06/26/07
Well I'm Jordan...
I really enjoy writing, but I've never really thought I was that good. I'm mainly here to review all my favorite stories, because there are so many amazing authors here at MNFF.
I have a few stories now, and I will mostly write one-shots. This is mainly because I'm horribly uncreative, and I don't think I could ever devise an entire story in my head and then write it out.
I'm a HUUUUUUGE Harry Potter fan (obviously). I absolutely adore H/G and R/HR. My favorite fics are J/L though.
Besides being a HP lover, I'm also really into my catholic faith. So yes, I'm a catholic and religious people who think HP is evil really annoy me, and they give Christians everywhere a bad name.
I love getting feedback on my work; what you liked, what you didn't like, what I can do better. So leave me a review and I'll do my best to respond!
Love,
Jordan
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I Love You This Much by MagEd
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: This is the story of a boy and a girl. And a boy. This is the story of love returned and unreturned, of friendship gone dry, and of the things people will do for love. This is the story of James Potter and Lily Evans and Severus Snape. *two-shot*
Date: 09/03/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
i was so excited when i saw that the second half of the story was posted!!! i loved the part when james and lily were outside - it was incredibly adorable! i couldn't help but feel a little sorry for snape though, how he was so sad that "everything had gone wrong."
but we all know that james and lily really belonged together :D
and i loved the ending! it was very well done.
great job!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! That scene outside was fluffier than my usual stuff, but I can\'t help myself, James and Lily do belong together!
Date: 08/14/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
you've definitely worked your magic once again! i love all your other stories, and this one was no different. you just have a way with words, my friend.
great job! i can't wait to read the second half =]
Author's Response: Thanks, I always love to read that! ;)
Taxicab Conversations by cto10121
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: James Potter is about to give up his pursuit of his six-year crush, Lily Evans. But will he change his mind after an enlightening conversation with an understanding taxicab driver? One-shot, R&R!!
Excerpt:
“Have you ever fallen in love?” James asked hesitantly.
“Yep.”
“Have you ever loved her with all your heart and soul?”
“Yep.”
“Have they never requited your love?”
“Yep.”
“Have you ever thought of giving them up?”
“Yep. Did it too. Was without a doubt the worse mistake I’ve made in me bloody life.”
Date: 08/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Taxicab Conversations
aww, that was so cute! i loved how harry was jake's passenger 20 years later. you really got the message of the story across well.
great job!
=]
Author's Response: It was a brilliant inspiration, that ending. I think I got the whole idea from the Simpsons (there was an episode about where Homer, drunk, got into a taxicab and spilled his secrets). But the ending was really a brilliant stroke of inspiration, if I do say so myself. Thanks a lot for the review!
Date: 08/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: Savoring Patience
oh this was lovely! I loved your description of their interaction at the beginning, with the holding hands and whatnot.
wonderful job! keep writing =]
Author's Response: Thanks, Jordan. I\'m glad you liked the hand-holding. ~Ken
With Everything I Have by Liisa
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry now knew himself strong enough to face the reality of the stone rather than the dream. Emerald met emerald. “I just have to know.” J/L slight H/G post-DH
Date: 08/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
agh!
that was simply beautiful. its very hard for me to imagine a scene like this without bursting into tears;you described it wonderfully.
great job!
Where You Belong by Hermione Jane
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Hermione's point of view throughout Deathly Hallows. It's mainly about what she's feeling at certain parts of the book. I tried my best to make everything allign to Deathly Hallows at some point. Obviously, there are spoilers. Enjoy!
Date: 09/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
ahh I loved this story! You portrayed Hermione really well.
fantastic job!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you!!! =]
Waiting by cjbaggins
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: This is a one-shot that takes place at The Burrow during the Hogwarts' Christmas break, while Ron, Hermione, and Harry are off searching for Horcruxes. Molly and Ginny have a little chat.
Date: 09/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Waiting
aww this was adorable! Molly is such a good mother... she understands her daughter so well. I love how you portrayed their relationship.
good job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I, too, think Molly is a great mother. And see my response to the last review ... I totally get her. She\'s my hero!
