the Spring Challenge.
Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics
Characters: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe,
Character Death,
Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 5 |
Completed: Yes |
Words: 10616 |
Hits: 493 |
Published: 04/19/07 |
Updated: 05/16/07
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Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 10/11/07
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Dear Mr. and Mrs. Granger
this almost made me cry. that's a horrible thing to think about happening to hermione, yet you wrote it wonderfully.
good job!
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Everybody goes eventually.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 |
Completed: Yes |
Words: 1374 |
Hits: 1353 |
Published: 05/06/07 |
Updated: 05/06/07
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Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 07/25/07
Title: Chapter 1: Gone
aww, best friends reunited!
this was cute =]
Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Harry and Ginny are happily married with a baby on the way. When they manipulate Ron and Hermione into both meeting them for lunch, the last thing anyone expected was for Harry and Ginny to be kidnapped.
Suddenly Ron and Hermione are left with nothing more than a note and the realization it’s up to them to follow the clues and rescue the couple they both love and adore. If only the clues weren't nonsense. If only they knew who could possibly have taken Harry and Ginny. If only they didn’t hate each other. If only they hadn’t once loved each other.
Life just got a whole lot more complicated for Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger.
*Completed*"Harry was right: there was no such thing as understanding girls, no matter how old a bloke got."
Categories: Ron/Hermione
Characters: None
Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded
Series: None
Chapters: 9 |
Completed: Yes |
Words: 50131 |
Hits: 33558 |
Published: 05/16/07 |
Updated: 11/16/08
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Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 09/02/07
Title: Chapter 3: The Twist
this chapter was great! i loved having it from hermione's POV. i was shocked to learn that she's marrying bernard even though she knows he's cheating on her! hmm... can't wait for that to be explained :D
good job!
Author's Response: That was a bit shocking, wasn\'t it? But it will all be explained before the end! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 10/20/08
Title: Chapter 8: The Prophesy
WOW.
portia. tunnel. super baby. intense battle sequence.
this was intense, man. lots to digest! you did a fantastic job with it, though! this story has been a real pleasure to read - very much looking forward to reading the last chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter -- it was very intense, as you said!
Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 11/16/08
Title: Chapter 9: The Choice
OHHHHHHHHHH! What a perfect ending! I was so sad there in the middle when she wouldn't take him back, but I knew that she just had to in the end.
Thank you for putting so much time and effort into your writing... I'm sad to see the story end, but it's been a real treat reading it.
Fantastic job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm a little sad to see it end too -- bittersweet is the perfect word, I think. I'm glad you've enjoyed reading it; thanks so much for reviewing all along -- I really do appreciate it!
Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 06/09/08
Title: Chapter 6: The Tunnel
insomnia has allowed me to read this chapter about as soon as it got validated, and i am speechless!
wow, that was just amazing. i feel so badly for ginny, with everything she's gone through. and that tunnel, that was just horrifying! i can't believe hermione had a miscarriage - that's so sad that it tore them apart. all i want is for the two of them to be happy!
and i am so anxious to find out if harry's ok, and what happened to ginny's baby, and WHO the man at the end of the chapter is!!!
bravo and congrats on another splendid chapter =)
Author's Response: Thanks! I know I left you hanging at the end there, and hopefully the answer to all your questions will come in the form of a speedy update :)
Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 10/12/07
Title: Chapter 4: The Hotel
oh YES! I knew Hermione wouldn't have been marrying someone as horrible as Bernard without a reason. And the Ron/Hermione action... simply beautiful!
great job, can't wait for the next chapter - to find out more about harry and ginny!
Author's Response: Thanks! And of course Hermione has a reason for marrying Bernard, I couldn\'t have it any other way!
Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 08/04/08
Title: Chapter 7: The Man
oh man! once again, you've put out another wonderful chapter. i'm forming my ideas about who it is, but knowing me and my horrible hypothesizing skills, it will probably take me til about the 5th guess to get it right.
anyway, your writing was WONDERFUL (as usual); i look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Hopefully, if I can write it fast enough, you'll find out exactly how many guesses it took you soon! :)
Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 10/12/07
Title: Chapter 1: The Note
ahh, the quote for chapter 4 is so good! im excited for it to be updated!!!
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 12/31/07
Title: Chapter 5: The Girl
oh, everything got so good between the two of them, and then so bad in a hurry. I'm really curious as to what happened when the two of them broke up, but I'm not very close to figuring it out.
almost to the climax! yay!
great chapter - keep it up =)
Author's Response: I\'m excited to finally have everything explained . . . hopefully that means I\'ll have a fast update! Thanks for the review; I\'m glad you liked it.
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: It has been 6 weeks since the death of Lord Voldemort, and Ron looks back at the most important year of his life.
Categories: Ron/Hermione
Characters: None
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 |
Completed: Yes |
Words: 4708 |
Hits: 2614 |
Published: 05/26/07 |
Updated: 06/06/07
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Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 07/03/07
Title: Chapter 1: Rose Tinted Glasses
ahh! poor ron *cries*
this was very well written, i loved it! wonderful job =]
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Natures first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold.
Her early leaf's a flower,
But only so an hour.
Then leaf subsides to leaf,
So Eden sank to grief.
So dawn goes down to day,
Nothing gold can stay.
Ginny takes an early morning stroll, and remembers.
Poem by Robert Frost. Character death is only mentioned.
Categories: Harry/Ginny
Characters: None
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 |
Completed: Yes |
Words: 1184 |
Hits: 1872 |
Published: 07/05/07 |
Updated: 07/15/07
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Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 07/15/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
oh that was lovely! your descriptions were breathtaking. it was just amazing.
beautiful job!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 07/15/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
oh that was lovely! your descriptions were breathtaking. it was just amazing.
beautiful job!
Author's Response: thank you... again. :p
~Evie
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Molly Weasley lost two boys in the first war. She doesn't think she can bear to lose another.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 |
Completed: Yes |
Words: 1572 |
Hits: 2186 |
Published: 07/24/07 |
Updated: 07/24/07
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Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 07/24/07
Title: Chapter 1: A Time to Fall
i quite enjoyed this little story! it was very well written. gah, poor molly, the thought of her worrying about all those kids - *sigh*
it was wonderful =]
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: What were they expecting him to do, jump off the Astronomy tower or something?
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 |
Completed: Yes |
Words: 1631 |
Hits: 2299 |
Published: 08/04/07 |
Updated: 08/09/07
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Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 08/12/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
this was a really great idea - im glad that somebody thought of it. you did a really great job! i hope you continue writing!
Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m really glad you liked it!
A novella-length follow up is in the works.
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The end of Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows - from Ginny's POV
Categories: Harry/Ginny
Characters: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 |
Completed: Yes |
Words: 3538 |
Hits: 3421 |
Published: 08/06/07 |
Updated: 08/15/07
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Reviewer: junior_achievement Signed
Date: 08/16/07
Title: Chapter 1: The End
yay!
this was wonderful. you did a good job of describing the scenes from ginny's POV. very good descriptions - great job!