Hello! I'm basically just your typical HP fan, who became so addicted to the books that I turned to fanfiction. I don't write often, but I might try and get a new story up soon. I do adore reading and reviewing other authors stories though. And I'm always up for beta-ing!
Haha Meleia and a muggle, I bet Draco just looooved that. Please, please, please finish part 3 soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for all your reviews. I always love reading them. I\'ve been super busy lately, but the first day off I get, I\'ll be working on it (gotta love being short-staffed). Cheers
I love it. I was wondering about the long update, normally you're speedy quick. It was such a good chapter though, it was worth the wait. Only one little nitpick, when Meleia first got in the lift, you said she was there with two met. It's really confusing cause it seems like she's met someone, but you really just mean two men. Just check it out. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out. I\'ll fix it pronto (that much I CAN do at the moment). The next chapter is ready, and waiting only for my internet to be up again on my main computer. Thanks for the patience.
Oh poor Draco. So now I don't know about the little girl AND Meleia's dream. It's just not fair, it's really not.
Author's Response: Don\'t worry, Part III will clear up many things. It\'s still being written though, so hold tight!
Thanks for the reviews!
Oh poor girl. She's going to need alot of therapy to get over what she did, she's not like that deep down. She and Draco are so perfect for each other. But why did she keep the nose?
You update your story so much, I'm never going to have time to catch up! Don't get me wrong, I'm totally not complaining.
Author's Response: You\'ll have some time over the next while. I\'ve got to finish writing part III! It won\'t be toooo long though, just long enough.
I loved the first part of this chapter, I absolutely love being confused. Plus I get to do all sorts of fun guess work. I bet its Meleia's child the little girl. I can't wait to find out!
Author's Response: I was hoping you\'d enjoy some guess work. I certainly do. Thanks for the review, and thanks for following this story. It makes me happy to hear from you at each chapter. Cheers, Merlynne
Eh, no luck in finding out about that girl, and I've read an extra chapter today. Oh well, hopefully I'll find out tomorrow. If Draco bothers to show up.
Author's Response: You\'ll hear more about the little girl in Part III.
Oh this is sooooooo sad. I am literally sobbing my eyes out right now. In truth, I've had a fairly rough week, but this just did it for me. Your writing is amazing.
WHAT?!?!? SHE'S DEAD?!?!?! That certainly puts a damper on the whole relationship. Now I really can't wait to see what happens next. And also, it wasn't so much that the clump dialogue itself was confusing, but that it wasn't spaced out. The first time I was just like oh no, she forgot to put her spaces in, and then by the second and third I was wondering if you meant to do that. Maybe you should put your intentions in the author's note or something? I dunno.
Author's Response: Ah, okay, good idea -- I will do so.
I like it! Yes, the whole private lessons thing is a bit typical, but the way you write deffinately makes up for it. And I'm sure you'll be more creative in future chapters.
Author's Response: thank you so much, i hope you enjoy the rest of the story!!
Ugh, I wouldn't mind a gold mark, but I wouldn't want a black one. Snape had better be super greatful for what she did for him, not to mention the fact that he was horrid to her, and she still felt guilty enough to care.
Author's Response: haha true!
Oh my. Either someone forgot to take their dreamless sleep draught, or it apparently isn't working. And I hope Hermione asks Snape to be nicer to her! She deserves it.
Author's Response: she does indeed!
Oooooh that was low of him, even for him. I hope she leaves, she better make him do all his potions himself. Good chapter!
Author's Response: hahaha that\'ll teach him xD thanks for reading!
Ooooh, I think a new summary would be very good. Not too long though, whenever I see a super long summary I don't even bother to read it, let alone the story. I'm very glad you updated, and I love the chapter! I'm sorry it took me so long to read it, I've been uber busy, and it is quite long. Yay!
Author's Response: I totally know what you mean! long summaries turn me off most of the time. and so glad you liked the chapter! thanks for reading :D
I did like it but I was sooooo incredibly sad that Sirius died. I am glad that he was alive in your fic for at least a little while though. And it does make the relationship less complicated again. Poor Hermione's going to have so much guilt. I hope she's okay.
Author's Response: Aw yeah, I know I\'m a meanie for killing Sirius off again -- but I felt it was necessary....not sure why, but sometimes my fingers write things that brain doesn\'t necessarily agree with xD
This time I'm sure he has a plan, considering he just saved her life. She only thinks he doesn't because she's panicing. And I was wondering how Snape was not going to notice there was something sticky all over one of his vials, even before he put his hand on it. That would have been very careless of him, and careless deffinitely isn't something he is. And poor Ron! As much as I like Hermione/Snape fanfics, it always makes me so sad that it shuts down Ron. He and Hermione are my favorite canon couple, probably my favorite all time couple even.
Author's Response: agreed! i love hermione and ron together!! (right behind lupin and tonks :D :D). i know it doesn\'t seem like it from this story, but i definitely thing that hermione and ron are a glorious adorable match made in heaven :D but seeing as PERSONALLY i have a thing for snape, and, like a cool person, enjoy living vicariously through fictional characters, i mostly read/write fanfictions with hg/ss pairing. just so i can pretend it\'s me. with crazy awesome hair. because straight hair is boring. and i want to fly on broom sticks. preferably in close proximity to an insanely attractive potions master xD
This chapter wasn't uneventful. Everyone needs time to mourn, especially people who are blaming themselves. I'm very glad that Snape helped her get over that. Plus I laughed so hard when you were describing Ron and Harry when Hermione was refusing to make her potion, and I really like that she still tried to help Neville. Awesome job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you enjoyed it :D
I don't think you strayed off Snape at all, you did a marvelous job! Equal parts nasty, angry, and confused, and of course mysetrious and sultry. Hermione is very lucky haha.
Author's Response: lol yay! thank you! and yes she is :)
Oh no, I've managed to catch up with all the chapters you have posted! The only solution to this is you need to update again, and quickly. Especially since I want to see how Hermione handles Snape's new revelation and the fact that she can't do anything about it. I also really hope she works everything out with Ron.
Author's Response: oh no! haha, well thanks for reading and leaving such wonderful comments throughout the entire story, and i will try to get the new chapter out soon :D
Yay for Hermione. You write Snape incredibly evilly, which is great. Normally people write Snape/Hermione stories and they completely sugarcoat him. This is totally something I can see him doing in the books, and I'm very glad Hermione is going to get revenge.
Author's Response: yaaaaaay! i\'m so happy to hear that, you have no idea! that is definitely one of my biggest pet peeves; sugarcoated snape >:( he\'s a grouchy guy, and we all love him for it. thanks so much for reading!!