WOw i loved it!! i thought it was beautifly desciptive and i loved your use of assonances and such (much better then some poems i ahve read that ryhme ginger-cat and beater's bat) but it was simply beautiful..excellant work!

woah..that was pretty intense..and insane..oh man i really loved it... excellant job!

(e-high five stubby!)

Author's Response: Woah, thanks, KC! Glad you liked it; that was the response I was looking for! What\'d you like about it?

I think its awesome! Much better than I could do.I think you really got down the feelings that Dumbledore would be feeling at this time in his...death (i guess since he's not alive ;D ). I also think your last stanza is quite powerful. Like I said before I'm not really good at writing poetry (I just like reading it) so i can't really tell you if you need to improve in anything. But i enjoyied it so good job!

Author's Response: Hey, Black_Dust! ;) Thanks for the review. Poetry\'s really interesting to write, because you can pretty much do whatever you want. So, if you think you can\'t write poetry, it\'s just subjective: maybe you haven\'t found your type of poetry yet or a subject that works for you. I\'m really terrible at rhyming, but then I started free poetry and created my own style and find that I enjoy it. People even seem to like it, too, so that\'s a bonus! I do like the last stanza as well. I was loking for a way to finish it, but then that popped into my head and it worked, so.... Thanks again! -Stubby

*takes a slow, deep breath* wow, that was gorgeous! I loved it. Even got the little goosebump-type-tingles from it. :)

Excellent job and a great representation of the characters. The only critique I have is that I was a little unsure of where this was taking place (besides of course, in a sleeping type area) Good job though.

*now has to find a way to make an equally brillant banner for it*

-Kasey