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07/15/07




Hello! I'm basically just your typical HP fan, who became so addicted to the books that I turned to fanfiction. I don't write often, but I might try and get a new story up soon. I do adore reading and reviewing other authors stories though. And I'm always up for beta-ing!


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Kissing Harry by Kerichi

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:


A kiss is not just a kiss. After a disastrous Valentine's date with Cho, Harry finds himself alone with Luna and discovers what a kiss should be. Humour and Romance in a story that started with canon and went What If?

 


Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 11/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Kissing Harry

Oh my God! Luna is my third favorite character, right after the Weasley twins. And this story is so her! I love it!

Author's Response: Hey, thank you for reading this! I get a little melancholy, thinking of how Luna would have brought childlike joy and imagination back into Harry\'s life, but oh well, I\'m glad Jo at least gave her a husband who loves Snorkacks!



Skeletons in the Closet by Merlynne

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Centered around Draco Malfoy seven years after the Last Battle and his graduation from Hogwarts. He is working for the Order of the Phoenix and finds himself feeling out of place and more than a little useless. He cannot escape the things he's done or the people he used to care for. As Draco attempts to turn a new page, he is introduced to a witch who will have considerable impact on him. Contains some romance, ships too numerous to mention all of--Draco/OC, Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione for starters.





Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Oh, so hooked. Plus I'm a huge Draco fan, I always knew he was alright, deep down. I'm so glad Jo didn't kill him off. I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters!

Author's Response: I was also thrilled when he wasn\'t killed off. It made my story less AU. I\'m glad you\'re hooked. I hope you enjoy the rest, and thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 11/23/07 Title: Chapter 22: The Warning

Oh good Meleia's back. She's nice, I like her. Tracey apparently isn't all that clued in though.



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 12/28/07 Title: Chapter 26: Pieces

Wow that is quite an ending. Are you going to write a sequel? I can't believe it's over, you've had this story going for quite a while, and it's so good! By the way, it doesn't say that the story is completed on the little blurb thing that gives the story summary. I don't know if you're going to have an epilogue or not, but if you aren't than you might want to change that.

Author's Response: since the queue\'s closed, I can\'t edit the status just as of yet, but as soon as I can, It will be marked as complete. I AM planning sequels, but those bunnies are still in their infancy. Thanks for following through! <3



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Draco

Haha, that's a bit of a slap in the face, even for Draco. I like how you don't put in exactly how the last battle went down, keeps it from making your story AU.

Author's Response: That was my goal, even though events STILL don\'t exactly line up, I hope it\'s enough from turning people off reading just because I unfortunately started this before DH. Thanks for the review!!



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 09/16/07 Title: Chapter 8: Lucius

Wow, that's quite a family history Meleia has. And I absolutely ADORE (I wish I knew how to use itallics on here) this sentence: The man who had been at Draco’s back his entire life would never be able to put a knife there again. It's just so discriptive and a very cool play with words.

Author's Response: I\'m really glad you liked that. I\'m happy to see someone who enjoys the arrangements of words in a sentence as much as I do. :) Thank you for the review!



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 09/22/07 Title: Chapter 16: The Black Letter

Oh poor Draco, like he needs something else to bring him down. And why on earth is Meleia leaving? As if she won't be a liability no matter where she goes. It's not as if the Order is just going to give up on her, now they have to play babysitter.



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Pansy

Oh poor Pansy. It makes me sad, even when the bad people die. And she died in child birth, not even doing anything wrong. Meleia isn't very nice attacking a pregnant woman.



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 11/25/07 Title: Chapter 23: Dinner

This chapter sounds so ominous. What's going to happen to the unborn little girl? And why did Meleia have that dream? Although thank goodness Meleia and Draco finally got together. I hope it stays that way.

Author's Response: I\'m thinking of incorporating the little girl into another fic, actually. Hopefully your other questions will be answered by the next chapter! Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 12/17/07 Title: Chapter 25: Memories

Yay! I'm so glad she rescued him, he really needs rescuing sometimes. They're so cute together, and at the same time extremely codependent.



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 09/15/07 Title: Chapter 7: Neville

Neville?!?! Oh, that's so sad. He was one of my favorites, he grew up so well in the books. I can't even tell you how proud I was when he killed Nagini. It's a small detail but I really like how you gave Hermione and Ginny hyphonated last names. So few authors do, and I feel like neither of them would just settle for taking Harry and Ron's name. It always feels out of character when they do.

Author's Response: I\'m pretty sure Hermione would at least keep her last name. She strikes me as that sort of a girl. I\'m glad you liked that. Yeah, when I read the last book I felt kind of mean for having killed Neville. But it was a decently heroic death.



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 09/16/07 Title: Chapter 9: Loredana

Oh chivalrous alcaholics. Gotta love 'em.



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 11/22/07 Title: Chapter 20: Ten Days

YAY! It's back! Part 3! Can you tell how excited I am? I figured the exclamation points might be a hint.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you\'re excited :) Thanks for following.



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 09/16/07 Title: Chapter 10: The Trials

Well it's deffinitely becoming more angsty now. At first it almost seemed Draco/OC plus a drinking problem, but hey, who says people in love don't drink?



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 09/13/07 Title: Chapter 6: Viorel

Ooooh family drama. You write absolutely amazing original characters. They aren't just characatures like some authors, even the ones you don't fully have time to develop.

Author's Response: *blushes* thank you very much



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 09/21/07 Title: Chapter 14: Open Eyes

That's so creepy. Anderson sounds nearly like a second Voldemort, or at least a Voldemort-in-training. And I'm very glad you enjoy the reviews, its the best way I know of for saying thank you for the marvelously creative story you've written.



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 09/23/07 Title: Chapter 17: Family

Oh no what's going to happen to Blaise? At least he wasn't the one who broke the mirror, Draco is really going to have a time of it now. But he finally has Meleia! At least that's lucky.



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 09/23/07 Title: Chapter 18: Bottled Death

Guess that mirror caught up with him. I hope Ginny is okay, she really wasn't supposed to have gotten tangled up in all that.



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 11/22/07 Title: Chapter 21: Falling Out

Wow. Poor Draco having to figure out what to do now. It's not like he can tell the Order considering he doesn't remember where headquarters are. Although he completely deserved that. Except it was very good of him to not give up the headquarters at least.



Reviewer: lovely_witch Signed
Date: 09/21/07 Title: Chapter 15: The Dark Mark

Psycho much? At least he doesn't think he's invincible, that's when the real crazy starts. I felt so sorry for Tania! Your writing is amazing, it made me mourn Tania who's a character I don't even know, and detest Hannah Abbot, who I normally don't mind. Plus the part about Millicent Bulstrode made me laugh soooo hard.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I\'m glad you enjoyed the Millicent Bulstrode part. Everything needs a little humour now and then. Cheers.