Name: Rapid Reader (Signed) · Date: 12/21/06 16:04 · For: The Veil

This is pretty good!

Name: larrypetefred (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 23:57 · For: The Veil

boo

Name: Malika Potter (Signed) · Date: 12/13/06 14:51 · For: The Veil

I really like your poem!

Name: Skewper (Signed) · Date: 12/13/06 2:06 · For: The Veil

i am against drapery now i read OotP and i hate veils now but the way u decribed it was beautiful

Name: LovelyxLena (Anonymous) · Date: 12/11/06 13:22 · For: The Veil

I love short poems because the author always uses such pretty words.

Name: magic_child (Signed) · Date: 11/11/06 19:31 · For: The Veil

beautiful poem. Love it.

Name: crucioman24 (Signed) · Date: 10/28/06 12:18 · For: The Veil

wow, that is differnent

Name: sweetdevil (Signed) · Date: 10/21/06 15:25 · For: The Veil

Great! I love the way you describe the Veil, very beautiful wording and imagery. I love it.

Name: Dragon_Warrior (Signed) · Date: 10/19/06 14:58 · For: The Veil

I read your poem...really good! I like all the imagery (is that how you spell it?). Good poem!
*Dragon Warrior*

Name: EtherealElation (Signed) · Date: 10/16/06 20:36 · For: The Veil

Ooh... I like the sailing part a lot, made me thing of a ship's sail, and with a veil... Well, in short, this is amazingly beautiful. Wonderful poem!

~Juli

Name: _Dumbledores Girl_ (Anonymous) · Date: 10/13/06 18:26 · For: The Veil

nice poem!

Name: Triwizard (Signed) · Date: 10/03/06 11:22 · For: The Veil

Lovely.

Name: JewellPotterFan (Anonymous) · Date: 10/01/06 18:27 · For: The Veil

Wow............................
Found this poem in the Tens, it's very beautiful.

Name: Wise Owl (Signed) · Date: 09/06/06 0:58 · For: The Veil

very cute, i liked your first line especially.

Name: Belle_Rose (Signed) · Date: 09/01/06 21:26 · For: The Veil

Wow, that's very good.

Name: MidnightzStorm (Signed) · Date: 08/24/06 0:19 · For: The Veil

That was beautiful and spooky. :)

Name: Pruvnhtmn (Signed) · Date: 08/07/06 18:11 · For: The Veil

Interesting. No reference to the death that it supposed ly brings though.

Name: HarmonyHeadmisstress (Signed) · Date: 07/21/06 21:37 · For: The Veil

uh for a really short story u

Name: PotterFan22 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/18/06 0:16 · For: The Veil

Ooo! Okay, I know I just left a comment, but I wanna leave another one! hehehehe! You live in Australia!??! That is SUPER COOL!!!! That would be sooooo fun! And it's really cool that you're only 14 and writing this well! I'm 14 too but my writing talent is nowhere near as good as yours! Anyways, sorry for being weird! hehe!
~Chloe
p.s. I hate Geography also...i'm just no good at it. i hate it and it hates me...that's just how it goes. *stares darkly and dramatically at a geography text book...wait, why do i have one of those in my house?*

Name: PotterFan22 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/18/06 0:10 · For: The Veil

Amazing...TRULY amazing!!! This was a wonderful poem! Short but interesting! I loved it!!! 11/10~Woot! Of the scale!!! yesssss. GO YOU!!!