07/15/07
Hello! I'm basically just your typical HP fan, who became so addicted to the books that I turned to fanfiction. I don't write often, but I might try and get a new story up soon. I do adore reading and reviewing other authors stories though. And I'm always up for beta-ing!
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Battling Boundaries by EmilyJayne
Rated: Professors •Summary: Reuniting after a ‘friendship hiatus’, Harry, Ron, Ginny, and Hermione are entangled once again in a mystery that involves an ex-lover, disappearing girls, and a mysterious, magical potion causing all sorts of problems.
This Post-Hogwarts fic focuses on Ron and Hermione’s ‘budding’ relationship while the four friends attempt to solve a mystery in a club called ‘Boundaries’. Will the boundaries that Ron and Hermione have barricaded themselves behind survive the ‘knock, knock’ of true love attempting to beat them down?
This fic is the sequel to Internal Battles also by Emily Jayne.
This story is now complete.
Date: 07/26/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Another good chapter, but you made some basic mistakes that took away slightly from your otherwise impressive writing. Bass as in bass drum is spelled bass, not base; at another point you used there when you meant their, and you also said that Hermione was tired from missing drinks, not mixing them. The last paragraph is sooooo adorable by the way.
Author's Response: are you a beat? I hope not other wise there are probabally soem really good stories not getting published on this 'just for fun-non-profit-non-competitive-entertainment site'
Date: 07/26/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Uh oh! Not good not good! He deffinitely has something to do with it, and Hermione deffinately should have told Ron and Harry and Kingsley, because it is probably very important to the case.
Author's Response: :-)
Date: 07/26/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
The special? Hmmm, I bet I can guess what that is! And there's a special place to go? Well now, they almost have that entire mystery wrapped up. Snap out of it Hermione! Stop paying so much attention to Ron and realize you know what's going on!
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Date: 07/26/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Oh my gosh! It really wasn't that smart of her to take out her earpiece like that, now was it. This story is so incredibly suspenceful, I cannot wait to read the next chapter! And you keep leaving us with such mean cliffies!
Author's Response: :-)
Date: 07/26/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Yay! What a great birthday present. I really liked this chapter. Harry's line about Ron having to learn to dress himself was totally something I could picture him saying and sooooooo funny.
Author's Response: :-)
Date: 07/26/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I am really hoping that that is Ron and not Krum or Alex. After working so hard on the case, that is really the last thing that Hermione deserves. It was good that you threw Krum into the mix again, it'll spice up the plot.
Author's Response: :)
Date: 07/24/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
They broke up? That seems like a very Ron and Hermione thing to do. I always kind of pictured their relationship as being fairly off and on for the first year or so, expecially if there were big decisions to be made. And a long distance relationship would certainly be difficult for the two of them to manage.
Author's Response: You are quite the cirtique
Date: 07/26/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Haha, I'm sure Hermione guessed that was coming. I laughed at Ginny's take on going to Hermione's birthday dinner. I totally feel like that all the time, and no one else in my family gets it, either being male or drop dead gorgeous to start with. I'm a little bit jealous of my mother. Does it show?
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Date: 07/26/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Yay! This story was infinately better than the first one you wrote. Your writing has improved, and the plot was more interesting. I liked the mystery they were trying to solve, and I'm glad the story didn't just end when they wrapped it up. I also liked how you would sometimes start the next chapter with the last couple paragraphs from the previous one. It was a nice way to segway and remind the reader what had just happened.
Author's Response: :-)
Date: 07/24/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I think of all of the chapters that I have read that you have written, this is by far my favorite. It is just so incredibly Ron and Hermione; neither are out of canon and it is a long drawn out fight over the two of them being prideful. Absolutely perfect!
Author's Response: wow, you really said something nice just then!
Date: 07/24/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I deffinately like this story better than the first one. It is so much more natural, and I like that the Harry/Ginny relationship is back. It occupies Harry's time better and makes him seem more canon as well.
Author's Response: i know
Prisoner of the Past by ThessalyRose
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Theresa McGonagall returns from twelve years of self-imposed exile to find that nothing has changed: the Ministry still suspects her, Minerva still blames her, and Severus still wants more than she’s willing to give. Then Sirius Black breaks out of Azkaban, and even the Boy Who Lived may not be able to rescue her from the mistakes of her past.
This is the story of Prisoner of Azkaban with only one character added. Packed with action, drama, and a touch of humor, this story is for fans of Sirius Black and Severus Snape.
Date: 09/06/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 -- Inhalus
OMG he doesn't remember her?!?!?! That's so upsetting!
Date: 09/06/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 -- Help is Always Given
Haha, I didn't mean that I liked the parts from the third book the best, I just meant that you don't go completely AU, and just forget about everything. By putting the little things in it just feels like this is part of the third book that we didn't get to read.
Date: 09/06/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 -- Guilty Conscience
Ooooh, that's just so sweet!
Date: 09/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 -- Unforgivable
I really like this. It doesn't actually seem AU at all, or extra character, I don't really know what the classification is.
Author's Response: I\'ve had trouble classifying it, too. I wish there was a category for canon-period fics that center on the adult characters. I\'m glad you enjoyed it, though!
Date: 09/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 -- Fugitives
Oh, I'm glad Snape has friends. I've always had a soft spot for him, even before DH came out. All my friends thought I was nuts, but I guess I was right eh?
Date: 09/06/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 -- Absolutely Bloody Insane
He is a bit rash isn't he? Stupid of him, he knows she loves him.
Author's Response: After considerable thinking about it, I concluded that spending 12 years in Azkaban, where he was not permitted to feel any emotions, left Sirius unable to control himself once he could feel them again. Besides, he always was pretty stupid when it came to Theresa and Severus.
Date: 09/05/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 -- Lost Dog
I love this fic! It just makes so much sense. I've never understood how Sirius couldn't have a significant other, considering that J.K. always said he'd been a lady killer at Hogwarts. You're story just makes sense, you know?
Date: 09/05/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 -- Theresa Black
I love, love, love how you incorporate the book into your story. It's like AU but not. I think we've totally already had this discusion, but I just had to say it again.
Author's Response: I find it amusing that I go to all this trouble to write original stuff, and everybody\'s favorite passage is the one that\'s 85% plagiarized from the book. Lol. Really, though, thanks for the kudos.
Shades of Black by Striped Candycane
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The three Black sisters are very different. But once a week, for a brief moment, they become very much the same...Pre-Hogwarts.
Date: 11/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I love this! I nearly always forget Andromeda is a Black, she seems far more like a Weasley. I like how you wrote her actually as a Black, with a Black persona, although still slightly less than that of Bellatrix. Very well done.
Author's Response: It’s very interesting that you think of her more as a Weasley, because I never thought of her that way…definitely food for thought.
I’m glad you liked the one-shot though!