04/02/05
http://www.geocities.com/mephit85/
I'm a college student, wanna-be writer, and carnie (during the summer, anyway). Next year I'll be going into my sophomore year at Binghamton University, majoring in English.
I write fanfiction to give myself a break from my more serious work, but I do put a lot of effort into my fics, so if you enjoyed one, please leave a review.
EDIT: All of my stories are now AU. I will be finishing them; however, be warned, they will not take into account the events of HBP. Please do not flame me about this; I will ignore anyone who does.
EDIT NUMBER TWO: Due to an unfortunate application of lemonade, my laptop no longer has a functioning moniter, and it might be a while before I can get it fixed. I've updated "Homecoming," but everything else is going to have to wait.
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Harry Potter and the Curse of the Damned by Melindaleo
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Seventh year sequel to Power of Emotion. Harry is recovering from his captivity, but he’s hiding how much it’s effecting him. With his powers increasing, and Voldemort now aware of the prophecy, can Harry find the secret to destroying him before Voldemort learns of the existence of these ancient texts? Would this be HP fanfiction if it were that easy?
Date: 04/28/05 Title: Chapter 1: Alone Again
I think that was your best chapter so far. You have such a delicate touch with the characters--I can just see Percy showing up at the funeral and expecting everyone to abandon Harry, just as I can see then all telling him off. That was very satisfying, by the way. I love that Harry finally managed to talk to Mrs. Weasley, but you can still tell that the hurt hasn't really gone away with the way he snaps at Dumbledore. I especially like the dynamics with Fudge, and I can't wait to see how he'll react to Harry once Voldemort's gone. Knowing Harry, it won't be anything like what Fudge expects. Anyway, I guess I'm just trying to say--great job.
Date: 05/02/05 Title: Chapter 14: Calm Before the Storm
Now, that was just not fair. I love the way you write Hermione. It's so obvious that she's tearing her hair out trying to help Harry, and she's only making everything worse.
Date: 05/04/05 Title: Chapter 16: Riddle...Tom Riddle
I love this chapter. Great job...Although Ron and Hermione are driving me up a wall.
Date: 04/27/05 Title: Chapter 10: Loss of a Brother
*cries* That was so sad. Wonderful, but so very sad. God, if this is Harry's summer vacation, I can't imagine what Hogwarts will be like for him...
Date: 04/03/05 Title: None
That was HYSTERICAL. I especially liked this line: Harry shook his head, trying to make sense of this new information. “So you founded a secret Harry Potter fan club and were thrown out because you wouldn’t steal my underwear?” I can just imagine him saying that in a completely bemused manner...nice job.
A Bond Unbroken by Emmeline Vance
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Remus saw Harry’s pain. He saw it from the moment the boy, or rather, man, walked through the door. He wished he could do something to dull the anguish in Harry’s eyes. But that seemed difficult while he was still dealing with his own hurt.
Date: 04/22/05 Title: None
wow. I love hearing about things from Petunia's POV--it's so rarely done, and so hard to do well. Wonderful job. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 04/28/05 Title: None
YAY! First review!
I really like the way this is written. It's just how I would imagine the world after Voldemort's defeat, and I like that you've gone to the trouble of actually creating an American school instead of just dragging the Americans into Hogwarts. I am curious as to why Harry, Ron, and Hermione are all living together, though, considering that they're all in their mid-twenties by now. Maybe you could go into a bit of detail on that at some point?
Altogether a good job. 10/10.
Author's Response: thank you for a really nice review! :)
Don't worry, I amgoing to explain much more about Harry's whole situation in chapter four. But thanks again!
Date: 04/19/05 Title: None
...Poor Harry. I can just imagine him reacting to that situation like that.
I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: thank you! I've written about a fourth of chapter three, but I'm going to work on it more tonight. I'm so glad I got another review!
Life Happens by ColorOfAngels
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary:
This is the story of Harry J. Potter and Ginny M. Weasley, their lives, friendships, realtionships and everything in between. Life doesn't always take the road they expect or want, but they soon learn that no matter what they do or how hard they try, the world stops for no man and that simply put, Life Happens.
Primarily Harry/Ginny but with Ron/Hermione background. Picks up after the end of book 5 and continues into Post-Hogwarts.
UPDATED 4/25
Date: 04/15/05 Title: Chapter 2: Responses
That's so sad--wonderful, but so sad. You have amazing imagery in both chapters, and I can't wait for the next one.
Great job.
Author's Response: thanks for the great review! ive alredy started the next chapter and its kinda sad too(hint hint)....but after that the mood should start to pick up.....
Date: 04/17/05 Title: None
That was really great. I love these missing moment fics, and I think you did a wonderful job of getting inside Lavendar's head.
I would really love to see your take on the other characters' first impressions of Harry.
Author's Response: Thanks! I also think it would be interesting to explore who was thinking what when Harry arrived... glad you think so too!
Something Worth Fighting For by Berylla Chubb
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Year 7--A little harmless teasing turns into something more when Harry catches Ginny in his dorm room...
Date: 05/24/05 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot
Awww...fluffiness. In a good way.
*snickers* poor Harry...
Author's Response: Yeah...what's fanfiction without a little fluff, eh?
Private Universe by AJRoald
Rated: Professors •Summary: Companion story to ‘Into Temptation’. What would Rita Skeeter say if she knew what was taking place at Ginny Weasley’s London flat? And with a werewolf no less! A steamy look into the romance of Remus Lupin and Ginny Weasley.
Date: 07/06/05 Title: Chapter 1: Private Universe
Yow!
That was wonderful. It's hard to imagine pulling off this particular scene with anything resembling classiness, but you certainly did it.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! This was a really hard story to write because of that very issue. I'm glad you enjoyed it.