Name: mrs bookworm malfoy (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 21:54 · For: Gate-Crasher

YOU SCARED ME AT THE END!!!!!! I THOUGHT SHE HAD DIED!!!!!! DON'T YOU EVER DO THAT AGAIN!!!!!!!! ~breating returns to normal~ okay, i'm good. loved it! keep writing and i'll keep reading.

Mrs Bookworm Malfoy

Name: anduril (Signed) · Date: 05/02/07 18:05 · For: Boom!

paragraphs?

Name: anduril (Signed) · Date: 05/02/07 18:03 · For: Prologue

you might want to consider dividing this up into paragraphs instead of writing it in one huge lump. It would make reading it easier as I was cross eyed after reading the first chapter. Good reading, though..

Name: grave_granger (Signed) · Date: 04/30/07 15:43 · For: Gate-Crasher

loved the whole story. great ending!!

Name: francine_dremn (Signed) · Date: 04/28/07 9:41 · For: Gate-Crasher

very good. but i think your pacing is a bit fast. but don't you think it's a bit of cliche to use the 'sleeping-beauty ending'?. it's just my point of view. no offense intended.=D

Name: francine_dremn (Signed) · Date: 04/27/07 4:50 · For: Fancy meeting you here

my eye hurt with this chapter..you should have broken it up..you know ENTER..

Name: VintageQueen0789 (Signed) · Date: 04/23/07 11:58 · For: Gate-Crasher

awesome! i love this story!..brilliant! oh and im from the states, New hampshire to be exact....not that you care, but yeah...!

Name: huffpuff94 (Signed) · Date: 03/16/07 14:44 · For: Prologue

Sorry but i think paragraphs would have helped

Name: chrissy_coo_coo (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 17:53 · For: Gate-Crasher

Great story! very entertaining! Keep up this amazing writing! Great plot scheme! Love this story!
-chrissy

Name: krazymonkey (Signed) · Date: 02/24/07 1:19 · For: Fancy meeting you here

ya, its good grl !!! but, it think u should break up the whole thing into paragrapahs, just so its easier 2 read...but u know, just saying

Name: gane (Signed) · Date: 02/03/07 14:34 · For: Fancy meeting you here

ha ha ha.... quite predictable!

Name: gane (Signed) · Date: 02/03/07 14:30 · For: Prologue

sounds good till here...

Name: Gypsy Eyes (Signed) · Date: 12/31/06 21:44 · For: Fancy meeting you here

You have a captivating righting style. It shows excellent sophistication and this story most certainly is original.

Name: Gypsy Eyes (Signed) · Date: 12/31/06 21:36 · For: Prologue

They story may be complete, but I'm going to review anyway. Wonderful beginning. It's a thick, eye-straining pharagraph. You should cut up into smaller pharagraphs.

Name: xGarggleSparkles (Signed) · Date: 12/24/06 20:14 · For: Prologue

Ever heard of paragraphs. This was so hard to read!

Name: ShaunaMo (Signed) · Date: 11/16/06 12:17 · For: Fancy meeting you here

I would love to read this but the format drives me crazy. I wish it was not writen as 1 huge paragraph

Name: hermionelover87 (Signed) · Date: 11/15/06 16:21 · For: Gate-Crasher

aww how cute!! its like sleeping beauty!!!!! well i have to say great story above all!!! and keep up the great work!!!=D

Name: hermionelover87 (Signed) · Date: 11/15/06 16:13 · For: Party Time

o my gosh

Name: hermionelover87 (Signed) · Date: 11/15/06 16:09 · For: Damn Potter

thats sad!! but that was nice what draco did for her!!!

Name: hermionelover87 (Signed) · Date: 11/15/06 16:04 · For: Hissing

dang tre harsh