Purple Ink by Nymphea
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: James and Lily didn't wake up one morning and find they were in love with each other...but two mornings in particular were a help. So were two letters written in purple ink.
Date: 09/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Purple Ink
short, but totally great. it was so simple yet it portrayed their love beautifully.
good job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I didn\'t focus on their love, just a very important experience they have (okay, may have had) in common--but because we all know that connection grows into love, you were able to imagine it. Yay, my story fulfilled its purpose!
I Would, I Will, I Am by FinnFiona
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Hermione is on a personal mission to retrieve her parents from the protection she placed them under during the war against Voldemort. Fortunately, Ron insists on coming along, for he is able to help in a way that neither he nor Hermione expects.
Date: 10/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: I Would, I Will, I Am
this was great! you wrote all the characters' personalities perfectly, and you did it so seamlessly! you described Ron and Hermione's love so beautifully.
great job! keep writing =)
Author's Response: thanks! I always had a soft spot for those two :)
The Twinge by MagEd
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Some say to follow your heart, others think it best to follow your head. And what does Ginny Weasley believe? A short history of Ginny Weasley and how she learned to follow the twinge, from her first kiss to the day when Harry almost died. *one-shot*
Date: 10/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
lovely, just lovely! i was really annoyed when this story had been posted but it wasn't able to be read... but it was worth the wait! i loved how "the twinge" kept coming into play throughout the whole story. you described ginny's feelings wonderfully.
good job!
Author's Response: It was a little bothersome when its validation got messed up, but they fixed it! I\'m glad it was worth the wait and you liked it and the twinge! Thanks for the review.
Dear Teddy by fairy lights
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary:
Right before she runs off to battle, Tonks writes a letter to Teddy.
Date: 01/15/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
so sad! but great - you captured tonks perfectly.
good job =)
Author's Response: thank you :)
Admiration by lily_evans34
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: The day after the Last Battle as Ron counts his losses, Hermione reminds him what was worth fighting for in the first place.
Date: 01/27/08 Title: Chapter 1: Admiration
so short, but SO sweet! the conversation between Ron and Hermione was lovely.
good job!
Author's Response: thank you so much! I\'m glad you liked it. :)
The One Miracle by MagEd
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: “I’m willing to die for this war but I’m not willing to sacrifice my life for it! And maybe you don’t understand, but it’s not the same thing, James; it’s not the same thing!”
In the middle of the first war against Voldemort, James and Lily Potter's world is crumbling in around them. Will their marriage crumble as well? *one-shot*
Edited 6/15/10
Date: 06/17/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This was really nice! I think you captured James and Lily perfectly. It feels like this sort of thing would really happen to them, but they would always be able to right it in the end.
Wonderful job =)
Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad you think so!
Sir Oscar O'Reilly by MagEd
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Assigned to work on a project together, James Potter and Lily Evans find themselves getting to know one another through a silly game James has devised. A light, fluffy, slightly cliche one-shot. "Don’t look at me like that! I’m going to behave today." *one-shot*
Date: 10/29/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I'm so glad the technical difficulties with this one finally got cleared up! I was so excited to read this when I got the notification email, and then I couldn't and I was not a happy person.
Anyways, this one deserves a big AWWWWWW!
I really liked they way this one was formatted, with all of their meetings and whatnot. Their conversations were so fun and interesting to read, you got their characters just right. And you were able to transition from funny to serious to sad to happy really easily.
All in all, so good! Great job =)
Author's Response: I'm so glad it all got sorted out too! Thanks very much for reading and reviewing -- I'm especially fond of this, as its format is so different from what I usually do, and I think it turned out really well. :)
When Worlds Die by MagEd
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: In any man who dies there dies with him,
his first snow and kiss and fight . . .
Not people die but worlds die in them
~Yevgeny Yevtushenko, "People"
His twin is dead, and as far as George can see, the whole world might as well have died, too. In other words, this is the story of how George Weasley grieved in seven steps. *one-shot*
Date: 08/26/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wonderful! I've always imagined what life was like for George after the final battle, and I think you got it just right. This made me cry & laugh all at the same time, and I loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you didn't just cry, but laugh, too!