Hello! I'm basically just your typical HP fan, who became so addicted to the books that I turned to fanfiction. I don't write often, but I might try and get a new story up soon. I do adore reading and reviewing other authors stories though. And I'm always up for beta-ing!
So what exactly did you edit greatly in the last two chapters since it was first written? And did you mean to clump the dialogue all together into one semi-paragraph in the middle? It's kind of a cool writing trick, although the first paragraph of it was a bit confusing. Great chapter either way.
Author's Response: yup, the dialogue clump was intentional...though, looking back, i haven\'t the faintest idea why xD sorry that paragraph was confusing -- anything in particular you think i could edit to make it less so? i would appreciate your input.
Oooooh if Hermione is going to do what I think she's going to do, then I will laugh sooooo hard. And also, Russia was a pretty good choice of country, because the cold war was going on during the time JKR set the books. Russia wasn't very friendly with any democracy.
Author's Response: oh snap! wow, i\'m totally going to pretend i did that on purpose now xD thanks so much for reading! and yay for awesome intelligent readers :D :D
I suppose everyone needs to come up from underground sometime. Interesting that they sleepwalk when they dream about each other. Another great chapter!
Author's Response: thanks!
I like that you made Hermione a rabbit, did you write this before you knew she was supposed to be an otter? Either way, they are both very fitting creatures for her. I'm very glad that she is still alive, too. Although I cannot wait to see what Snape has to say to worm his way out of this one.
Author's Response: i think it\'s just hermione\'s patronus that is an otter -- i\'m not sure if that has anything to do with what her animagus form would be. and yeah, lol, i honestly just made her a rabbit so i could make snape say \"the teeth are uncanny, Granger\" LOL I\'M A WORD NERD xD sorry, that line was just too awesomely snarky to ignore.
Hahaha. Serves Snape right, Hermione not being entirely greatful that he saved her life. I do believe someone else wasn't so greatful about a similar life saving event? Interesting bit that he said, how he wouldn't have saved her if she wasn't worth it. Very interesting!
Author's Response: thanks! glad you enjoyed it!
I laughed so hard when Snape and Hermione were trying to disguise themselves. Although I probably would have hexed Snape long before for his snarky remarks, I would have absolutely killed him if he gave me giant clothes to wear. It would make all of the Death Eaters jobs alot easier. I also laughed at your descrition of Goyle Senior's outfit. I absolutely hate crocs. Great chapter!
Author's Response: hahah \"I would have absolutely killed him if he gave me giant clothes to wear.\" -- you and me both, sister!! xD xD
My guess is that they somehow found out through the owl. After all, it has been staying in the house and in Hermione's room, and it flew off to be downstairs right before the Death Eaters arrived. Maybe the owl is Frend? Perhaps he's an Animagus too? Oh my goodness, they have the same eyes! I only just realized! That has to be it!
Author's Response: lol. aw, you are such a good guesser xD xD xD
Oh good I was wondering about that. I was also wondering why there was ink near the door. I'm very glad Sirius was the person there, although I kind of guessed. After all, he is also in hiding and needed a new place to stay. But he is one of my favorite characters, so I am extremely glad he showed up, not to mention the fact that he isn't dead.
Author's Response: i totally agree -- sirius is made of awesome :)
Uh oh. That really backfired. It was hilarious at first though. Glad Hermione got revenge.
Author's Response: haha, yeah xD
Yay! Finally! Poor Hermione, that must have been so humiliating. At least the end result was good. It is quite strange that she still likes him; maybe she has a discipline fetish or something? Whatever, at least he returns her feelings.
Author's Response: lol, that\'s it. hermione totally has a discipline fetish! well put xD
I elaborated very much upon this short period of time, but I had a lot of fun writing about it.
This story is complete...but there is a continuation! See the final A/N: for details!
Too funny! I like what they did to Dudley. Even if he isn't like that in the books, the pervy way you wrote him totally deserved it. Only two more chapters, I hope Ron confesses soon! And in a way that Hermione understands.
Author's Response: how do you know what Dudley is or isn't?
So were Hermione's dreams predictions of the future? Very interesting, very interesting indeed. It's strange how you write Ron and Hermione. They don't argue enough. Like in the books it's so obvious they love each other, but they bicker incessantly. In your story they're quite lovey dovey, and not enough actual fighting.
Author's Response: Again, you are very picky
Oh, you write Dudley so mean in this story! I really don't think he is capable of those things, even in the early books. He's just a big bully. And then he was so nice in the 7th book! But I suppose you wrote this before that book came out. Other than that great chapter!
Author's Response: ...
I liked it! Sometimes Ron and Hermione felt a little out of canon, but I really can't turn down a good fluffy fic, so I totally enjoyed it. I can't wait to read the next story, and then the next!
Author's Response: :-)
It was a pretty good chapter, but I was kind of curious about something. Since Harry isn't 17 yet, how is he practicing magic? That's still illegal. You might just want to change it to maybe say Ron and Hermione practiced and Harry studied the theory or something. Other than that good job!
Author's Response: Have you even read book 6?
I really liked this chapter! Sometimes you put actions in parenthesis instead of writing them out in full sentences, and no offense, but I find that extremely annoying, and quite a bit boring. But you didn't do that once this whole chapter, and it was wonderful!
Author's Response: and no offense, but you can get REALLY annoying!
I like it! I saw the third story in the most recent section, and decided to start from the beginning, and I'm really glad I did. I really like this story so far, and I can't wait to read more. I hope the other two are just as good!
Author's Response: do what ever you like!
Hermione is so silly! You write her very domestic in this story. It's interesting, because I always pictured her as more headstrong and bossy, but I guess love will do funny things to you. Good job.
Author's Response: the domestic Arts are very technical and practiced and precise and that is why Hermione in cannon would be proficient at them.
This Post-Hogwarts fic focuses on Ron and Hermione’s ‘budding’ relationship while the four friends attempt to solve a mystery in a club called ‘Boundaries’. Will the boundaries that Ron and Hermione have barricaded themselves behind survive the ‘knock, knock’ of true love attempting to beat them down?
This fic is the sequel to Internal Battles also by Emily Jayne.
This story is now complete.
Oh my gosh! Poor Hermione. Stalkery types are really scary, probablly even more so when they're magical. And now she and Ginny are in trouble! Hopefully it's just the boys. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: prpbablly even more so when they're majic...that is a profound statement
Good chapter, but you made a pretty funny mistake in the second paragraph. You said that Ginny was chewing on Harry for scaring her, but I'm pretty sure you mean chewing out. Alex is here isn't he? I bet he's behind all this.
Author's Response: i am an american...you are picky