Hey there people,
I hope you're all having a great day. I officially submitted my SECOND fic a while ago so I'm asking anyone out there reading this to please give my writing a go and read what I've written... oh, and PLEASE review!!
I now have over 1000 hits for my first story, Beautiful Disaster, which I love to bits! I'm so proud of that fic and it thrills me that so many people have read it! (if only just as many had reviewed!)
My lastest fic, Addicted, has over 200 hits so I'm rather excited about that too... although I would have liked more than ONE review... but that's life.
Anyway, I love constructive criticism so to anyone who gives me some of that I will be incredibly grateful.
I hope you enjoy my stuff but it's fine if you don't. everyone has different tastes and opinions and nobody can change that.
Hope you weren't put to sleep by my ramblings.
xx
oooh, i likes this! very well written and with a very good plotline too. could be taken so many places in so many ways. a lot of your other reviewers seemed to think that hermione getting drunk was way ooc but i don't think it was. everyone has limits and when those limits are broken people do strange things. it's understandable.
anyways, can't wait for more... update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the positive comments! I appreciate that you like my writing! Mugglenet isn't responding to the next chapter though, so I'm crazed right now, but I promise it'll go up soon!
OMG, I can't believe that's it!! I want more!!!!! How much longer til you get back from vacation?????
In the first chappie, when Hermione has that dream, is it just a dream or is it a vision of what will happen in the future? Coz that's the way it's looking. I dunno, maybe it's just me.
Anyways, I can't wait til you update. You're officially the first person on my favourites list. Well done! =)
~ ice witch ~
Author's Response: THANK YOU!! Thats sooo sweet!! You have no idea how much I appreciate reviews and readers like you!! I am officialy back from vacation, and my 8th chapter should be up any day now!! Well..as for the 'dream'...You'll just have to see :-D Thanks again, keep it up!! :-D
Love,
'm0on
interesting...
can't wait to see what happens next. please don't make one of them die. that would be tragic.
wonderful story still. update soon.
Author's Response: Hehe :-D Thanks, the next chapter is in queue.
oooh... dun dun dun! what's happening? where's harry? okay, i realise you probably aren't likely to answer in an authors response but it'd be great if you could update again soon so i could find out. this fic has heaps of potential. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: ohmigosh! Thanks a million!! :-D That was so nice of you!
this story has a lot of great potential. i might suggest getting a beta just to fix up a few spelling and grammar mistakes which can sometimes take away from the overall effect. however, it is still very well done and i can't wait for more. update soon.
Author's Response: I have a couple betas, but I can't seem to find their email addresses...
wow... this story is fantastic! can't wait for more. is it eventually going to be hermione/draco or not? i reckon it could work either way. you have a real sense of what you are writing. it's all done brilliantly and you have some great plotlines going on. update soon
Wow! This story is so moving and dark. You have a way with words that is just incredible. I'm completely hooked on this. The pain Hermione is going through and all her emotions are portrayed so believably that it almost hurts to read but i simply cannot stop. This is writing at its finest and I cannot wait for more.
wow... that was... wow... you write with such...??... i don't know what... but somehow it just gets into my skin... that was powerfully moving and oh so sad. well done.
oooh, very nicely done... this has the potential to go so many places.
can't wait for more. =)
Author's Response: I know! You would not believe how many ideas I've had for this story. Am submitting the next chapter today (29/5)